Vivo Por Elena                                               File 1: Episodes 1-50    UPDATED 10/19/03

 

Televisa, 4/6/98 - 9/11/98

Univision  7/13/98 - 12/30/98; rerun 7/28/2003 -  1/17/04

 

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DAYS 1-5

Day 1 - Well, it has started  Author: Ben    Date:   07-30-03 14:51 PDT

     Vivo Por Elena has started, the first episode was last night. We meet Elena, an apparently happy student with most of the males in her vicinity at her feet. We meet her rich boyfriend Ernesto, and Luis Pablo, the singer who would like to be her (less rich) boyfriend. We meet Pablo's girlfriend, who seems to not like Elena very much.

     We meet some of Elena's support group, the folks who live in the same neighborhood as she, we meet Don Fermín, we meet her sister, Chelo, who is working to help pay for Elena's education.

     And we meet Ernesto's mother, Rebeca, who also raised the orphan (and now judge) Juan Alberto, and we meet the rest of Juan Alberto's household, his wife Silvia, mother to Juanito, who seems to not take her marrige vows too seriously. We meet Simona, who was known in my first forum as 'Monkey Face'.

     And we see Silvia, in a frolic with her 'friend' Héctor , and later, we are not the only ones to see Héctor and Silvia in an unwise public display of affection. Juan Alberto takes exception, but is held back by several men, preventing more than a little mayhem to Héctor. We see Juan Alberto's outrage toward his wife, who makes a dramatic case for forgivness, but the Judge isn't in the forgiving business.

     Wonder of wonders, Elena makes it through the entire first episode without shedding a tear, but the teaser for tomorrow more than hints that the floodgates may open soon, as Ernesto's drugging of her drink (which she didn't seem to want very badly anyway) as she visits his appartment indicates that interesting times are ahead for her...

 

     Day 2, the tear ducts begin their workout!  Author: Ben    Date:   07-31-03 15:39 PDT

     Day two begins with a review of Silvia's groveling for forgiveness, without success. What is the old saying? "She has made her bed, let her lie in it" - well, I suspect she won't be lonely...

     Enersto's project continues, we see him 'help' Elena into a bedroom, and a few moments later we see her unconscious, and him fumbling with his trousers. (This boy has a wierd idea of the definition of 'foreplay').

     Chelo returns home from work, and is concerned at Elena's absence. Strangely, a picture of Elena of Elena breaks, are the psychic forces upset?

     Morning arrives, and Elena awakens. After a few moments of confusion, she realizes what has happened, and the tears begin. Enersto appears, looking like the cat who ate (or something) the canary. After some discussion (punctuated by Elena's repeated "I hate you"), she leaves, wandering around for a while feeling betrayed, soiled, and, understandably, depressed.

     We see Juan Alberto, at his desk, contemplating a crome plated 45 caliber automatic pistol. He puts it away as Adolfo enters, so we don't know if he was contemplating suicide or murder, at this moment either would be understandable.

     Aurorita reads a tarot deck with Chelo. Elena's name comes up, but I couldn't understand what was happening here. Later, Aurorita and Don Furmin are also studying a tarot layout. Anyone care to explain what was going on?

     Luis Pablo finds Elena on campus. He can tell she is upset over something, but she will not accept his concern.

     Meanwhile, Silvia is plotting her reinstatement as lady of the house. She has her lover go to Juan Alberto's office, where, were Adolfo not present to hold Juan Alberto back, further mayhem would have been committed upon him. He returns to Silvia with a report of failure.

     Ernesto spends the day looking for Elena, when he finds her, she repeats her vow of perpetual hate. She leaves, ultimately to return home, where she talks a bit to Chelo, who is all dressed up in her nurses outfit and about to go to work. Elena, still upset (of course), pretty much ignores Chelo and throws herself on her bed - more tears.

     We meet Talita, the Elena's younger sister - Elena isn't accepting her concern either.

     Silvia decides to take matters (and perhaps Juan Alberto) into her own hands, dolls herself up in her finest silk nothing, and goes to wait for Juan Alberto's return. (He is apparently spending the day with Adolfo, discussing with bartenders the fact the his wife doesn't understand him - or vice versa).

     We finaly see Chelo at work - not a hospital! She has replaced the nurses uniform with a few square inches of fabric (oh my, won't she get cold in that outfit? No, the heated looks from the fellows at the bar should keep her warm, the big ugly guy especially).

     And Juan Alberto arrives home, making his way unsteadly to his bedroom. He is about to fall into bed, when Silvia pounces...

 

Day 3 - love is gone, how about lust?  Author: Ben    Date:   08-01-03 21:07 PDT

     Juan Alberto returns home after an evening of drowning is problems at the local pub (too bad he can't just drown Silvia, but then the novela would be a lot shorter). He is a bit under the weather, so to speak, and is wobbling toward the bed when Silvia pounces. She strips of his shirt, and pushes him back onto the bed, where she starts to seriously molest him. I was quite surprised when Juan Alberto displayed some backbone, and pushed her away, jumped off of the bed, and showed her the door. She leaves, displaying a single event of crying that matches anything Elena can produce (but my money is still on Elena for endurance). Rebeca finds Silvia crying in the hallway, they go off together for some extreme ploting.

     Elena is confronted by Lumera, who wants Elena to keep her hands off of Luis Pablo. Elena admits to liking Luis Pablo, but is no threat to Lumera, who is having none of it...

     Ernesto waits for Elena at their parkbench/trysting place, but she doesn't show. He abuses some foliage...

     Luis Pablo, meanwhile, seems to have found a group of fellow spirits (what is the term for a group of mariachis? A decible of mariachis?)

     Ernesto writes a letter to Elena, gives it to Lalo for delivery.

     Silvia tearfully bids Juanito goodby.

     Lalo delivers the letter, Elena takes it home to read.

     (a pendulmum swings, I assume this means time is passing)

     Elena passes her oral exams. (more pendulum) We see Luis Pablo and the Decibles sing for Elena and her sisters, could they be celebrating Elena's graduation?

     A month or so passes...

     Elena seems to be job hunting, prospects seem to be as slim as IT openings in the Silicon Valley.

     Juanito has become a little monster, refusing to eat, jumping on the bed, screaming. Simone is outnumbered, turns to Rebeca ...

     Elena seems to be seeing a lot of Luis Pablo.

     Rebeca and Juan Alberto are talking about Juanito, Juan Alberto catches Juanito stalking Simone with a baseball bat (the kid is smarter than I thought), but only the table and his dinner gets hit. Juan Alberto turns to the picture of Silvia in his den for advice – is that an evil smile on the portrait?

     We see Elena having trouble getting past Juan Alberto's border guards. Juan Alberto comes out and sees here. “What's up?” he asks. (We hear Andrea Bocelli in the background - “Vivo por ella sin saber, si la encontré o me ha encontrado...”) They chat a bit on the front steps, he seems ready to chase her away when she shows him what appears to be a clipping – apparently Rebeca has been advertising for a Juanito keeper (Is this an apropriate job for a psychology graduate? Sure, and IT managers are selling paint at Sears.) Juan Alberto invites Elena inside, where he attempts to call Rebeca, but she is out and about, having tea with a friend where they can watch the scantily clad hunks at the local swimming pool, and not answering her phone. Without Rebeca, Juan Alberto is forced into doing the interview himself. He and Elena chat for a while, but it isn't looking too good. Elena leaves, but leaves a paper with her name and number. Juan Alberto takes it, folds it carefully, and places it in an ashtray by the phone...

     Chelo and Aurorita continue with the cards...

     Ernesto is in Miami, calls home. Rebeca is still out, so he leaves a message with Simone. Life in Miami seems good, judging by the sweet young thing nibbling on Ernesto's earlobe while he is on the phone.

     uan Alberto and Adolfo are at the judgeshop, discussing Juanito. At the same time, Elena and Chelo are discussing the interview, the problem child, the big house...

     Later, Aurorita and Elena are talking, Aurorita keeps mentioning Luis Pablo, Elena finally rolls her eyes...

     Ernesto calls again from Miami, this time he gets through to Rebeca. He mentions Juan Alberto, she indicates that he is asking for a lot of money, he responds that Juan Alberto has lots, she agrees to put the touch on Juan Alberto tomorrow. She hangs up the phone, notices Elena's note. She walks up the stairs, muttering "Who is this Elena Carvajal?“

     Juan Alberto is visiting Juanito's room, where the little devil is in bed. He leaves, going to his den wherer he turns to the protrait of Silvia for advice, remembering better days.

     At the tavern, the bartender informs Chelo that Don Francisco has been asking after her.

     And finaly, Elena and Luis Pablo are talking. He is telling her how much he cares for her, she is responding that she wants to only be a friend. He presses the issue, she remembers Ernesto, and how she felt awaking in his bed and how she is now 'unworthy', says no again. He says "Why?“, she says "I can't“...

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Day 4 - danger, danger, danger  Author: Ben    Date:   08-02-03 22:21 PDT

     Don Furmin has a visitor - it takes a long time for him to select wig, no, select cap, cover wigs, dance to door, open it for Aurorita. They chat for a while, Chelo comes up in the conversation, he remarks that he feels fatherly toward Chelo, Aurorita says he's not like a father, he smiles and says thank you, she then says 'more like grandfather' and leaves...

     Rebeca puts the touch on Juan Alberto, Ernesto needs money. Juan Alberto isn't too eager to comply. Rebeca remarks that without a mother around, Juanito needs a woman's touch, gets him to agree to hire someone (the kid needs a keeper, Clyde Beatty with whip and chair). Juan Alberto goes to his office, Adolfo arrives, talks to Rebeca a bit about Ernesto, asks to see Juanito, goes up to the kid's room, where Juanito is tearing up some paper, adding it to the pile on the floor (next to the inverted chair). It seems that Juanito is living in his bed. Aldofo wants to take Juanito out and play, gets baseball bat (hasn't he heard about Juanito's attack on the furniture). Juanito hides under the covers. Adolfo leaves.

     Elena and Chelo are doing the dishes, Elena says she wants to visit Chelo at the clinic. Chelo panics, says that she is way too busy to be interrupted at work. Elena leaves the room, Chelo goes to closet for a jacket, Elena's letter from Ernesto falls onto the floor, Chelo picks it up and starts to read... (Does Elena's secret trump Chelo's secret?)

     Elena is hanging up laundry, Luis Pablo comes by, they chat a while. He leaves, Don Furman arrives to hang up his 'delicates', wants to talk about Chelo.

     The neighborhood gang is at play - Oscar, Luis Pablo's younger brother (I think) is their playtoy. They chew him up a bit, spit him out. He escapes.

     Elena comes back inside, finds Chelo reading Ernesto's letter. Chelo asks about Ernesto, Elena says he is "Solo un amigo", Chelo looks doubtful (but at least the heat is off about the visit to the clinic). Chelo leaves the room, Elena goes into a monologue ending with "I can't, I can't, I can't" (can someone tell me what else she said here?)

     In the big house, Simone delivers a letter to Juan Alberto, from Silvia. He wads it up, tosses it, picks it up, starts to read, wads it up and tosses it again. Adolfo walks in, picks up the letter, hands it to Juan Alberto, who tells him that it is from Silvia. Adolfo tells Juan Alberto that without a mother, Juanito needs attention.

     Elena is walking in the neighborhood, is accosted by a local delinquent (Guero, I think). He seems to have the same goals as Ernesto, but is more physical, more direct. Luis Pablo comes by, defends Elena. Guero backs down, Elena and Luis Pablo leave together.

     Juan Alberto and Adolfo are leaving to the judgeshop, Juan Alberto remembers Adolfo's advice about Juanito, asks Simone to bring Juanito down. Juanito comes down, hugs his father, Juan Alberto talks to hime for 9.5 seconds (I timed it), pats him on the head and starts for the door. Adolfo says bye, Juanito follows, asks Juan Alberto where he is going, Juan Alberto says that he is going to someplace more important than Juanito (thats not what Juan Alberto said, but that is what Juanito heard).

     Elena and Chelo are eating lollypops, and chatting. They mention Talita, who, at this moment is walking home (from school, I assume). The gang is on the other side of the street, but they do notice her (the theme music from Jaws would be appropriate here)

     At the judgeshop, Adolfo brings in the mail, including a letter from "Ernestito" (Adolfo's words).

     Elena is helping Talita with her homework. Talita doesn't want to work on it. Elena insists...

     At the judgeshop, Rebeca calls just as Juan Alberto and Adolfo are preparing to leave. Adolfo asks what Ernesto wants, Juan Alberto replies "mucho dinero"

     Later that evening, Luis Pablo, all dolled up in his mariachi suit and carring his guitar, heads out. He must have a gig with the Decibles.

     Talita may have finished her homework, she has at least finished watching TV (her telenovela must be over for the evening). Elena asks about the homework, tries to block the door, Talita makes a break for it, escapes. Elena smiles, shakes her head.

     Talita and her small buddies spy on Don Fermin a bit, hit him up for a handout, and head off to the playground.

     At the big house, Juan Alberto is at Silvia's portrait, remembering her betrayal, or at leat when he caught her. Meanwhile, in New York, Silvia is preparing to go out, chatting with her roomie (I assume), She mentions her need for 'mucho dinero', the roomie mentions Juan Alberto, Silvia indicates that there is little chance. The doorbell rings, she leaves.

     The gang is lurking near the playground, stalking Talita. She goes to retrieve a wayward ball, and they pounce. She screams, but with four of them there can be two holding her down, one with a hand over her mouth, and one fumbling with his trousers (It looks bad for another of the Carvajal sisters). Oscar comes to her rescue - oops, now they have two victims. Guero, the thug that had been bothering ELena redeems himself by rescuing Talita and Oscar. They walk back to their apartments, both still freaking out over their close call. Elena calls Talita in, but leaves the room before Talita can tell her about the attack(Too bad, the attack keeps replaying in her mind)...

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Day 5 - a secret is exposed...  Author: Ben    Date:   08-05-03 23:30 PDT

     Sorry for the delay, I spent the day at the Linux World conferance in San Francisco. I came away with four tee shirts (the economy must be turning around, last year I only got two tee shirts there). Everyone that has anything to do with Linux was there (even Microsoft!), except SCO, but that is another soap opera. Do a google search for 'SCO' and 'IBM' for details. But on with the important stuff

     Juanito has a new toy, what appears to be a very large nerf bazooka. He may let Simona have it, but it won't hurt as much as the baseball bat. Unless, of course, he hits her over the head with it (we can always hope). However, as the scene opens, Juanito shoots Simona in the butt with the large red projectile (Yay! Good for you, kid).` Simona is chasing Juanito, and she breaks a vase. Hearing the crash, Juan Alberto and Adolfo come in to see what has gone down. Naturaly, she claims that it is all his fault, and Juan Alberto believes her version of the story instead of Juanito's. This is a disturbing characteristic of Juan Alberto that we will see a lot in the comming months - he will believe anyone saying anything bad about someone he is supposed to love. Is it the judge trying to show impartiality and overcompensating? Sorry, I'll get off my soapbox now. Adolfo is much more understanding. Juanito says that no one loves him. (He could be right).

     Elena and Don Furmin are talking about 'Chelito', He is a genuinly funny guy, and has Elena lauging.

     Luis is composing a song - at least, he is strumming a few notes on his guitar and writing something on a piece of paper. His mother comes in to talk. After a bit, she asks "whats happening with you and Elena?", she (mom) thinks she (Elena) is a 'good girl' (I think mom would like them to be a couple), but Luis Pablo thinks that Elena doesn't think a meer mariachi singer is worthy. (Sad how Luis Pablo and Elena misunderstand each other).

     Back at the judgeshop, Juan Alberto and Adolfo are talking. Adolfo thinks Simona framed Juanito, Juan Alberto isn't believing him. Here is a point where I really wish my Spanish was better, but it appears to me that Adolof then tells Juan Alberto that he wants to work for someone else. Can someone verify, or tell me what they were really saying?

     Back at the big house, Simona and Rebeca are lamenting the broken vase when Ernesto walks down the stairs. Rebeca tells Simona to go abuse Juanito, Simona leaves. Rebeca and Ernesto chat, she seems to be trying to get him to settle down. Juan Alberto's name comes up, Ernesto makes a dismissing gesture. About that time, Juan Alberto comes into the room, and suddenly Ernesto is the loving little brother, (big hugs). Ernesto then brags a bit about Miami and the ladies there. Juan Alberto says something disapproving and leaves, Ernesto then starts telling Rebeca what a jerk Juan Alberto is to try to tell him how to live, Rebeca tells him to stop talking. About that time, Juanito walks in. Ernesto leaves, and as he passes Juanito, he slaps Juanito upside the head, and leaves laughing. Juanito is trying to keep from crying, Rebeca is trying to be 'reasonable' with him, but he isn't having any. Juan ALberto comes in, Juanito perches on Juan Alberto's knee. Rebeca says something, Juan Alberto says "Mama, please", she leaves, muttering something as she marches up the stairs, Juan Alberto repeats "Mama, please". He then tries to de-fuse the Juanito situation, telling him that he (Juan Alberto) loves him (Juanito). Juanito seems to be able to see the contradiction between Juan Alberto's actions and his words, and when Juan Alberto says something to defend Simona, Juanito runs up the stairs, crying "You don't love me, you don't love me, ..." Juan Alberto says "Don't say that" and then calls out Juanito's name in a tone of voice guaranteed to speed the kid on his way.

     Talita and Oscar are talking, he is trying to parlay their shared fright of the gang attack into her becoming his girlfriend. She thinks they are a little young, he tries to kiss her, she shys away, they both break up laughing.

     Elena and Chelo are preparing dinner when Talita charges through the room. They laugh.

     We see Elena, through a cross shaped cut-out in what appears to be a vertical stone slab. She is placing flowers on the ground before the stone, and is looking sad and thoughtfull as she sort of caresses the ground. Sad music plays in the background.

     Chelo and Talita are at home, Talita asks Chelo for some help with her math homework. Chelo refers her to Elana (who is not available) because she (Chelo) is not good at math. Talita asks why didn't learn, Chelo says that there was no one to support her while she studied, someone has to keep the roof over their head while others study. Talita says "Like Elena?", Chelo says "yes". Talita changes the subject, asking if there is anything (anyone?) Chelo hates. Chelo says no, they bat that ball around a bit, leaving Talita looking thoughtfull (I think she wants 'permission' to hate the gang who attacked her, or at least the attack itself).

     Juan ALberto and Rebeca and Ernesto are having dinner. Rebeca says something about getting a tutor for Juanito, Ernesto says something that causes Juan Alberto to respond with a "You gotta be kidding!" look, Rebeca leaves, Ernesto tries once again to put a touch on Juan Alberto, Juan Alberto chases him away with a flood of outraged words.

     Meanwhile, back at the cemetery, Elena is arranging more flowers, when Guera comes up behind her and puts a hand on her shoulder, startling her ("Hi Princess"). She tries to walk away, he calls to her "Wait Princess", she tells him he is not her friend (still walking), he tries a couple more times (she keeps walking) and then he tells her about Talita's attack (sudden stop, he tells her more, she runs away).

     A bit later, we see the gang oggling a really nice car parked in front of Elena's place. Aurorita is visiting Chelo and Talita, helping Talita with her math homework. She answers a knock at the door. Rebeca comes in, asking for Elena Carvajal, they tell her Elena isn't there, Chelo tells her that she is Elena's sister. Rebeca asks them to have her come to see Juan Alberto Montiel tomorrow, early.

     We see Simona talking to Juanito in his room. He is caressing the nerf bazooka, she tells him something in an important voice, he says "lies, lies", she says more, he repeats, "Lies, lies". (I think the kid is learning the art of communication.)

     Rebeca has left, (hopefully the gang hasn't gotten her car stripped to the chassis yet), and Chelo and Aurorita are dancing around celebrating Elena's potential employment. Talita seems a bit put out that Elena will take care of another kid, but won't even listen to her when she wants to tell someone about her attack. Talita erupts, leaving the room, as Elena comes home. Aurorita and Chelo tell her about Rebeca's visit and the potential job, now they are all dancing.

     Talita and Elena finally talk, Chelo puts on her nurse suit and goes off to work, Talita bursts into tears, Elena takes her into her arms, and they finally talk it out. Now they are both crying (Talita's crying makes much more noise (sniff, sniff), where Elena is much more polished at it (lots of practice, I guess).

     We see Luis Pablo at a festival, he is in his maraichi suit, apparently he and the Decibles have just finished their set. Don Fermin comes by, he and Luis Pablo decide to finish off the evening together. Luis Pablo ditches the guitar and changes out of his formal gear, they have dinner at the festival.

     Elena ponders the Talita situation, talks to Aurorita about what they should do (she wants to get the police involved). Aurorita discourages that idea, they talk a bit about the possible job. Elena says "it is a very big house" and smiles.

     Juan Alberto is remembering some of the good times with Silvia (apparently, good times with Silvia don't involve much clothing. To quote a line from a Tom Lehrer song, The Wiener Schnitzel Waltz

...It was I who stepped on your dress, la l-la.

The skirts all came off, I confess, la l-la.

Revealing for all of the others to see

Just what it was that endeared you to me.. ). Ernesto interrupts (no wonder Juan Alberto seems to not like Ernesto, interrupting a good fantasy that way.

     Luis Pablo and Don Fermin are finishing dinner, they decide to go to Chelo's tavern (of course that isn't what they call it).

     Elena and Talita are talking before going to bed. I love Elena's pajamas, decorated with the cutest little teddy bears.

     Luis Pablo and Don Fermin arrive at the tavern, sit at a table near the dance floor (Don Fermin has to dance his way to the table, stoping to tell jokes to the other diners).

     Ernesto is visiting Lalo, Ernesto writes out a check for Lalo (I shudder to think what he is buying this time). The make some jokes about women in general, and of course, Elena's name comes up. At this moment, Elena is trying to get to sleep, but is remembering the rape. Lalo and Ernesto continue to joke about her.

     Meanwhile, back at the tavern, Luis Pablo and Don Fermin are in need of a refill, The boss barmaid tells Chelo to take care of the folks at table six.

     Elena, in the teddy bear pajamas, can't get to sleep. She gets up for a glass of water, ponders how she is a ruined woman.

     Chelo finaly works her way to the table - "May I take your order" - "Chelo!!!". Oops.

DAYS 6-10

 

    

Day 6 - the interview..  Author: Ben    Date:   08-07-03 00:13 PDT

     Luis Pablo and Don Fermin are at the tavern, Chelo comes up "May I take your order?" - oops, the secret is out! Chelo panics, runs away. to cry in the ladies room, a co-worker tells her that Don Francisco is asking after her. Luis Pablo and Don Fermin agree to keep her secret.

     Later, at their apartment, Elena is about to go for her job interview, very happy, and Chelo is very subdued. Elena leaves, Chelo goes to bed, crying.

     At the big house, Simona is looking for Juanito, one of the servants is not as helpful as Simona thinks she should be, so Simona explains the chain of command in that household, Rebeca, Silvia (from New York?) and Simona. She then tells the servant to snap to it, snaping her fingers for emphasys.

     Oscar waits for Talita on her way to school, they walk together. As they walk along, he makes inappropriate suggestions, backs her against a fence, blocking her with an arm on either side of her. He brakes free, runs away.

     Chelo goes over to Don Fernmin's place, to try to explain about being a cocktail waitress. She explains, he says he understands. She says that Elena and Talita think she works at a clinic, he will keep her secret (zipper motion across his lips).

     Elena arives at the big house, Simona is guarding the door. Elena asks for the lady of the house, or Señor Montiel, she is there about the niño. Elena tells Simona she is here to see Rebeca, Simona laughs, To show that Simona is really in charge, she pushes the servant around. She suggests that Elena leave, Elena says pardon me, but I came to see the niño, Simona shows her to Juanito's room, offers to roust the kid out, Elena says no, she will introduce herself. Simona leaves, after insuring that Elena knows her name is Simona.

     The suspence builds, as Ernesto is wandering around the house, talkint to Rebeca, talking to Juan Alberto, idling around the hall. Elena almost leaves Juanito's room while he is right outside, but she goes back to the kid, who asks who she is, She introduces herself, he decides that she can be ordered around and proceeds to show that he is boss. Elena stands her ground, he says he doesn't like women, he is a man. He then threatens to hit her with a pillow, she tells him that real men do not harm women.

     Rebeca finally comes downstairs, coffee in one hand, cigarette in the other. Simona tells her that Elena is upstaris with Juanito, and that the kid is really bossing her around (Simona was listening at the door). Simona seems very negative, Rebeca is more in favor of someone to take care of the kid.

     Elena and Juanito are finally talking reasonably, she tells him she would like to be his friend, he looks thoughtfull.

     Chelo is at home when Don Fermin comes over to visit. He has his his wig neatly combed and is carrying flowers. Oh oh, are there conditions to his secrecy? He has trouble getting around to what he wants to say. He finaly presents the flowers, asking if, perhaps, she might like him? She doesn't know what to say... Her tearfull reaction cools his ardor, he trys to smooth things over. She says she can't love anyone, he leaves the flowers in her water glass and leaves (looking over his shoulder a few times to see if she is weakening, but no, so he leaves.

     Juan Alberto and Adolfo are working in the home office, just down the hall from Juanito's room. They seem to be having a problem with a legal document.

     Elena is looking at some of Juanito's toys, she has an unfinished model airplane in her hand, she sees there is something wrong with it, sits at the table ans begins to fix it. Juanito comes over to help.

     Aurorita and Chelo are talking, Aurorita is all laughs, Chelo is depressed.

     Meanwhile, Elena and Juanito get the airplane fixed, they are staging a mock dogfight when Juan Alberto hears the noise and comes in. He is outraged, asks Elena who gave her permission to come into his house. Rebeca comes in, tells him that Elena is there by her invitation (Juanito comes around the table and holds Elena's hand). Rebeca and Juan Alberto argue.

     Simona is sneaking up the stairs, trying to hear what is going on when Adolfo come in, startling her (she about has a heart attack). He leaves, she pats her chest (git that ticker going again) and continues down the stairs.

     Rebeca and Juan Alberto continue to argue, he expected maybe a telephone call, not a person actually invading his domain. Rebeca outshouts him, he says fine, do what you want, and leaves. She asks Juanito if he likes Elena, he shows her that they are holding hands. Elena seems to be in agreement. Rebeca asks Junato to leave Elena for a moment, she wants to talk to Elena, he goes around behind Rebeca. As Rebeca talks, Juanito is making signs to Elena indicating that Rebeca is crazy. Elena maintains a straight face, Rebeca says she will go talks to Juan Alberto, she leaves. Elena and Juanito are all smiles.

     Juan Alberto and Adolfo are still trying to solve their legal problem, Juan Alberto is muttering about strange women in his house. Adolfo tells him that Juanito will be better off. Adolfo is enthusiastic. Rebeca comes in, says that she wants to hire Elena now...

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Day 7 - Joy, and devistation...  Author: Ben    Date:   08-07-03 19:26 PDT

     Rebeca is telling Juan Alberto that Elena is the one to help Juanito, Adolfo agrees. Juan Alberto is overwhelmed, he doesn't want a stranger comming into house (the folks that are already there are strange enough), he can no longer trust women, with his heart, or his son. But he is weakening.

     Meanwhile, back at the appartments Aurorita and Chelo are talking. (an aside, to show the scene change, we see the appartment building, just as a Chevrolet Citation drives by - but that is another horror story). Aurorita has stoped laughing and is giving serious advice. Meanwhile, Don Fermin is talking to himself in the mirror, adjusting his wig. Aurorita and Chelo continue their talk, Chelo finaly smiles. She asks Aurorita a qhestion, out come the tarot cards.

     Elena is getting acquainted when Simona comes in, she interrupts them with "Miss", Elena continues to listen to Juanito, "MISS"! She then delivers her message and leaves the room.

     Don Fermin has a visitor, Luis Pablo. He tells Luis Pablo about his affection toward Chelito, that he is trying to get her to see things his way. Luis Pablo smiles and wishes him luck

     Juan Alberto is in his office, there is a knock on the door. "Enter" - it is Elena. He invites her in, she sits in the chair in front of his desk. He tells her that his mother wants someone to take care of Juanito, but expresses his own doubts about Elena. She looks devistated, she is already quite fond of the kid. He tells her that he will pay her for the inconvenience of coming today, opens his checkbook. Elena tells him that his money is unimportant, what is important is Juanito, who needs her help. She delivers an argument that has the judge looking thoughtfull, but still unconvinced. Elena asks his forgivness for taking up his time, rises to leave, says goodby and starts for the door. Juan Alberto also rises, ask her another question, she says that what is important is Juanito, that Juanito needs attention. He vacilates the other way, offers her the job. She smiles and accepts.

     At the playground, Guero and a different gang (older, more sinister) are talking. Oscar and Talita are walking by, Guero runs out in front of them and stops them. They attempt to pass by, he grabs Talita by the arm and Oscar by the ear, asks Talita about Elena. Talita screams and runs away, followed closely by Oscar. The gang laughs at Guero, he throws a rock at them.

     Simona is on the stairway, leaning far over the railing to easedrop on Juan Alberto and Elena, she hears him accept her for the job, looks upset. Elena comes out of the office and goes up the stairs, passing Simona on her way up to Juanito. As she passes by, Elena turns and smiles at Simona, who ignores her, runs up to tell Rebeca. Simona is outraged that Elena will be interfering in her domination over Juanito (that isn't quite the way she expresses her concerns), but Rebeca is pleased, she says it is best for Juanito.

     Eleno tells Juanito that they will be very good friends. Juanito and Elena exchange a 'high five', well, in his case it is a 'medium short five'.

     Oscar tells Luis Pablo about Guero, Luis Pablo is too busy to talk to Oscar now, he has to go to the Decibles. Oscar goes to his mother, who is in bed, looking very sick.

     Simona is telling Elena how things will be, Elena tells her "No, on the contrary, I will be governing Juanito", Simona is not pleased. Elena is trying to be charming, but Simona's slime layer is thick enough that it doesn't soak through. Elena asks Simona how long she has been at the house, Simona tells her several years. Elena can understand that Simona considers her an intruder, but that Juanito will need Simona's help to, can Elena depend on Simona's cooperation? Simona grudgingly agrees. Elena smiles, offers to be Simona's friend, and leaves the room. Simona delivers an monologue to the empty room. I see trouble ahead.

     Rebeca goes to see Juan Alberto, she seems to be less pleased about Elena. He tells her that it is done, Miss Carvajal is in charge of Juanito. Later, Simona goes to Rebeca in her room to complain, Rebeca says that Juan Alberto has decided. Simona says that Juanito really needs Simona, Rebeca agrees. It appears that Rebeca suggest to Simona that she let Silvia know what is happening.

     Back at Luis Pablo's place, a doctor has been called for his mother.

     Chelo and Talita are wondering how things went with Elena when she arrives, Aurorita follows her in. Elena tells them that she has the job, all are excited. Elena tells them that she will be paid 6,000 pesos, all are really excited now, except Talita, who, I think, feels that Elena has abandoned her, for meer money.

     The doctor is examining Luis Pablo and Oscar's mother, Luis Pablo asks how she is, the doctor says it is very bad. Oscar is devistated.

     Juan Alberto is tucking Juanito into bed, adjusting the covers. He really does love the kid, he just doesn't know how to show it. He turns the light out and leaves, meating Simona in the halway with Juanito's warm milk, Juan Alberto tells him that it (she?) is not necessary.

     Juan alberto is looking at the picture of Silvia, remebering better, or at least hotter,

times.

     In New York, Silvia is getting a massage. She needs to keep all that skin that Juan Alberto has been fantasizing about in shape. Her roomie comes down the halway (she appears to be leaving with a man, she comes into the room, he remains in the hallway). The talk for a bit and Silvia bemoans the loss of Juan Alberto's money.

     Back at the apartment, Aurorito tells Elena about Luis Pablo's mother.

     And at that moment, the doctor is pulling the blanket over the mother's dead face. Luis Pablo is devistated. (There is a lot of devistation in this novela, isn't there) Oscar, meanwhile has joined Guero's gang, which seems to be preparing for some action.

     Luis Pablo is being consoled by Elena, Aurorita, and Don Fermin. The body is carried out which is a real downer for a get together that was already in the pits. All leave,

     Ernesto is throwing a party, back in his hi-rise apartment where he had his way with Elena. Rebeca is there, as is Lalo. Ernesto's date appears to be a tall blond, wearing something short and translucent. He invites her to see his chemistry set, they head down the hallway to 'the room where it happened'. He leaves Lalo in charge of entertaining his guests.

     Elena goes home, where Talita is waiting. She asks what has happened, Elena tells her. She asks about Oscar, ELena tells her that she doesn't know about Oscar. Talita steps close for a hug.

     Meanwhile, Oscar is being told by Aurorita. He is in shock (I don't want to use 'devistated' again, although it would be appropriate).

     At the judgeshop, Adolfo and Juan Alberto talk, Adolfo asks about Juanito,

     Rebeca and Simona are talking. Rather, Simona is pontificating about Elena, Simona is getting irritated, Simona could be undermining her own position here.

     Elena comes into Juanito's room, he is still in bed, and claims to be sick (perhaps too sick to do schoolworkl?), She tickles him to perfect health.

     Guero sympathisizes with Oscar,

     Chelo and Aurorita, Chelo is thinking abut the death of her mother.

     Juanito is now dressed, quite well for a kid his age. Apparently Elena the teacher demands her students to be well turned out. Elena is complementing his work on his Spanish workbook. They talk, Juanito mentions Silvia, Elena asks who she is, he says his mother. It sounds to me like Juanito then tells Elena that his father likes her a lot and would like Elena to stay in their house. (Is the kid matchmaking already?) Simona comes in, Juanito leaves (for school?). Actually, he just faked leaving, he is spying on them. Elena asks about Silvia, Simona tells her that Silvia is not here. She goes on to tell Elena about the virtues of Silvia, and that the golddigger Miss Elena has no chance with Juan Alberto, Never! She leaves, Elena chuckles (probably at this point she hasn't seen any reason other than Juanito why she might even want Juan Alberto).

     Juan Alberto and Adolfo are having lunch. Adolfo is trying to spread common sense over Juan Alberto's mutterings.

     Evening - Chelo is about to leave for the 'clinic', Talita is down, Chelo tickles her to full health (seems to be a common technique among the Carvajal sisters).

     Elena is leaving for the night, Juan Alberto is ariving home. They do a dance of each stepping out of the other's way by stepping the wrong way. Juan Alberto finally steps to the side and gestures her to proceed. They stand for a moment looking at one another, and while Andrea Boccelli and Martha Sanchez sing "Vivo Por Ella", they visualize the romance to come. Both smile, Juan Alberto's smile looks like someone hit him in the forehead with an axe.

     Alive by her without knowing if I've found her or she has found me.

     No longer memory, as it were but in the end she has conquered me.

     Alive by her, she who gives me all my force, really.

     Alive by her and she does not judge me...

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Day 8 - a mouse in the house  Author: Ben    Date:   08-08-03 22:08 PDT

     Elena and Juan Alberto meet in the hallway, as she is leaving for the night and he is arriving home. She steps to one side to allow him by, he steps to the same side. They pause, both step to the other side (we are getting nowhere here). He then gestures her to go on, she steps around him. They talk a moment about Juanito, she says "Until tomorrow", he offers to take her home, she says not to bother, thank you. A couple of "until tomorrow"s later, she leaves, he watches while she goes down the stairs.

     At the apartment, Talita is waiting for Elena, peeking through the window.

     Oscar is home, Luis Pablo is about to leave. He picks up a jacket, money falls out onto the floor. He looks in amazement at Oscar, Oscar looks guilty. Luis Pablo asks what is this, Oscar makes some vague statement, Luis Pablo delivers a lecture, then sits by Oscar

     Elena is walking home, Guero is waiting, springs out from behind a tree into her path, startling her. She turns away to leave, he stops her, and tries to give her a necklace, but she doesn't want his hands that close to her neck (I don't blame her), She continues home.

     When she gets there, Aurorita is watching over Talita (who has fallen asleep). Elena helps her to bed, Aurorita leaves. Elena writes the events of the day in her diary, making note of Simona's emnity.

     Juan Alberto is in bed, thinking about Elena

     Ernesto has another young lady, Adriana, at his apartment, he hands her a drink (which she doesn't want), but she does drink it. Strangely, she becomes sleepy (I wonder why). They neck a bit on the couch. (We see a candle burning down). They come up for air, talk a bit. She says "Do you like me?", he says "already, my love", they chat and kiss a bit longer, he encorages her to go further, she says "Sí, te quiero", they settle back onto the couch, the candle continues to burn.

     Guero is at the playground with his buddies (one of whome is a girl). They are a little big for the playground equipement, in that one of them is doing one-handed chinups, but we notice that his feet are firmly on the ground. Guero is lamenting his lack of success with Elena, the girl laughs at him. (These are the folk that Oscar was out with before he came back with the money that Luis Pablo found.)

     At the big house, Rebeca is entertaining a friend when Juanito runs through the house, Elena close behind. The guest repremands Juanito for running in the house, he says something smart-ass and heads up the stairs, Elena says "Juanito!" and Rebeca tells him to be quiet. The guest remarks that Juanito is a handfull, Elena says that he isn't much, and continues up the stairs, meeting Juan Alberto who asks if there is a problem. She says no, he tells her to go on, and he continues down to greet Rebeca's guest. He leaves, the guest asks about the stranger in the house, Rebeca tells her that Silvia is gone.

     Guero and his gang are hanging out when Talita and Oscar walk by. Guero steps out into their path - oh oh, he has a club! He tries to ask/tell Talita something about Elena, she runs away. He takes Oscar aside, they chat a bit. Oscar defies him and runs away, Guero beats up a stack of garbage.

     At the judgeshop, Adolfo asks Juan Alberto what's up, he says not much, but... Adolfo says "Silvia?", Juan Alberto says "No, Elena", he tells Adolfo that Elena is just a girl to take care of Juanito. Adolfo says that women are different, Juan Alberto shouldn't judge them all by Silvia, Juan Alberto pats him on the back as if in pity for Adolfo's inexperience.

     Back at the apartment, Chelo and Talita are talking about Elena, Talita is jealous that she gets so little of Elena's time. Later when Elena gets home for the evening, as Chelo is about to leave for the 'clinic', she tells Elena about Talita's insecurities. They talks for a while about Talita, and other things. Elena says something about "Ernesto Montero" and "death" - this would be a lot easier if I understood Spanish....

     Meanwhile, at the big house, Adolfo and Juan Alberto are unwinding after the days work, Ernesto comes in, in a good mood. Juanito comes into the room, looking sharp. Ernesto looks at him, says "Oh my God!" (in English). He is told that Juanito has someone to take care of him, Juanito says she is very pretty, Ernesto says "Pretty? Interesting..."

     Later, in his room, Juanito is carefully wrapping a small package. He carefully closes the lid, as if whatever is inside might jump out, and fastens a small bow and ribbon to it. He then hides it under his bed (after listening to be sure that whatever is inside is making appropriate sounds???) and goes to bed.

     Next morning, Simona comes in to wake him. She teases him about Elena, who is just arriving and meets Juan Alberto, who asks her how things are going, she tells him things are OK and goes on into the house. Upstairs, Simona is still irritating Juanito, he says something she doesn't like, and she is about to hit Juanito with his own shoe when Elena interrupts. Simona becomes all innocence, and leaves them. Juanito tells Elena he has a present for her, and gives it to her but won't let her open it until she guesses what is inside. It is not candy, it is not perfume... Finally, he lets her open it - she screams and drops it! The scream attracts attention, Simona come into the room, where Elena his holding her hands over her heart and shaking her head (trying to get her heart started again). Simona sees the box on the floor, shys away, Juan Alberto come in, wanting to know what the commotion is. Juanito is jumping on the foot of the bed, laughing and pointing at the box. Juan Alberto tells Simona to take it away (she doesn't want anything to do with it) and goes over to see if Elena is OK (she tells him she is). Simona won't touch it, so Juan Alberto attempts to pick it up, but whatever is in the box runs away. Juan Alberto corners it behind a chair and puts it carefully back into the box and gives it to Simona to take away. Juan Alberto is laughing, but then gets serious, asking Juanito why, and DEMANDING an answer (Elena looks concerned for Juanito). Rebeca sees Simona carrying the box down the hallway, holding it at arms length, with only her fingertips. She asks Simona what it is, Simona says (I think) it is a mouse. Rebeca is shocked that it might be in the house.

     Juan Alberto is still trying to bully an answer out of Juanito, when he won't answer Juan Alberto delivers a speech and leaves Juanito and Elena alone. Elena starts over to Juanito with a frown on her face, but by the time she gets there she is smiling. They exchange a high-five (a real one this time, as Juanito is still standing on the bed) and both laugh

     Then Elena proceeds to explain to Juanito that what he has done is wrong, he is looking downcast, but she is smiling and not angry, just explaining, teaching him proper behaviour. Finally, she asks him if they are still friends, he takes her hand, and she says "good".

     Oscar and Guero are talking, as friendly equals. Guero wants Oscar to help him win over Princess Elena, Oscar says he will do what he can and attempts to leave. Guero turns mean, tells Oscar to obey.

     Simona comes into Juanito's room, he tells her she is evil, and chases her out.

     Elena comes into Juan Alberto's den, they talk about Juanito. She speaks up quite strongly that he is just being a child, the Juan Alberto shouldn't be too hard on him. As they talk, Simona comes to the door, probably to complain about Juanito, but she easedrops on Elena and Juan Alberto for a bit and then leaves. Elena finally gets Juan Alberto to see things her way, she goes out of the room, leaving Juan Alberto shaking his head.

     Oscar and Talita are in the park, talking. He wants her help for Guero about Elena,

     At the judgeshop, Juan Alberto tells Adolfo about Juanito's box. Adolfo is amused, Juan Alberto isn't...

     Elena and Juanito are best buddies again, walking hand in hand down the upstairs hallway.

     Juan Alberto is having trouble working, as he sees Elena whenever he looks at one of his folders.

     Elena and Juanito are now downstairs, outside by the door. They talk a bit, Elena goes back inside, just as Ernesto drives up (close call, that). Ernesto slaps Juanito upside the head (he probably thinks that is affection, certainly there doesn't seem to be any malace, just stupidity in the action). Juanito runs inside, Ernisto tells him "tell her Ernesto wants to meet her". Juan Alberto comes out, asks Ernest what he just said, Ernesto said he was talking to Juanito. Juan Alberto invites him inside (hmm, both Elena and Ernesto are in the house at the same time - is the house big enough?)

     Elena is upstairs in Juanito's room when Juanito comes in. She seems surprised, asks him why, he says he has nothing.

     Juan Alberto and Ernesto are talking in the downstairs den, Ernesto leaves (both are still in the house - warning - warning - warning).

     Don Fermin is carefully spraying each leaf of the big rose bush when Lumara arrives in a taxi. He dumps the bucket of water on the bush and goes to attend the pretty lady... The taxi driver carries her suitcase for her, she goes to tip him, Don Fermin says no, allow me, and begins patting down his pockets to no avail, so she does tip the taxi driver. The chat a bit, he tells her about Luis Pablo's mother, she decides that Luis Pablo will need some consolation, and goes inside. Don Fermin says something about "Mamacita!" and walks into a birdcage hanging on the wall.

     Juanito is on his bed, Elena takes his hand and they leave the room on a tour of the house. He takes her into Rebeca's room, she asks if Rebeca is his grandmother, he says yes, but not really, rebeca is Juan Alberto's godmother. They leave to the next room, which is locked. Juanito tells her that it is the room of Rebeca's son, they proceed down to Juan Alberto's room. Simona comes charging in, throws her back against the door, and tells Elena that she will never NEVER go in there.

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     We still have Elena and Ernesto wandering the halls. It's getting pretty tense here.

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Day 9 - A rat in the house  Author: Ben    Date:   08-10-03 15:59 PDT

     Juanito is taking Elena on a tour of the house, He has shown her Rebeca's room, explaining that she is not really his grandmother, but Juan Alberto's godmother. They find Ernesto's room locked, she asks if it is the room of Juan Alberto's brother, he tells her no, that it is the room of Rebeca's son. They progress to the next room, and before they can enter, Simona comes charging in, throwing her back against the door, telling Elena that she will never NEVER go in there, that only Silvia can go there, understand? "La Señora Silvia". As Elena and Juanito start to walk away, Simona heaps further abuse, Juanito says something insulting to her ("Simona quiere demona"), Elena says "Juanito!", Simona starts in on Juanito, Elena turns to her, saying "Please, Simona, that is enough", in a voice with enough authority to leave Simona temporarily speechless.

     Lumara enters Luis Pablo's room, tells him she has heard about his mother, and is so sorry, he is almost not listening, he is so depressed, but he does respond with a thank you, she goes behind him and massages his shoulders for a second, kisses his temple, and leaves. She goes to Aurorita's room, where Aurorita makes a big fuss over her.

     Simona is never speechless for long, when Elena asks her what is her problem, she says "El niño, el niño, odioso el niño", Juanito calls her a devil lover again (it rhymes nicely in Spanish), Simona storms off, Elena repremands him, tells him he shouldn't say such things, Simona is an important person in the house, not satanic. He replies that Elena doesn't know this house.

     Juanito comes into Juan Alberto's room. They talk a bit, Juan Alberto seems upset about Juanito's behavior, Juanito is contrite. Juan Alberto is sitting on the edge of the bed, Juanito wants to get on it with him, he sighs, allows him up. (Juan Alberto never seems to touch Juanito, he is non-demonstrative to such a point that the kid has no idea how much Juan Alberto loves him, if at all).

     Aurorita gets her crystal ball and tarot cards, Lumara is in for the full treatment, She picks up a card "I see a man". Lumara says "Is it Luis Pablo", Aurorita replies "No, I don't think so, this is a bad man". Lumara says she loves Luis Pablo, but he loves that "idiot, Elena". Aurorita tells her that Elena is a good girl, and no threat to Lumara. Lumara doesn't hear that part.

     Juan Alberto is about to leave the house, stops at Silvia's picture for a moment, then goes downstairs, He winds up at Adolfo's place, where Adolfo is on the phone. When he finishes, he offers Juan Alberto a seat. Juan Alberto is troubled, has come over for advice/therapy.

     Rebeca is in her room, Ernesto comes in asking about Juanito and his new teacher. He says that Juanito says she is very beautiful, but that she is probably fat and ugly. Rebeca give him a look. He tells her that is what Simona told him. They chat a bit more, he leaves. She shakes her head, says "Fat and ugly...", shakes her head again.

     Luis Pablo comes over to see Elena, he doesn't want to bother her, she says he is no trouble. He asks if she is alone, she says that Talita is sleeping. He goes over to the couch, she offers him coffee. He explains that he is depressed over his mom, Elena suggests that he get professional help, he should go to the clinic, but he doesn't want to go to Chelo's clinic (of course not, he has been there already).

     Juan Alberto and Adolfo continue, Juan Alberto is telling him that he can't get Silvia out of his mind. Adolfo tells hime to find another woman, one that can love him, unlike Silvia. Juan Alberto says no, no, he doesn't want another.

     At the tavern, Chelo and another barmaid are at the bar, taking a break. The bartender tells them to look busy, here comes the boss. The boss wants to 'encorage' Chelo to be more 'friendly' with Don Francisco. She tries to refuse, he pushes, she resists. (This looks like a career limiting situation, but then, does she really want this career?)

     Rebeca comes into Juan Alberto's room, complaining that Ernesto is saying that Elena is fat and ugly, who told him that? Juan Alberto shakes his head...

     Elena and Luis Pablo continue talking, they are on the couch, but at opposite ends. Lumara walks in on them, explodes. Luis Pablo tells her there is nothing going on, Elena tells her to get out of her house. Lumara grabs Luis Pablo's arm and drags him out of there. The commotion wakes Talita, who comes in asking what is going on. Elena takes her back to the bedroom.

     Rebeca is still on her high horse (or should I say her fat and ugly horse). Juan Alberto soothes her, she leaves, he goes to bed.

     Luis Pablo and Lumara are arguing, he tells her she has no right to accuse Elena, they were only talking. She doesn't believe him, he tells her to believe what she wants, and turns away. She changes her tune, pleading to him to come back, he pulls his arm from her grasp and walks away.

     Meanwhile, back at the tavern, Don Francisco enters. (Don Francisco is a big bossman, in spite of his short stature.) He has an entourage of steely eyed bodyguards/thugs. Chelo comes to his table, greets him (as she has been instructed to). He insists that she sit, offers her a drink, she claims that se doesn't drink. He wants to hold hands (and other stuff), she offers him tobacco.

     Elena is dreaming, about Juan Alberto. In the dream, they are kissing, but there is an interruption. Elena talks in her sleep "No! Juan Alberto, Juan Alberto...", which wakes Talita, who wakes Elena. Talita wants to know who Juan Alberto is... Elena tells her that Juan Alberto is just a man, Juanito's father. Talito wants to know if Juanito is 'el niño', Elena tells her yes. Talita (feeling that she gets too little of Elena's time and 'el niño' gets too much) wants to sleep with Elena, who sends Talita back to her own bed.

     And Juan Alberto is in his bed, staring at the ceiling. He is rembering Silvia. His thoughts of Silvia seem to emphasize skin, lips, sensual carresses, and betrayal!. He thinks of Adolfo telling him that all women arn't like Silvia. Juan Alberto then thinks of Elena, at the interview. His thoughts of Elena seem to emphasize things like conversation, intelligence, and wit. Hmmm.

     Guero sees a fellow spirit in Oscar, Oscar is infatuated with Talito, as Guero is with Elena. He (Guero) alternates between 'best buddies' and intimidation, Oscar is concerned and flattered. They part on good terms (but with a mild threat for a farewell).

     Next day, a large, expensive car enters the driveway of the big house, followed by a small, four cylinder, four door, wimpmobile. Juanito and Elena are playing baseball, he pitches the ball to her, she hits it in the direction of the cars. Juan Alberto gets out of the big one, Juanito runs up to him. Adolfo gets out of the little one, Juan Alberto and Juanito walk over to him, Juanito asks if he can get in, Adolfo says yes, Juanito listens to the radio and plays with the steering wheel and air conditioning controls. Juan Alberto and Adolfo talk a bit, Juan Alberto goes into the house, Adolfo talks Juanito out of his car, then they join Elena, at a table on the patio which is stocked with juice glasses.

     Simona is complaining to Rebeca, who is getting irritated,

     Juan Alberto is at his desk, the phone rings. It is Silvia. He hangs up. In New York, Silvia is upset.

     Adolfo is talking to Elena, giving her advice. He goes into the house, to Juan Alberto.

     Simona is getting louder. I'm not sure about Rebeca, but now I am getting irritated. Rebeca give Simona a jewelry box to put away, looking amused.

     Adolfo enters Juan Alberto's office, Juan Alberto is upset about Silvia. They talk a bit about Juanito.

     Lumara is exercising when there is a knock (actually, several knocks) at the door. She goes to answer it, Guero is at the door (my, she does fill out a leotard well) Guero is also impressed "Hola Lumara" - doubletake - once more, with feeling "Hola...Lumara..." - she smiles (yes, Lumara dear, you still have it, and Luis Pablo is a blind fool). They talk a bit about their interests, Luis Pablo and Elena, they plot...

     Rebeca comes out to talk to Elena and Juanito on the patio, gets upset that Juanito is not properly attired (his shirt is unbuttoned. I guess when you are as upper crust as the Montiels, you pay some servant to play baseball for you. Or at least to sweat for you.) Rebeca then goes to interrupt Juan Alberto and Adolfo to complain.

     Elena brings out Juanito's lunch, but he is not hungry. She loads up a fork, but his lips are sealed. She soon charms him into eating.

     Rebeca tells Simona to tell Elena that Juan Alberto wants to see her. Simona does, with enthusiasm. Elena leaves, Simona stays, to verbally torture Juanito.

     Elena knocks on the door of Juan Alberto's office, Adolfo lets her in and leaves them alone. He wants a status report, she tells him that Juanito needs more paternal attention.

     While Simona and Juanito are fencing, Ernesto comes up. Simona leaves, Juanito attempts to. Ernesto tells him "Sit" and "Good boy" in English, apparently the language for controling dogs and small nephews. Ernesto then asks Juanito about the fat and ugly Señorita Elena, Juanito defies him and leaves, dodging the expected headslap. He runs away.

     We spend the rest of the episode alternating between Elena and Juan Alberto talking in the office, and Ernesto skurrying around the house looking for Elena like a piece of cheese and asking everyone he sees about the fat and ugly one.

     Oscar and Talita are talking when the female member of Guero's gang delivers a bribe, excuse me, a bicycle. Talita wants to know where it came from and why, he won't tell her.

     Juan Alberto and Elena have progressed from Elena standing at his desk reporting on Juanito as a servant, and Elena sitting across the desk from Juan Alberto discussing Juanito as a colleague.

     Oscar attempts to return the bicycle to Guero as he doesn't want to feel compromised, Guero won't take it, telling Oscar that he gave it to him in friendship. And, oh, by the way, could he help Guero in his persuit of Elena.

     As the episode ends, Elena and Juan Alberto finish their talk, They shake hands as she rises to leave (both react if if there is a mild electric shock at the touch) and she starts for the door, just as Ernesto approaches the same door from the other side.

     To be continued...

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Day10 - Matrimonio?  Author: Ben    Date:   08-12-03 19:39 PDT

     Ernesto is about to inturrupt Elena and Juan Alberto in his search for the fat, ugly one, but Rebeca diverts him, saying that she has to go oggle the studly ones at the club (that isn't what she said, but that is where they go). They leave, arm in arm. Elena's secret is safe for a bit longer. As they leave, Adolfo says "Adios" to them, and something else quietly (too quiet for me to make it out) to himself. Vanessa, what did he say?

     Elena comes into Juanito' room, he is hiding. When she doesn't see him, she starts for the door, he yells, she comes in. They laugh a bit, she sits beside him on the couch. He wants to know how things went with Juan Alberto. He is concerned because Simona had been making dire predictions. Elena tells him that things are OK, she touches his knee, he places his hand on hers to keep it there (does no one in this house use touch as a way of showing affection? Children, especially, need to be shown that they are loved, words are not sufficient.) Elena's touch does calm him down and reassure him.

     Juan Alberto is filling Adolfo in on his session with Elena. Juan Alberto isn't sure, but he thinks the girl (Elena) has interesting ideas about Juanito. Perhaps she is good for the family. Adolfo nods, pleased.

     Ernesto and Rebeca are at the club, he holds a chair for her as she sits at a table, sits beside her. She has a newspaper, apparently Ernesto has found his way into the gossip column, as she says something about romance and points out the article to him. He says something to the effect that no woman will trap him, she laughs. He says "I am your son", they laugh. He asks again about Juanito's fat and ugly one, she tries to divert him. With a dutiful-son type kiss on the cheek, he leaves. One of Rebeca's lady friends comes up, sits in Ernesto's chair, starts to gossip.

     Juanito and Elena looking at photographs, we see a picture of Juanito wearing a lifejacket and holding a fishing rod, when Simona comes in the room. Apparently, they are planning an outing for tomorrow. Simona is upset, doesn't think this is good, but Elena tells her that it is decided, and that they will need (something, Elena is having such a good time with Juanito that she has trouble saying exactly what she wants).

     Rebeca and friend continue to gossip, the word "Matrimonio" comes up (forgive typoes here, my cat is walking across the keyboard. "Kitten on the keys" makes more sense in music than it does with computers...) Anyway, we hear words like 'marriage', and 'Gustavo'

     Later, that evening, Luis Pablo runs into Elena as she walks home (Has he been waiting for her? He does have flowers for her). He offers his arm, they continue on together.

     At the apartment, Chelo and Aurorita talk, Aurorita seems concerned that Chelo isn't gtting ready for work at the clinic. Chelo says (I think) that she isn't going tonite (she wants to avoid Don Francisco). Aurorita leaves, Talita follows, leaving Chelo alone with her newspaper. (A lot of interest in the newspaper tonight).

     Rebeca is about to leave the club (apparently she has spent the entire day knocking down the lemonade) when she runs into Gustavo, she gets flustered.

     Arriving home, Elena refuses Luis Pablo, but keeps the flower. Lumara is waiting for him, she invites him in to her appartment, he refuses. When Elena goes into her appartment, she is surprised to see Chelo, who says she is not feeling well.

     Gustavo and Rebeca catch up on old times. There seems to be some history here, they appear to know each other well. As they talk, Gustavo touches her hand, she seems to like the contact. (I would like for Ernesto to turn out to be Gustavo's bastard son, after all, we already know that Ernesto is one, if only by behavior). He asks about her son - he's fine. He asks about Juan Alberto and the rest of the family - she backs off a bit, seems to get uncomfortable, The topic of "Matrimonio" comes up again, more small talk, now about his daughter. He touches Rebeca's hand again, this time she pulls her had away and fusses with her hair.

     Ernesto at the den of sin with Adriana, having an 'afterward' small talk (I would swear that I heard the 'Matrimonio' word agan). No, not 'afterward', but 'between'. In the interests of avoiding an X rating, we leave them.

     Elena and Chelo talk over dinner. Elena tells her about the Montiel household, how Rebeca is not Juan Alberto's 'madre', but his 'madrina'. She mentions the names Simona and Silvia, and laughs. Little does she know that they are not something to laugh about. Elena is very happy, thinking her future is bright.

     Later, at the tavern, we have a short music interlude. Apparently, the novela got a real singer, and since they have to pay her, we have to watch. Don Francisco comes in, with his thugs, and goes to a reserved table, he seems to be looking for something. Or someone. Chelo? The boss comes over to tell Don Francisco that Chelo isn't in tonight, he tries to divert Don Francisco's attention from Chelo, but it doesn't work, Don Francisco demands his help.

     Chelo and Elena are cleaning up the dishes, both get ready for bed. There are only two beds, so Elena takes the couch, giving the bedroom to Dhelo and Talita. She starts to read the newspaper, sees an article that shocks her. (The gossip column about Ernesto's possible marriage?)

     Simona is coiled in wait for Rebeca, when Rebeca comes in, she strikes! She complains about what Elena is planning, Rebeca shakes her head, looking like she has a headache (from Simona's poison?) Simona goes on (and on, and on, and on) about how the household is going to hell in a handbasket since Juan Alberto seems to be thinking for himself, no doubt because of the influence of the evil Elena.

     Chelo comes out of the bedroom and sees Elena in shock, asks what is wrong, takes the paper, sees that the article is about Ernesto de los Monteros, she asks if that is the Ernesto that troubled Elena. Elena finally is able to nod, Chelo asks if Elena still cares about him, Elena says no, not anymore. Chelo asks why she cares about this, Elena doesn't know, Chelo asks Elena if she doesn't hate him, Elena doesn't know that either. Ernesto de los Monteros is the reason why she can't (what?), never, never more.

     Rebeca, prepares for bed, remenbering Gustavo. She says his name, then that it is too late.

     Chelo tries to calm Elena, but she is convinced her life might as well be over. Help me out here, is this right? Elena says she can't even kill herself, because of her soul, but that she can never fall in love, never, never, never.

     Lumara and Guero are talking, she is jealous of Elena, and hoping that helping Guero will get Elena away from Luis Pablo. As they plot, Guero oggles Lumera. It seems odd to me that a guy will plot with a woman how he can get his hands on another woman, and yet not be able to keep his eyes off the first woman. Although I will admit that Lumara is quite oggle-able, it just doesn't seem appropriate here.

     Luis Pablo comes home, finds Oscar with his bicycle, wants to know where it came from, Oscar tells him that it was a gift from his friends, Luis Pablo tells him that his friends are very bad.

     Elena remembers the morning after the rape, just so we will also realize just why she can never love again.

     Next morning, as Elena walks off to work, she is followed by one of the gang members. She is followed all the way to Juan Alberto's gate.

     Don Fermin sees Chelo out and about in the morning, talks to her as she feeds a cage full of parakeets. Lumara walks up, Don Fermin leaves. Lumara tells Chelo to warn Elena away from her man. They exchange words.

     One of the gang members (another gang?) takes Oscar's bike away from him.

     Rebeca and Simona in Rebeca's room, they seem upset at the sounds of Juanito playing outside. The sound of happy children seems forign to them. They march off to complain.

     Rebeca waits for Juan Alberto in his office, pounces when he comes in, He tells her that Elena's authority over Juanito is absolute. Rebeca argues, he says that this woman is the only person who has a positive effect on Juanito. She is upset, but agrees and leaves. Adolfo congratulates Juan Alberto for standing up for Elena, (four "bravo"s)

     In Juanito's room, he and Elena are doing his schoolwork.

     Rebeca and Simona reinforce one another's biases against Elena, Simona says that Silvia wouldn't allow this foolishness to continue.

     Guero and the gang member talk about following Elena.

     Chelo and Aurorita talk, out comes the tarot deck.

     Talita and one of her girlfriends are talking, about boyfriend/girlfriend issues. Oscar calls out to her. The other girl leaves, He asks Talita to be his girlfriend, she asks about exclusivity, he says yes, she says she doesn't think so. He seems pleased that even though she doesn't want exclusivity, she didn't say no. Perhaps half of Talita is better than none?

     Rebeca talks to Adolfo, (she had been looking for Juan Alberto, but Adolfo will do.) She asks what he thinks about if Silvia were to come back. She thinks that Silvia would be better for Juanito, asks Adolfo to broach the subject to Juan Alberto.

     Juanito and Elena are taking a break, he is on the couch, napping, and she is napping at the table (we know that she didn't sleep well last night). She is dreaming about Juan Alberto (to the tune of "Vivo Por Ella", of course), In the dream, she and Juan Alberto are about to kiss, just as their lips almost meet, they are interrupted by the sound of Juanito's voice. Juanito has awakened, he wakes her (the interruption).. He is sitting with his elbows on the table, chin in hands, looking at her like a lovesick puppy (as would I). He tells her that she is beautiful (I agree, she is), she thanks him. He suggests that they go out to play, she suggests that they get back to work. He says the work is very dificult, she talks him into it, he agrees.

     At the judgeshop, Juan Alberto and Adolfo are working. Adolfo asks what he would think about Silvia returning. Juan Alberto does a take (not quite a doubletake). Adolfo tells him that Rebeca wants Silvia to return, Juan Alberto says she is crazy, Silvia will be the death of him.

     Aurorita and Chelo are in the kitchen, tidying up, Chelo tells her that she can finish up, Aurorita leaves. Don Francisco and his thugs show up, he knocks on the door. (Apparently, the boss at the tavern helped by providing her address.) She has heard him outside, doesn't want to answer the door, but he sees her through the window. Trapped!!!

     To be continued...

DAYS 11-15

 

    

Day 11 - Chelo, ¿que hombre?  Author: Ben    Date:   08-13-03 21:18 PDT

     Don Francisco knocks on Chelo's door. Aurorita, Talita and some of the other residents at the apartments see Don Francisco pounding on the door and yelling, Don Fermin goes over to stop him, Chelo is inside, frozen in fear. The thugs gently pick up Don Fermin and set him aside. Luis Pablo (with a broomstick) comes up to interfere, the thugs look like they want to play with him, but Don Francisco leaves with them. The crowd cheers.

     Elena and Juanito are building a model aircraft carrier. They are talking about Elena's family.

     Talita and Aurorita talk about the excitement, Don Fermin and Luis Pablo also talk about it. Luis Pablo is concerned about Elena, Don Fermin about Chelo

     Gustavo and a young lady are at the airport, walking hand in hand and talking, They sit and talk. She calls him patrino, mentions Ernesto de las Montero. He tells her that he is a friend of Rebeca, Ernesto's mother.

     Ernesto and Lalo are talking as Ernesto sorts through his CD collection and Lalo fusses with a chess set. They are talking about Ernesto's love life, he likes Adriana a lot, but is unhappy with her. But she has a friend...

     Gustavo's daughter arrives at the airport, she sets down her luggage and they all embrace Gustavo remarks that she is thin, asks is she eating enough. She rolls her eyes to the sky and says yes, papa. The girls head off, leaving Gustavo and the luggage in their wake. He follows.

     Evening, and Elena is preparing to leave. Juanito asks if she has to go, she says yes, she walks very far. He suggests that she stay there, she says it is impossible, where would she stay? Juanito suggests Silvia's room, no one is using it.

     Another possible use of Silvia's room (her return) has Juan Alberto, who is sitting at his desk in the dark, thinking about the betrayal, about when he caught her.

     At the apartment, Chelo is preparing to go to work, and chatting with Aurorita. As she adjusts her nurse's cap, Aurorita asks "Who was that man?"

     Elena and Juanito continue. She tells him that she lives with her two sisters, he says that he is all alone. She asks if he can go to his father, he says that his father is to busy for him.

     Chelo tells Aurorita that man's attentions are unwelcome, but she feels that she has no choice. Aurorita asks why, Chelo says because it is.

     Juan Alberto is still in the dark (in more ways than one) when Rebeca comes in. She turns on the light, and goes over to put a touch on Juan Alberto. He give her money, and tells her that Adolfo had asked him about Silvia's possible return. He tells her that Silvia will absolutely not be returning, that there is no love left. He tells her to forget about it. She agrees, they smile at one another.

     Luis Pablo is singing with the Decibels. They finish a set, to cheers and donations. (Now I understand why the hats are so big). The trumpet player (Chato?) asks him how he is doing. He says that he is alone, the trumpet player asks about Elena, he says she doesn't love him, Chato asks about Lumara, Luis Pablo says that he doesn't love her. He then goes philosophical, saying that life is like that, he loves Elena, and Lumara loves him. Chato tells him that what is important is who he loves, Luis Pablo says that Elena is his great love.

     Juan Alberto is at the dinner table. Juanito comes in, asks if he can eat with him. Juan Alberto is surprised, but says yes, Juanito runs to the other end of the table and sits (it is a very long table.) Simona comes in "Juanito, what are you doing here?" Juan Alberto tells her that Juanito has his permission to eat with him, she says OK, but the look she gives Juanito tells much about what she thinks about children not staying in their place. After she leaves, Juanito says that she didn't like it much. Juan Alberto makes a face and whispers that Simona doesn't like anything much. (Whispering the length of a 40 foot table? When you almost have to shout to be heard that far away?)

     Gustavo's daughter and goddaughter are talking. One of them is Adriana, but I'm sorry, I can't tell them apart. They are talking about Ernesto, the one in green (the goddaughter) asks about him, the one in black (daughter) says Ernesto is made for her, he is so passionate. (OK, based on clothing, Adriana is Gustavo's daughter. Sorry to say that I probably wouldn't be able to tell them apart unclothed. Ernesto wouldn't even try). Goddaughter wants to be introduced to him, Adriana says "no"

     Juan Alberto and Juanito are at the fireplace, having after dinner drinks. Juanito has a brandy snifter of orange juice, Juan Alberto has his usual. Juanito mentions Elena, how she helps him with many things. He yawns, Juan Alberto suggest that it is time for bed, Juanito doesn't want to go (he feels special, actually spending time with his father). Juan Alberto tells them they will do this again, Juanito says OK, then I will go to bed.

     At the tavern, Chelo has just changed into her working garb, opens the door, and Don Francisco is standing there. She attempts to close the door on him, but one of the thugs (the bigger one, a silly millimeter taller) pushes the door open and Don Francisco enters. He is not happy, wants to know why she wouldn't let him in at her apartment. She tries to leave the room, but the thugs block the door. Don Francisco takes her arm, tells her she should like him very much (if she knows what is good for her). He is all ready for a kiss, she is backing away, he pushes her into a closet (doesn't' want the thugs to watch, I assume). Back at the apartment, Elena looks up from her magazine with a start (Yoda might say that the force is strong in the Carvajal girls). Don Francisco continues, Chelo tries to reject him. He has one arm around her, she is pushing against his chest, and (yea!) she breaks away. The thugs won't let her leave though, until Don Francisco waves them off, Chelo runs from the dressing room.

     Back at the apartment, it wasn't a psychic event that startled Elena, Guero is at the door. He wants to come in and talk, she doesn't want to talk to him. They shout through the door at one another until he finally gives up and turns away. As he leaves, he sees Luis Pablo coming home from the gig with the Decibels, they chat a bit. Luis Pablo wants him to leave his brother alone. Guero asks Luis Pablo's help (offers him money) with the princess. Luis Pablo says what princess, Guero says Elena. Oh oh, they are rivals. After a few words suggesting that Guero should leave Elena alone, Luis Pablo leaves.

     Talita has been awakened by the shouting, she comes out asking if those men were back. Elena wants to know what men, Talita tells her about the men that were trying to get in to Chelo. Elena wants to know how Chelo would know men like that.

     And, back at the tavern, her shift over, Chelo is back in her nurse suit. One of the other girls is telling her that Don Francisco is quite a fellow, and it would be profitable to get to know him. Chelo leaves, peeking around corners as she goes.

     Later, Elena is making the bed, Chelo is wanting to get into it. Elena tells her that Talita told her about that man. Chelo says "What man?" She tries to make it out to be nothing, but Elena wants to know what a man like that was doing at the clinic. Chelo spins a yarn and heads for bed. Elena looks doubtful.

     Juan Alberto comes down the stairs and into his office, A servant notices, and goes for coffee. She brings it to him,

     Elena and Chelo are talking about Juanito and his home and family,

     Simona is talking to Juanito, telling him that Juan Alberto is too important to be bothered by a child. She says that Silvia would straighten things out.

     And, speaking of Silvia, she is getting another massage, and showing her roomie a silver necklace, presumably a gift. Apparently she spends most of her time getting her back rubbed, occasionally, she will roll over, and someone will then give her jewelery.

     Simona is telling Juanito that it is evil for him to be bothering his father, that he needs his mother. Juanito says he is doing fine with his father, she tells him that he is way too busy to bother with a child such as him.

     Silvia's roomie asks her about her son, Silvia complains that Juan Alberto hates her, and he won't even let her talk to Juanito.

     Adolfo and Juan Alberto are working, but Juan Alberto is having trouble paying attention to what Adolfo is saying. He declares a break, (he has a flashback of Silvia's betrayal).

     One of the servants leaves the big house, Guero follows her.

     Elena and Juanito are finishing up a study session. Juanito says "Simona is evil, she likes to trouble me". Elena tells him not to worry. About that time, Juan Alberto comes in, Juanito yells and runs to jump into his arms. Elena, who is tidying the work area says that Juanito would like a snack, Juan Alberto says that is OK, they can have coffee. Juanito runs off. Juan Alberto turns to Elena, "Thank you, Señorita Elena". "Thank you for what?" she asks. "For being special to my son, for bringing happiness back to my house". (Andrea Bocelli sings).

     At the club, Adriana and her clone (I still can't tell them apart) are showing off skin and sipping from tall glasses.

     Juan Alberto and Elena continue to talk, she tells him that her concerns are for Juanito, he expresses his frustration that Rebeca and the others don't understand what he wants for his son, Elena says that she understands. Juan Alberto looks surprised, Andrea Bocelli continues to sing.

     Adolfo and Juanito are at the table, Simona is serving them. Adolfo asks about Juan Alberto, Juanito says that he is with Elena, Simona gives a look to make one's blood run cold.

     Elena tells Juan Alberto some of her thoughts about the household, he takes offense and tells her not tell him what to do. (the singing stops...) The atmosphere chills, Elena withdraws, Juan Alberto seems happier.

     At the club, the clones have been joined by Ernesto and Lalo. OK, now I can tell them apart, Adriana is the one with Ernesto stuck to her, nibbling on her neck (can you say "Moray Eel"?) Lalo and the clone are looking uncomfortable.

     Simona is dumping on Rebeca, who looks like she has had about enough.

     At the judgeshop, Juan Alberto is telling Adolfo what's been happening. Adolfo says "So you thanked Elena?", Juan Alberto says yes, Adolfo asks if she pleases him, if he likes her.

     Simona is telling Rebeca to get Silvia back. Rebeca says she can't do that, that she promised Juan Alberto. Silvia says that in that case, she should get used to Elena running the house.

     Lalo and Ernesto are arguing, apparently Ernesto had the wrong girl, or at least he thinks so (could he be getting tired of the lovely Adriana?).

     Talita and a friend are walking, they meet up with Oscar. The other girl goes on, Oscar buys Talita a popsicle. She is happy with the attention.

     Adolfo and Juan Alberto are talking, Juan Alberto is overwhelmed by women. Adolfo asks about Silvia, tells him that he is all alone. He can't count Rebeca's son, no mother or father, he needs a woman that he can trust. Adolfo looks like he wants to make another suggestion, but can't get the words out. Then he laughs, says such a woman doesn't exist. (But he looks thoughtful, like he knows of one, but won't say her name right now).

     Chelo, at the apartment, there is a knock at the door.

     Talita and Oscar are talking, he is down, tells her that he is in the middle, that Guero is pressuring him about Elena, that Luis Pablo loves Elena, that he doesn't know what to do. She touches his shoulder in sympathy, he cheers up and asks her to be his girlfriend. She likes the attention, but doesn't want to, he grovels, she refuses.

     Elena is with Juanito, the servant that Guero was stalking comes in, says there is someone to see her. She starts down the stairs - It is Guero!

     To be continued...

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Day 12 - A hint of romance  Author: Ben    Date:   08-14-03 22:50 PDT

     Chelo is at home. There is a knock at the door.

     A servant tells Elena there is someone to see her at the door. It is Guero. He acts like he belongs there, has his arm around her shoulders when Rebeca and Simona come down the stairs. Elena tells them that Guero is a neighbor, drags him out of there. On the walkway to the gate, she tells him to not come back, he caresses her face and struts away as if he owns the place. (or at least Elena).

     The knock at Chelo's door was Aurorita, Chelo is telling her that she has many problems, not for her, but for Talita, for Elena.

     Elena goes to the kitchen, where the servant, Rufina, is working, Rufina asks if her 'primo' is gone already, Elena tells her that he is not her 'primo', Rufina says that he had told her so. Elena instructs her that if he returns, Rufina is to call the police, and that he had lied to her. Elena wants to know how he found this address.

     Guero is buying lunch at the park/playground (vacant lot?) for his gang. He tells them about Elena's mansion, owned by Judge Juan Alberto Montiel. They are impressed, both with the mansion, and with him for finding her.

     Juanito tells Elena that Juan Alberto is melancholy, and that Silvia may return. Elena says that it is not good to be melancholy, but that married people should be together, that it would be good for his mother to return. He says no, she is strange. Elena asks why he says that, he says it is true, she says she loves me, but she lies. They talk a bit longer, then Juanito tells Elena that she should be his mother.

     Ernesto and Rebeca are at the club, he needs money. For a girl. Rebeca asks "Adriana?", he says no, another one. She asks her name, he says "Jimena, Jimena Linares"

     And, Jimena Linares is talking to her father, Gustavo Linares. She is talking about her new boyfriend, he asks if it is Ernesto de los Monteros, she says yes, do you know him and he replies that he doesn't know Ernesto, but he has known his mother for many years. He asks if Ernesto and Adriana arn't sweethearts, she says not any more. He doesn't want her to see Ernesto, but she won't promise not to. He finally give up and starts to leave, Jimena calls him back, he kisses her forehead, they part friends. She goes to her mirror and tells it that she likes Ernesto.

     Meanwhile, Ernesto is telling Rebeca that he likes Jimena. Rebeca tells him to leave her alone, that Jimena and Adriana are friends, and that she and Jimena's father are friends, and that he should leave her alone. He isn't paying any more attention to his mother than Jimena paid to her father, Rebeca gives up, gives Ernesto some money. They part.

     Juan Alberto enters Silvia's room (where the ghost of Silvia, in the form of that picture, hangs on the wall). He stares at the picture a bit, not really seeing it, but something in his mind.

     Elena and Juanito are sitting on the couch on Juanito's room. She is reading to him, he has nodded off. She notices, stops reading and thinks about the conversation they had had earlier when Juanito was telling her about his mother, and how she should become his mother. She smiles.

     Chelo and Talita are at the apartment, in the kitchen, talking about how Oscar wants to be Talita's sweetheart. Chelo says friends is OK, not sweethearts. Talita runs out of the room, drunk on her newfound power over the male of the species.

     Luis Pablo and Don Fermin are talking, Luis Pablo is complaining about being alone. Don Fermin tells him that he is too young to really be alone, and what about Lumara? Luis Pablo says that Lumara doesn't interest him. Don Fermin says "You love Elena, and, ha ha ha, Elena doesn't love you", Luis Pablo says "Yes, she doesn't love me." About then, who should appear but Lumara, wearing a fetching blue vest with the buttons at half mast.

     Juan Alberto, meanwhile, has walked across the room in his hypnotic trance, and almost has his nose up against the picture. Of course, he remembers the betrayal, and strikes out in anger, knocking a vase onto the floor. Elena and Juanito hear the noise, Juanito thinks it is a ghost and wants to go see, Elena says it isn't a ghost, but that they should tell Silvia. They go downstairs (Juanito runs outside) and Elena tells Silvia that there was a noise, she should investigate. Simona says "No, it is only him", Elena says "Him?", Simona says "Yes, Him... Juan Alberto". She tells Elena that Juan Alberto goes there to be close to Silvia, that Silvia, the real owner of the house, will be returning, soon. "Soon, Miss Elena"

     Guero is awakened by a knock (several, actually) at the door. He opens it, Don Francisco enters, smoking a cigar that is bigger than he is (well, it is at least too big for his face. But, cigar smokers such as he seldom think about aesthetics).

     Simona continues by telling Elena that Silvia will take care of everything, that she is wonderful, "Saint Silvia". Meanwhile, in New York, Silvia is putting on makeup, getting ready for a date (apparently, she needs another silver necklace). Her roomie comes in, asks her if she is becoming Larry's woman, Silvia laughs, says that Larry is OK, but is no Juan Alberto (financially speaking, I'm sure). They talk a bit, comparing Larry and Juan Alberto, then she leaves.

     Guero has invited Don Francisco into his room. Don Francisco is in the best chair, with a big mug of beer, while Guero stands by in case he wants anything. Don Francisco alternates between sucking on the beer, sucking on the cigar, and pontificating. He gets up to leave, Guero runs (yes runs) over to the door to stand at attention as he leaves.

     Juan Alberto leaves Silvia's room, Simona is waiting in the hall. He asks her where Juanito is, she tells him, he leaves. She goes into the room, sees the broken vase says "What happened here" and looks over both shoulders.

     Elena and Juanito are playing football (soccer). She kicks the ball (pretty well, considering the high heels) and Juanito the goalie can't stop it. She scores!

     Luis Pablo and Lumara are walking at the apartment complex, she is trying to save their relationship, he doesn't think there is one. He leaves, Don Fermin comes up, He says something to indicate that if she can't have Luis Pablo, there is always him, she says "You for me?", laughs, and walks away shaking her head. Don Fermin shakes his head and checks the alignment of his wig.

     Juanito and Elena are in his room. Elena is sewing a button on one of his shirts (or something equally domestic), Juanito runs off, and Juan Alberto comes into the room. She starts to rise, he tells her to continue what she is doing (he looks like he has never seen busy hands before). He asks about Juanito, she says he will be back, does he want something? He says no, sits down to wait, looks at what she is doing. She looks down, says that little boys are hard on clothing, they both chuckle. They talk a bit, then settle down to lookin very domestic...

     Later that evening, Ernesto and Lalo are dancing with Adriana and Jimena. Adriana is dancing with Ernesto, but suddenly she discovers that Ernesto is dancing with Jimena, and she with Lalo. She doesn't look pleased.

     Elena is reading a paper that Talita has given her. "Mathematics, very good. History, very good. Talita, this is very good!". They laugh, then Elena mentions Juanito. Talita says "No, Elena, No", Elena tells her that Juanito is very melancholy, very alone. Talita counters that Juanito has his father. Talita thinks Juanito is much better off than she, that he has money and a father, while she (Talita) has no parents, and only what little money Chelo brings home from working at the clinic, and Elena brings in. Money buys many things, but she wants attention, and isn't getting any.

     At the clinic, excuse me, the tavern, Chelo is talking to her co-worker buddy, who is, as usual, telling her how great Don Francisco is. In the office, Lumara is talking to the owner of the tavern, it looks like an interview. He seems impressed by her qualifications, especially as revealed by the blue vest, he hires her. She expresses her gratitude in a way that would endanger the health of a lesser man.

     Back at the dance floor, Lalo is trying to divert Adriana's attention from the fact that her sweetheart and her best friend are having a wonderful time dancing and getting to know one another. She isn't taking it well. Ernesto and Jimena dance, he tells her that she pleases him a lot. (Oh oh, get out the chemistry set, here comes another new girlfriend!).

     At their apartment, Elena and Talita are sitting on the couch, they have been watching TV and she has been giving Talita some of that attention that she needs. Talita has drifted off to sleep, Elena is thinking about Simona telling her that Silvia is returning soon, and that Miss Elena won't Oh that Juanito!be needed any more. Elena says "Simona quiere demona. Oh that Juanito!" She laughs.

     At Adolfo's apartment, he and a rather attractive lady are leaving what appears to be his bedroom. He is wearing a robe, she is adjusting her clothing. As they walk across the room, he nibbles on her earlobe, at the door they settle into some serious smooching. She leaves, just as Juan Alberto walks up. Adolfo rolls his eyes to the heavens, says "Juan Alberto". Juan Alberto asks if he is interupting anything, Adolfo reassures him, he asks about the girl, Adolfo says that she is Claudia, and that she is his (very good) friend. Juan Alberto settles into the most comfortable chair, Adolfo sighs and gets him a brandy. Juan Alberto has come for some advice about women, obviously Adolfo is the source of all such knowlege.

     On the dance floor, Ernesto and Jimena are doing fine, but he notices that Adriana is looking daggers at them from across the room. He takes Jimena aside, give her his card. Atriana marches across the dance floor and begins to argue with her supposed friend, she leaves. Ernesto and Jimena leave. Lalo picks a random young lady out of the crowd and goes back to dancing.

     At Elena's apartment, Talita is asleep, clutching her stuffed bunny, but Elena can't get to sleep. She is thinking about Juan Alberto and what they talked about when she was repairing Juanito's clothing. Finally, she turns out the light and tries to sleep.

     Juan Alberto is still at Adolfo's. Adolfo is giving advice, Juan Alberto is not hearing it. His delima seems to be that Juanito needs a mother's hand, but he doesn't want Silvia back. He doesn't trust women in general. What to do, what to do. Adolfo suggests that if he wants a good woman, he should just look around. Take, for example, Elena, she is a good woman, good for Juanito too. Juan Alberto looks like the thought never crossed his mind. He settles back to consider it.

     At the big house, Rebeca is just getting home from a hard day at the club. She is happy about something, seems to have some sort of plan going (this would be a lot easier if I understood Spanish) She is telling Simona about her plans. Talking to Simona seems to be a good way to ruin anyone's good mood. It seems that Rebeca wants to do something that involves more time away from the house, possibly actually moving out. She says something about travel taking a long time, complains about traffic. Simona asks about the house, she says that she isn't needed, after all, Juanito has Elena. They talk some more.

     At the apartment, Talita and Elena are finally asleep. (How can Elena sleep with Andrea Bocelli and Marta Sanchez singing like that?) She is dreaming about Juan Alberto, they appear to be in a jungle campsite, at least there is heavy foliage and a stream or pond, and in the background what appears to be a tent. She is wearing something blue and sleeveless, Juan Alberto is wearing a shirt with an open collar and a sweater (no tie!!!). They kiss. In her sleep, Elena says Juan Alberto's name, wakes Talita (again). Talita asks about Juan Alberto, Elena says it was just a dream, an impossible dream. Talita laughs.

     Back at the big house, Rebeca is ready for bed, Simona is fluffin the pillows. Simona asks for Silvia's address in New York, Rebeca gives it to her. (Rebeca promised not to bring Silvia back, but she didn't promise not to enable someone else doing it!).

     Juan Alberto has finally left Adolfo, but he isn't ready to sleep. He turns on the 43" TV in his bedroom, and stares at it while thinking of Elena. Elena can't sleep either, she comes out of her bedrom (so as to not disturb Talita, I assume), and thinks about Juan Alberto. Yoda would say that the Force is strong within them tonight.

     At the tavern, the boss is showing Lumara around. They are laughing and happy. Chelo comes by, Lumara sees her.

     To be continued...

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Day 13 - ¿Embarazada?  Author: Ben    Date:   08-15-03 21:25 PDT

     Juan Alberto, thinking about Elena,

     Elena, thinking about Juan Alberto. He is prohibited, it is impossible, impossible!

     At the tavern, Lumara sees Chelo, asks her how things are at the clinic, is everyone here sick? The boss is vastly amused, as is Lumara. Chelo is not.

     Next morning, Adriana comes into Jimena's room, Jimena is still abed, perhaps hung over, perhaps just not yet rested after all that dancing. Adriana is upset, after all, Jimena has just stolen her man. She wakes Jimena violently, they argue. Adriana says that she loves Ernesto,

     Juan Alberto and ELena talk, about Juanito, he gives her money to buy Juanito clothes

     Upstairs, Elena is getting Juanito ready to go shopping, tidying his hair, etc. He wants to know whats up, she tells him they are going to buy him some clothes. He says that he doesn't want clothes, he wants toys. (Of course, he is a kid). She tells him that they will get one toy, but only one. He smiles (does he think that he can talk her into more?)

     Adriana and Jimena are at least seated now, instead of prowling around the room like cats fighting over prey. Adriana tells Jimena that Ernesto had made promises, Jimena warns her against believing the promises of men.

     Back at the appartment, Chelo is talking to Aurorita, she says that there is something she has to say (she knows her secret will soon be out, she wants to be the one to tell Aurorita the truth). But before she can, Lumara comes in, saying that she is looking for the "queen of the red saloon" (So that is the name of the tavern, my TV doesn't show the sign clearly enough for me to read in when they show its front door). Lumara 'introduces' Aurorita to the "Queen of the Red Saloon" (she seems to like the way it trips off the toungue, she says it often enough). In a terific mood, she leaves, leaving Chelo to explain. She tells Aurorita that it is true, that she is "The Chelo" the cigarette girl. There are cigarettes, but no respect. "The cigarette girl, that is me, that is me".

     Lumara has met Don Fermin, who is watering the plants. She can't wait to tell him the news, both of her new job, and of Chelo's old one. Don Fermin tells her that Chelo is a good girl, who was just doing what was necessary to survive. Lumara gives him a look and leaves, watching her go, he waters his foot.

     Elena and Juanito are shopping, they leave a large, brightly lit clothing store, both carrying large shopping bags.

     Chelo continues talking to Aurorita, Chelo is crying, afraid of what people will think of her when Lumara tells her secret. She is worried about Elena's reaction. Aurorita mentions Don Fermin, Chelo tells her that he already knows, that he and Luis Pablo saw her in the tavern, but that they kept her secret.

     Simona is packing Rebeca's suitcase. She tells Rebeca that she has writen to Silvia. Rebeca acts surprised (but why would Simona asked for the address if she wasn't going to use it?).

     Elena and Juanito are stashing their loot. He is playing with his new toy. She tells him to wash his hands for dinner.

     Ernesto answers his door, it is Jimena. She says he had lied to her, and she didn't want him any more, and turns to leave. He gras her arm, pulls her into his room, and into a violent kiss.

     Elena talks to Juan Alberto, gives him the recepts and change from their shopping trip. He asks if it was all spent on Juanito, she says all of it. He invites her to sit, he would like to talk to her for a bit. She asks if something is wrong, he says no, he would like to know something about her family. She says it is a small family, just her two sisters and her, and that she has no one else, no sweetheart.

     Aurorita is talking to Lamura, trying go get her to realize the seriousness of the situation. Lumara says it is very dramatic. Aurorita doesn't want her to hurt Chelo or Elena, Lumara says that Chelo has done nothing wrong, but she is really upset about Elena (What does she say about Elena? "Elena son ... Bocrina???" I can't make it out, what is Elena?) Aurorita tells her that she shouldn't blame Elena for Luis Pablo, Lumara repeats the word I didn't catch. Aurorita then tells her something I didn't get, but sounded important, something about the Carvajal girls. Surprised, Lumara rises. Vanessa, help!

     Ernesto is now talking most persuasively to Jimena, tells her that he loves her. She says that Adriana is her friend, and she loves you. He says yes, but he prefers her(Jimena). They kiss, gently this time, but his hand heads for a blouse button. She says "No, Ernesto", and heads for the door, he stops her, says a few words, kisses her again, and opens the door for her - to find Adriana just about to knock!

     Juan Alberto and Elena continue their talk, Juan Alberto expresses his concerns about Juanito, she agrees, says Juanito needs him (his father) a lot. He appears to be asking her to move into their house, to be closer to Juanito, she says she doesn't want to be any trouble, he says it is no trouble at all. She says she will go up to Juanito, with his permission. She leaves, Juan Alberto looks thoughtful.

     Adriana and Jimena are arguing, Ernesto doesn't seem to like having a couple of beautiful women fighting over him, says something stupid (I assume). Adriana bursts into tears, runs away shouting "Te odio, te odio", Jimena follows after, to settle her. Ernesto closes the door, says "Women, they are so complicated".

     Chelo is watching TV when Talita comes in, we hear the sound of rain until she closes the door. She drags over another chair so she can sit beside Chelo, they are talking when a lightening flash startles them (or are they watching "The Perfect Storm"?).

     Luis Pablo is talking to Don Fermin while the Don is working on a model sailing ship. they are talking about Lumara, Chelo's secret, and Elena. We hear the sound of the storm in the background, Don Fermin asks Luis Pablo why he doesn't like Lumara, she is quite a dish. Luis Pablo responds that he doesn't like her, he wants Elena. Don Fermin mentions that Elena doesn't seem to want him, Luis Pablo says that it's Elena or nothing. Or the Mariachis.

     Adriana and Jimena dash through the rain and into the tavern. Apparently the rain has not cooled Adriana down any, they are still fighting. They argue a bit, then storm into the bar area.

     Juan Alberto is tucking Juanito in for the night. Juanito asks him to stay with him for a while, he sighs, gets a cushon from the couch, and streches out beside Juanito.

     Lalo is at Ernesto's place, fussing with the chess set, when Ernesto comes into the room, gloatin go himself (and the world) about having women fight over him. He yawns, says he is tired, moves a chess piece, says checkmate, pats Lalo on the cheek and struts away.

     Elena arrives home, by car. The driver helps her out, gives her an umbrella to make in into the house. She comes in, Chelo greets her. Elena is surprised that Chelo hasn't left for the clinic yet,

     Juanito asks Juan Alberto "Why can't Elena stay here?", Juan Alberto says that she can't, she has her own house, her family. Juanito wants to know why not, he is alone. He wants Elena to be part of their family. Juan Alberto looks thoughtull, as Andrea Bocelli starts to sing...

     Elena and Chelo are talking as they eat, the conversation turns to Juanito, the fact that he has no mother, she has left, leaving Juanito and Juan Alberto alone. Chelo asks Elena if she wants to fall in love with this man, Elena says yes, then she says no. Chelo looks like she can guess which it is. Chelo tells her to go for it, Elena replies that it is impossible, absurd.

     Juan Alberto is exercising, thinking about Elena, remembering how, when he asked about family, she had told him there was no sweetheart. He is pleased at that. Then he gets angry at himself for being pleased. He continues exercising.

     Ernesto is at the tavern, playing cards. He wins. (This time).

     Chelo continues encouraging Elena to persue happiness (in the form of Juan Alberto), but Elena suddenly cools, saying that she has no right to be happy (or something like that).

     Luis Pablo and the Decibles are performing, when the song ends, a well dressed man at a nearby table rises and introduces himself to Luis Pablo, gives him his card, and asks him to call.

     At the tavern, the boss wants to know where Chelo is. The bartender says that she called in sick.

     Elena can't get to sleep. Either she is thinking about what Chelo was saying about happiness, or Andrea Bocelli is singing too loud. She adjusts the blanket and rolls over, determined to get some sleep.

     The Decibles are congratulating Luis Pablo for apparently having been 'discovered'.

     Elena comes out of the bedroom, talks to Chelo who is trying to sleep on the couch. They chat a bit, Elena blows her a kiss and leaves for work.

     Adriana and Jimena have stoped fighting, they are talking, Adriana is crying. She tells Jimena that she is pregnant, Jimena asks "Ernesto?", she nods and says yes.

     Ernesto is preparing breakfast, fruit juice and Alka-Selzer. He call Simona, asks for his mother. She tells him that Rebeca isn't there, she went to spend some time with a friend. he settles for Juan Alberto. She says that she will have him call.

     Aurorita is helping Chelo with in the kitchen, Chelo mentions that Elena may be living at her job for a while.

     Elena arrives at the big house, she has Talita with her. Juan Alberto meets them at the gate, Elena introduces Talita, he continues to his car. Talita asks if that was Juanitos father, she seems impressed. Upstairs, Juanito is sitting on the table, reading a book, when Simona comes in. She orders him down, he ignores her, she takes his book, he jumps up, starts jumping on the table, she pulls him down, throws him to the floor. He wants to leave, she won't let him, is blocking his way, when Elena and Talita arrive. Simona says that they were playing, Juanito calls her a liar, she leaves. By this time, the sweet Juanito is gone, the evil one has returned. Elena tries to introduce him to Talita, but he isn't having any. He walks over to thow himself on his bed, snarls at Talita as he goes by. She shies away, looking like she wonders what kind of bull Elena has been feeding her. She runs out of the room. Sighing, Elena follows her to the kitchen, where she leaves her with Rufina. Elena then goes back to Juanito. He hears her coming, and hides under the covers. He won't come out.

     In the kitchen, Rufina tells Talita that Juanito is just being bad, tells her that Elena is very good. They talk a bit.

     Elena continues to try to get Juanito out of hiding, She tells him if he doesn't want to be with her, she will go. "Adios, Juanito", he folds a corner of the covers down, looks out. She walks to the door, says she loves him a lot, and "Adios" one more time, she then opens and closes the door (she stays inside). He jumps up, says "Elena, don't go. I love you a lot". She comes back, they laugh and cry at the same time (You could strip a gear that way).

     Chelo and Aurorita continue talking, there is a knock at the door. Chelo panics, tells Aurorita to say she isn't home.

     In Gurero's room, he is talking to his gang, about Don Francisco, and how good he has been to them. He then chases them from the room.

     The knock at the door is a young man we havn't seen before, but Chelo seems to know him. Vanessa, I need help here again. Who is this?.

     Elena and Juanito have reached a point that they can talk rationally, he tells her that Simona does evil things. She finally gets him to the point that he wants to meet Talita, Elena goes to get her. As she comes downt the stairs, the phone rings. As no one is there, she answers it. It is Ernesto! Asking for Simona.

     To be continued...Ernesto is preparing breakfast, fruit juice and Alka-Selzer. He call Simona, asks for his mother. She tells him that Rebeca isn't there, she went to spend some time with a friend. he settles for Juan Alberto. She says that she will have him call.

     Aurorita is helping Chelo with in the kitchen, Chelo mentions that Elena may be living at her job for a while.

     Elena arrives at the big house, she has Talita with her. Juan Alberto meets them at the gate, Elena introduces Talita, he continues to his car. Talita asks if that was Juanitos father, she seems impressed. Upstairs, Juanito is sitting on the table, reading a book, when Simona comes in. She orders him down, he ignores her, she takes his book, he jumps up, starts jumping on the table, she pulls him down, throws him to the floor. He wants to leave, she won't let him, is blocking his way, when Elena and Talita arrive. Simona says that they were playing, Juanito calls her a liar, she leaves. By this time, the sweet Juanito is gone, the evil one has returned. Elena tries to introduce him to Talita, but he isn't having any. He walks over to thow himself on his bed, snarls at Talita as he goes by. She shies away, looking like she wonders what kind of bull Elena has been feeding her. She runs out of the room. Sighing, Elena follows her to the kitchen, where she leaves her with Rufina. Elena then goes back to Juanito. He hears her coming, and hides under the covers. He won't come out.

     In the kitchen, Rufina tells Talita that Juanito is just being bad, tells her that Elena is very good. They talk a bit.

     Elena continues to try to get Juanito out of hiding, She tells him if he doesn't want to be with her, she will go. "Adios, Juanito", he folds a corner of the covers down, looks out. She walks to the door, says she loves him a lot, and "Adios" one more time, she then opens and closes the door (she stays inside). He jumps up, says "Elena, don't go. I love you a lot". She comes back, they laugh and cry at the same time (You could strip a gear that way).

     Chelo and Aurorita continue talking, there is a knock at the door. Chelo panics, tells Aurorita to say she isn't home.

     In Gurero's room, he is talking to his gang, about Don Francisco, and how good he has been to them. He then chases them from the room.

     The knock at the door is a young man we havn't seen before, but Chelo seems to know him. Vanessa, I need help here again. Who is this?.

     Elena and Juanito have reached a point that they can talk rationally, he tells her that Simona does evil things. She finally gets him to the point that he wants to meet Talita, Elena goes to get her. As she comes downt the stairs, the phone rings. As no one is there, she answers it. It is Ernesto! Asking for Simona.

     To be continued...Ernesto is preparing breakfast, fruit juice and Alka-Selzer. He call Simona, asks for his mother. She tells him that Rebeca isn't there, she went to spend some time with a friend. he settles for Juan Alberto. She says that she will have him call.

     Aurorita is helping Chelo with in the kitchen, Chelo mentions that Elena may be living at her job for a while.

     Elena arrives at the big house, she has Talita with her. Juan Alberto meets them at the gate, Elena introduces Talita, he continues to his car. Talita asks if that was Juanitos father, she seems impressed. Upstairs, Juanito is sitting on the table, reading a book, when Simona comes in. She orders him down, he ignores her, she takes his book, he jumps up, starts jumping on the table, she pulls him down, throws him to the floor. He wants to leave, she won't let him, is blocking his way, when Elena and Talita arrive. Simona says that they were playing, Juanito calls her a liar, she leaves. By this time, the sweet Juanito is gone, the evil one has returned. Elena tries to introduce him to Talita, but he isn't having any. He walks over to thow himself on his bed, snarls at Talita as he goes by. She shies away, looking like she wonders what kind of bull Elena has been feeding her. She runs out of the room. Sighing, Elena follows her to the kitchen, where she leaves her with Rufina. Elena then goes back to Juanito. He hears her coming, and hides under the covers. He won't come out.

     In the kitchen, Rufina tells Talita that Juanito is just being bad, tells her that Elena is very good. They talk a bit.

     Elena continues to try to get Juanito out of hiding, She tells him if he doesn't want to be with her, she will go. "Adios, Juanito", he folds a corner of the covers down, looks out. She walks to the door, says she loves him a lot, and "Adios" one more time, she then opens and closes the door (she stays inside). He jumps up, says "Elena, don't go. I love you a lot". She comes back, they laugh and cry at the same time (You could strip a gear that way).

     Chelo and Aurorita continue talking, there is a knock at the door. Chelo panics, tells Aurorita to say she isn't home.

     In Gurero's room, he is talking to his gang, about Don Francisco, and how good he has been to them. He then chases them from the room.

     The knock at the door is a young man we havn't seen before, but Chelo seems to know him. Vanessa, I need help here again. Who is this?.

     Elena and Juanito have reached a point that they can talk rationally, he tells her that Simona does evil things. She finally gets him to the point that he wants to meet Talita, Elena goes to get her. As she comes downt the stairs, the phone rings. As no one is there, she answers it. It is Ernesto! Asking for Simona.

     To be continued...Ernesto is preparing breakfast, fruit juice and Alka-Selzer. He call Simona, asks for his mother. She tells him that Rebeca isn't there, she went to spend some time with a friend. he settles for Juan Alberto. She says that she will have him call.

     Aurorita is helping Chelo with in the kitchen, Chelo mentions that Elena may be living at her job for a while.

     Elena arrives at the big house, she has Talita with her. Juan Alberto meets them at the gate, Elena introduces Talita, he continues to his car. Talita asks if that was Juanitos father, she seems impressed. Upstairs, Juanito is sitting on the table, reading a book, when Simona comes in. She orders him down, he ignores her, she takes his book, he jumps up, starts jumping on the table, she pulls him down, throws him to the floor. He wants to leave, she won't let him, is blocking his way, when Elena and Talita arrive. Simona says that they were playing, Juanito calls her a liar, she leaves. By this time, the sweet Juanito is gone, the evil one has returned. Elena tries to introduce him to Talita, but he isn't having any. He walks over to thow himself on his bed, snarls at Talita as he goes by. She shies away, looking like she wonders what kind of bull Elena has been feeding her. She runs out of the room. Sighing, Elena follows her to the kitchen, where she leaves her with Rufina. Elena then goes back to Juanito. He hears her coming, and hides under the covers. He won't come out.

     In the kitchen, Rufina tells Talita that Juanito is just being bad, tells her that Elena is very good. They talk a bit.

     Elena continues to try to get Juanito out of hiding, She tells him if he doesn't want to be with her, she will go. "Adios, Juanito", he folds a corner of the covers down, looks out. She walks to the door, says she loves him a lot, and "Adios" one more time, she then opens and closes the door (she stays inside). He jumps up, says "Elena, don't go. I love you a lot". She comes back, they laugh and cry at the same time (You could strip a gear that way).

     Chelo and Aurorita continue talking, there is a knock at the door. Chelo panics, tells Aurorita to say she isn't home.

     In Gurero's room, he is talking to his gang, about Don Francisco, and how good he has been to them. He then chases them from the room.

     The knock at the door is a young man we havn't seen before, but Chelo seems to know him. Vanessa, I need help here again. Who is this?.

     Elena and Juanito have reached a point that they can talk rationally, he tells her that Simona does evil things. She finally gets him to the point that he wants to meet Talita, Elena goes to get her. As she comes downt the stairs, the phone rings. As no one is there, she answers it. It is Ernesto! Asking for Simona.

     To be continued...

 

Day 14 - The sucker is at the poker table  Author: Ben (---) Date:   08-18-03 19:31 PDT

     Elena is decending the stairs, when the phone rings. She answers, it is Ernesto! The voice sounds familiar, but before she can find out who is there, Simona storms up and grabs the phone. Ernesto asks who answered the phone, could her voice sound familiar to him? After Simona leaves, Elena delivers a monologue about 'that voice'.

     Talita is in the kitchen with Rufina, telling her about her family, when Elena comes in. She asks "Are we going?", Elena says "No, come with me", they go to see Juanito.

     At the judgeshop, Adolfo and Juan Alberto are talking. Juan Alberto is confused, he seems to think that all women are alike, and can't make up his mind if Elena is the exception, or if Silvia is. (Both are exceptional, just in wildly different ways). The phone rings, it is Ernesto, wanting to know where his mother is. Adolfo wants to know if "mama's boy" is lonely.

     Don Fermin is tuning a musical instrument (old beverage bottles hanging from a metal rack), and talking to Luis Pablo.

     Elena and Talita are sitting on the steps of the big house, talking. Juanito comes up, Elena introduces them. Juanito says that he is pleased that she came to his house, She asks "really?", he says yes, and shakes her hand. Simona appears behind them, watches a moment and leaves, no doubt to plot something nefarious. Elena leaves the young ones alone while she goes to get sandwiches.

     At the tavern, the boss is at his desk, talking to Don Francisco, who really wants Chelo. The boss doesn't think she is worth all this trouble. Don Francisco says that she is interesting. They continue their tactical plotting.

     Simona is miffed about the unauthorized personnel wandering around. She tells Rufina that when Mrs. Silvia returns, she will straighten things out. Rufina asks why Silvia would return, Simona tells her because she has written to Silvia and asked her to.

     Adolfo and Juan Alberto continue, the conversation has turned to Elena. Adolfo lists her virtues, she is good for Juanito, she is very pretty. Juan Alberto says that he isn't going down that path again, women are all alike. Adolfo reminds him that Elena is not like Silvia.

     Talita is up in Juanito's room, they are working on a model airplane (the Carvajal girls seem quite familiar with model airplanes). She repairs a wheel, he chases her around the room with it. She asks if he has a radio, they start moving furnature aside.

     Adriana and Jimena are talking about Ernesto, apparently he has stood up Adriana (or was it Jimena). Jimena is discouraging Adriana from seeing him, Adriana asks if she is her friend or not, she should be helping her.

     Juan Alberto returns home, sees Elena coming down the stairs, He asks about Juanito, she says he is upstairs with her sister, he asks how he is doing, she says very well. She goes up to find them dancing to the radio, she watches a moment. All are having a great time. She says that it is time to go, but Juanito doesn't want them to. She promises that Talita will come back again if he wants her to,

     Don Fermin and Lumara are having tea. He asks her if she has heard about Luis Pablo, she ask what about him, he tells her that someone is interested in the music he has written. She says that he will be famous, he won't need her. This brings up Elena's name, she is still jealous (probably will always be). Don Fermin tells her that perhaps Luis Pablo will come back to her.

     Chelo is about to leave for the 'clinic', She is telling Aurorita that she doesn't want to go, but she feels that she has to for Talita and Elena.

     At Ernesto's place, he and Lalo are interrupted by the doorbell. It is Jimena, she says the dreaded "I have to talk with you", Lalo leaves them alone. Ernesto offers her a chair, asks what they have to talk about, she tells him "Adriana", tells him that Adria is with his child. Ernesto says that it is a lie, she disagrees. He wants to know how Adriana can be pregnant when it is Jimena that he loves. She tells him that she wants nothing to do with him. He attempts to become most persuasive.

     Oscar and Luis Pablo are at home talking, Oscar asks him about Elena, then about Lumara. He seems quite amused at Luis Pablo's excess of women.

     Elena and Talita return home, they talk to Aurorita. Talita is impressed by the house. she goes into the other room. Elena tells Aurorita that she is concerned about poor Talita, that she doesn't have enough time to spend with her.

     Juan Alberto is tucking Juanito in for the night. Juanito wants to talk a bit, he says that Elena is very pretty, Juan Alberto agrees. Juanito says that Talita is also, and is very likeable. why can't they live here? Juan Alberto says that it is not possible, Juanito wants to know why not. Juan Alberto sits on the edge of the bed and tells him that Elena has her own family, she should be with them. Juanito suggests that if Juan Alberto were to marry Elena, then he would have both a mother, and as sister. He settles back, satisfied with that solution.

     Apparently, Ernesto at his most persuasive, is most persuasive indeed. He has changed the subject from Adriana to them, he tells Jumina that he loves her, he wants her "Yo te amo, ... te quiero". They kiss.

     Luis Pablo knocks on Elena's door, she invites him in. (OK, this sequence is confusing to me, the next time we see Luis Pablo and Elena is in the garden, the time after that, they have been joined by everyone who lives at the apartment, sitting on chairs and watching as Don Fermin and/or Luis Pablo sing love songs to her, the next couple of times we see them Lumara is getting madder and madder. It is as if Luis Pablo had said to ELena "Lets go entertain the neighborhood by having me sing love songs to you until Lumara either has a stroke or strangles you with your own hair" and Elena said "Why not, I have nothing to live for anyway, and it should be entertaining. And, if I live, it might be fun".)

     And while that is going on, Juan Alberto and Adolfo talk a bit about what a good girl Elena is, how she is pretty and good for Juanito, and what a bad girl Silvia is, and how she is bad for Juanito.

     At the tavern, the boss has Chelo in his office, she tells him that she has been sick, he tells her that her health might suffer more if she doesn't go along with Don Francisco. He then waddles his big belly around the table and tries to charm her into agreement. She shys away, he grabs her wrist and pulls her closer, in a scene reminiscent of Gomez and Morticia Addams (If you don't know what I am referring to here, 1 - I'm showing my age, and 2 - your education has been sorely lacking).

     Later, we see Chelo in Don Francisco's office, so apparently the boss was most convincing. Don Francisco is doing his melodramatic best to win her over, but she isn't cooperating. Why is he fixated on Chelo? Obviously, the other bar maid (using the term 'maid' loosely), the one who was dusting her cleavage in the dressing room and telling Chelo how great Don Francisco is, she would do 'anything' for Don Francisco, so why does he bother with Chelo? I guess it is the challenge. Or a power trip.

     Later that night, we see Juan Alberto in bed, remembering Juanito wanting him to marry Elena, and thinking what a good girl she is because of the way Juanito likes her, and how she had told him that she had no sweetheart. And, in her bed, we see Elena, thinking of Juan Alberto, and what a bad girl she is, because of Ernesto and how she is unworthy of Juan Alberto.

     Speaking of Ernesto, he is gamboling (no, that is what he was doing with Jimena), gambling, with some serious card players. You know, "Isn't this a game of chance?", "No, not the way he plays it" guys. A word of advice to Ernesto, when you sit down to play poker, look around for the sucker. If you don't see one, get up, it is you!". So, we see Ernesto, Mr. "I raise 1,000", have his three kings lose to three aces, and that is only the begining. If he has two big ones, the guy with the moustache has three little ones, and soon Mr. Moustache offers Ernesto credit. By the end, Ernesto is deep in debt, and has promised to pay up tomorrow.

     And, Jimena returns to Adriana's place, where she tells Adriana that Ernesto is not gonna help with her pregnancy. She does not say "He called you a liar, and so I let him kiss me", but that is what had happened.

     Next morning, Elena, getting ready to leave for work, asks Chelo, who is getting ready for bed, how things are going. Chelo says fine, and you? She wants to know how Talita liked Juanito, Elena says that they hit it off well, Coversation then turned to things like Juan Alberto, his wife, and divorce.

     And a taxi pulls up to the Mexico office of the RIAA, Luis Pablo and guitar get out. He goes in, finds his fan/benefactor from a few nights ago when he and the Decibles were playing. That gentleman wishes him luck and passes him on to another person, behind a large desk, with several gold records on the walls. This fellow is amused by Luis Pablo's lack of experience, but he does agree to listen to him.

     Lumara and Guero are talking about queen Elena, or is it princess Elena. They don't agree on that, and Lumara isn't sure she can trust him, because he wants Elena, but then if he gets her, that means that Luis Pablo doesn't, which is fine with Lumara.

     And Ernesto comes by the big house, all happy and glad-hand and cheerful, Juan Alberto is getting a headache. Eventually, Ernesto sits at Juan Alberto's desk, and stares at Adolfo until he takes the hint an leaves them alone. Ernesto needs money, but Juan Alberto isn't giving him any, Ernesto says that whatever may happen will be Juan Albertos fault.

     After hearing him sing, the recording industry folk are impressed with Luis Pablo, they think he has a lot of talent.

     And Elena and Juanito have been out and about, they are walking back to the big house, with glasses of frozen fruit juice, and are talking. Juanito asks her if she has a boyfriend, when she says no, he seems pleased. He spends a little time matchmaking, but as they approach the gate to Juan Alberto's property, Juanito pulls her aside, so that Ernesto doesn't see them as he drives away. Elena asks who that was, Juanito says just his uncle.

     Later that evening, Adolfo happens to be leaving for the day at the same time as Elena, he offers her a ride home, she accepts, they leave together. Simona sees them go, rushes in to tell Juan Alberto that they left together, that such carrying on is terrible, blah, blah, blah. Juan Alberto is not amused, tells her to not bother him. She makes a face at his back, but leaves.

     Adolfo and Elena talk on the way to her home, he offers to take her sister to the clinic, since he is there anyway. Elena doesn't want to trouble him, he says it won't be any trouble at all. They arrive, he waits at the car (the gang on the corner looks at him like he's fresh meat). Elena goes in to get Chelo, who panics at the thought of her secret being, once again, exposed.

     To be continued...

 

Day 15 - Some happiness  Author: Ben (---)  Date:   08-20-03 01:47 PDT

     Adolfo is driving Elena home, it is late and he offers to drive Chelo to work at the clinic also. Besides, he would like to meet Elena's sister. They arrive, he waits at the car while Elena goes in to get Chelo, who is worried at the lateness of Elena's arrival. But, when she hears that Adolfo wants to meet her, and to drive her to the clinic, she fast talks her way out of it. Elena goes out to where Adolfo is waiting, and being watched by Guero's gang, and tells him that Chelo doesn't want to bother him with driving her. He says OK, they exchange "until tomorrow"s, and he leaves (the gang members wave). As Elena starts back to the apartment, Guero steps out of the shadows "One moment, Princess, one moment". Elena isn't buying whatever he is selling, she says so and pushes on past. The gang members think this is hilarious, until one of them gets his ears boxed.

     At Ernesto's place, he is bemoaning his lack of funds and Juan Alberto's lack of generosity while Lalo sorts through his CD collection (is he having a sale?). The doorbell rings, it is Adriana. Fearing for his life, Lalo heads into the other room to "watch a movie", as Ernesto and Adriana begin to argue. After a moment, she asks him what has him upset, he tells her he desperately needs money, and Juan Alberto won't give him any. She asks why he didn't ask her first, she has money. "You have money?", "Sí", they kiss, she writes a check.

     Juan Alberto leaves the office, thinking about what Simona had said about Elena and Adolfo going off together...

     Chelo is peering around the corner in the apartment, afraid that Elena has brought Adolfo in. When Elena returns alone, she asks if he believed her, Elena says yes. Chelo says that she has to go, she is very late, but stops when Elena tells her that Adolfo really did want to meet her. She then heads off to work.

     At the tavern, Chelo is talking to the bartender when Don Francisco comes up, saying "You are a little late, but you are here", and he smiles an blows her a kiss. She looks like something she ate doesn't agree with her. Or is that something about to eat her?

     Talita and Oscar are talking, he says something about marriage, she asks who, he says you, she says but I am a little girl. She is flattered and amused, but isn't taking him seriously.

     At the big house, Juan Alberto questions Adolfo about taking Elena home last night. Juan Alberto seem to have a headache.

     Ernesto and Lalo are in a much better mood, they are watching a sporting event on TV. Someone scores, Ernesto kicks the wall. Could our boy be betting on sports too?

     Chelo is talking to Aurorita about how Adolfo had wanted to take her to the clinic.

     Elena reports to Juan Alberto upon her arivial. He questions her about Adolfo taking her home, says that Juanito is alone too much, suggests that she should move in. She doesn't want to be any trouble, and doesn't want to leave her home. He seems set on his course.

     Jimena is telling Adrian she was stupid to give Ernesto money

     Oh oh, the sucker is back at the poker table. Erneto is losing again (or at least Mr Moustache is winning. Mr Moustache mentions credit again, Erneto looks over at Don Francisco, who nods. He is getting pretty deep here. (I suppose it is too much to hope that he will simply be hauled out into the desert and left with broken kneecaps.)

     Adolfo and Juan Alberto are talking about Juanito, Elena, and Elena's family.

     Elena and Aurorita, eating dinner. (What are they saying?) Toward the end of the conversation, Elena says something about "that man is the light of my soul", while Andrea Bocelli sings in the background.

     Adriana and Jimena are talking, Adriana says she does stupid things (like giving Ernesto money) because she love him. They talk more, she says that her mother and her father are no help to her.

     Luis Pablo and Don Fermin are talking as they play a game involving tiles and racks - scrabble? Don Fermin seems to be Luis Pablo's manager now, Luis Pablo wants to have Elena look at a contract before

he signs it.

     Ernesto continues to lose... He is starting to sweat and shake a little. Mr Moustache looks over at Don Francisco, who is still sitting in the shadows, and nods.

     Elena, Talita, and Luis Pablo are in the apartment, Talita and Luis Pablo seem to be trying to get Elena to agree to something. First she says "not without Chelo" and then she agrees. Everyone his happy.

     Cut to what might be called a patio boat. It is a flat topped boat with a catamaran hull, with a tent like structure to provide shade. On board, we see the Decibles (hear them, too), Luis Pablo, Don Fermin, Aororita, Oscar, and the Carvajal sisters. Could this be a celebration of Luis Pablo's being discovered by the recording industry? Don Fermin, in mariachi garb, sings. Elena is watching Don Fermin, Luis Pablo is watching Elena, Chelo and Aurorita are preparing food, and Oscar and Talita are holding hands. Elena glances over at the youngsters, their hands separate, although Oscar's seems to stick on Talita's leg for a bit. Luis Pablo says something romantic to Elena, she looks troubled.

     Juan Alberto watching over Juanito playing with a soccer ball and a couple of other boys. Why doesn't he get dad to show him some moves? (We all know that Saúl knows them all) Juan Alberto keeps seeing Elena wherever he looks. The headache causes halucinations?

     Rebeca returns, Simona tells her all the latest gossip in the household. Rebeca asks about Juan Alberto, Simona tells her he is out with Juanito, she looks amazed (arn't fathers of his social strata allowed to be fathers?) Rebeca calls Ernesto, they make a date for dinner.

     Back on the patio boat, Luis Pablo sings to Elena, Lumara isn't here so she is probably safe. In spite of the fact that Elena doesn't want Luis Pablo's love (or doesn't feel worthy of it), she does enjoy the attention.

     Rebeca and Ernesto dine. At the club, Adriana and Jimena are looking for him. It seems out of character for him to stand up a couple of young lovelys for dinner with his mother, but then, he probably figures that he has already gotten all the money he can out of Adriana, and his mother should be a softer touch. Or perhaps she has more influence with Juan Alberto. She asks about his love-life, he tells her there is a girl that is interesting, very interesting. He also mentions Porta Viarta, is he planning a trip? Perhaps for his health?

     The Carvajal girls return home, Chelo is upset with Elena, asks her "What's up with you?", Elena insists "Nothing", she gives a look to Talita who takes the hint and leaves. Chelo seems to be thinking that Elena should have been having a better time on their outing, Elena gets offended and storms into the other room, slamming the door.

     In new york, Silvia is tearing up a letter, says something about Simona, stupidity. Says she is going to Mexico real soon now. She seems to be both upset that she has to go back, and looking forward to taking control again (apparently she has forgotten how unforgiving Juan Alberto was when she had to leave). She says that Simona had told her that some girl was after Juan Alberto, well she can take care of that. She also says something about "Muy pasionada", I'm not sure if she is talking about Juan Alberto or the lover she had to leave behind, I suspect it is Juan Alberto though.

     Rebeca and Juan Alberto, gets JA to write a check, he tells her not one cent more.

     Lumara and guero are in her room, he is laying on her bed, watching her exercise. She has her back to him, and he really seems to be enjoying the view, especially certain streching exercises. She is still talking about that hipocrite, Elena.

     Elena and Juanito are working on his studies, he is asking about Talita, does she have a boyfriend? Elena says no. Just to show how much she knows, the scene shifts to:

     Talita and Oscar, at the kids playground. With children on the swings behind them, he asks her to be his girlfriend, she accepts. They kiss. He looks thoughtful, she looks very happy.

     Judgeshop, Adolfo and Juan Alberto are talking, Juan Alberto mentions that Ernesto is going to Puerto Vallaarta. Adolfo thinks that is swell.

     Elena and Juanito are on the lawn at the big house, Rebeca comes by, starts to talk to Elena, Juanito says something smart-ass. She tells him that his uncle is leaving tomorrow, Juanito is so enthusiastic that Elena calls him on it. Rebeca tells her that it is ok, she leaves.

     At what appears to be a party, we see Jimena, Gustavo, Mrs Gustavo, and, in the background, an unidentified male, Jimena mentions Ernesto, Gustavo gives his full name, Mrs Gustavo says something about his mother, Jimena says "Rebeca?", Gustavo squelches the conversation. (I really wonder what the history of Gustavo is. Could one of you explain what they are talking about here? Please?)

     At Ernesto's place, Lalo peeks through the peephole in the door, tiptoes over to Ernesto and tells him it is Adriana, They ignore her, he is waiting for a call from Rebeca.

     Ernesta and Rebeca, at the steps outside the big house. She gives him money (not enough). She tells him that Juan Alberto had said not one cent more. He starts to leave, they arrange for her to take him to the airport tomorrow.

     Luis Pablo has his recording contract. He looks pleased.

     Elena is walking down the steps outside the big house and down the walkway, she meets Juan Alberto. He asks if she is leaving, she says yes, Juanito is watching TV. He wants to talk to her for a moment. She asks if there is a problem with her work, he says no, to the contrary, he is pleased with her work. They talk a bit about Juanito, Elena thinks that he should start going to a school with other children, that the socialization would be good for him. Juan Alberto agrees. Simona comes out of the house and spies on them. They finish their conversation, Elena leaves, he walks toward the house with as much of a smile on his face as we have seen so far.

     Ernesto on phone, talking about about money and tomorrow (but isn't he leaving town tomorrow?) He calls someone else who won't give him anthing. He seems to be going through his address book, looking for someone to touch.

     There does seem to be a party going on, Jimena, Gustavo, Mrs Gustavo (someone calls her Cristina), and Adriana and some other people are wondering around with drinks, or sitting and chatting. Jimena asks Adriana what is happening with Ernesto, she says nothing, Jimena indicates that she will go after him, Adriana says "You can't", looking like "You better not".

     Luis Pablo and Don Fermin are sitting on the steps at the apartments, talking about Luis Pablo's future. Don Fermin give him the benefit of his expertise with the ladies, with reference to Carvajal ladies in particular.

     Juan Alberto is dreaming. In the dream, he dances with a lady wearing a slinky dress that leaves her shoulders bare. The way they move, we can only see her back, her long black hair. Now he is dreaming of another girl, or at least another dance. This one wears a different dress, lower in the back, exposing her shoulders and a fair amount of cleavage. Her hair is up, exposing her neck, she is wearing classy jewelry at her ears. It is Elena, she is lovely. They kiss, they dance, they are most happy. He closes his eyes, she turns into - Silvia, looking demonic! Juan Alberto awakes, his wonderful dream ruined. He whispers Elena's name.

     Elena, Luis Pablo, Talita and Oscar are sitting in the garden at the apartments. They are talking about Luis Pablo's future as a recording star. Talita asks him to put in a good word for her at the studio, Elena repremands her. They are laughing and happy, Elena and Talita say good night and leave.

     Juan Alberto and Rebeca are at his desk, he is writing another check. She leaves, to go with Ernesto to the airport. As they leave, Adolfo arrives.

     In Juan Alberto's office, he and Adolfo start work, Adolfo says he saw Ernesto and Rebeca on his way in, Juan Alberto tells him she was going with Ernesto to the airport. Adolfo thinks Ernesto being gone will be an improvement. He mentions that Juan Alberto will be alone with señorita Elena, and chuckles. Juan Aldofo looks moon-struck at the idea.

     Ernesto and Rebeca are at airport, he has his ticket, she wishes him well and leaves. He looks worried.

     Oscar and Luis Pablo at breakfast. Oscar asks how long it will take for Luis Pablo to become famous. Luis Pablo asks him how it is going with the job as a mechanic, he says no, he didn't get it. Luis Pablo tells him he should study. Oscar asks Luis Pablo if Elena likes him (Luis Pablo), he says that he doesn't know. Oscar says that Talita is his girlfriend, Luis Pablo is doubtful, but Oscar assures him that it is true.

     Juanito and Elena are talking, about him going to school. He isn't too thrilled about the idea, but she tells him that he will make lots of friends, and that his father wants him to go. Juanito decides that it will be OK if he does make lots of friends.

     Elena and Juan Alberto on steps, Juanito playing in the mud under a bush. They talk, not as boss and teacher, but as friends. Meanwhile, in New York, Silvia can't sleep, she is plotting her return to Mexico. Elena and Juan Alberto continue to talk.

     To be continued...

    

DAYS 16-20:

 

Day 16 - A bracelet, and a trick  Author: Ben (---)  Date:   08-20-03 18:21 PDT

     Juan Alberto and Elena are watching Juanito at play, and talking, talking as friends, not as employer and employee. Juanito is digging in the garden, under a bush. Occasionally, he puts a treasuer into a plastic glass he is holding. Juan Alberto is attired in a blue shirt with an open collar and a sweater, he is being friendly, supportive of Juanito in his search for garden wildlife, and an all around swell guy. This supports my theory that the tight collars and neckties he usually wears restricts the flow of blood to his brain, so that when he wears them, he is a somehow different, ridgid, restrictive person.

     Ernesto and Lalo talk, (Didn't we last see him at the airport, about to leave for his health? Or did he cash in his ticket, knowing that the last money he might get from Juan Alberto is the money to go far away) Lalo suggests Adriana as a source of funds, Ernesto calls her.

     We see a toy clown on a table. Of course, also at the table are Don Fermin and Luis Pablo.

     Elena comes into the kitchen to ask a favor of Rufina, notices Simona lurking. Elena whispers something into Rufina's ear, and leaves. Simona demands to know what she said, Rufina tells her no, but then reveals enough information for Simona to figure something out.

     Chelo and Aurorita are in the kitchen,

     Ernesto and Adriana are talking, he is groveling for more money. She says she will have to ask her godfather, he grovels more, she says she will ask.

     Juan Alberto and Elena are taking Juanito to a marine life theme park (at least there is a killer whale on the sign above the entrance "Reino Marino".

     Adriana is at Gustavo's place, she is asking for money, lots of it. He laughs, asks what for. She tells him she needs it for Ernesto. He stops laughing, tells her no, she begs, he is rock solid in his refusal. He tells her that Ernesto is a money pit, that will consume all she has and want more, "no", he tells her, "no, no, no".

     Aurorita tells Chelo a magic phrase for Elena to use that will guarantee romance. Chelo says probably not with this man.

     At the park, Juanito is on the carousel, riding a brown horse. Elena is on the horse ahead, a black one, and behind Juanito, Juan Alberto is riding a white horse. Juanito urges his steed onward, but it cannot catch up to Elena's steed. They are all having a wonderful time.

     Gustavo appears to have brought in witnesses for the defense. At least, Jimena is telling Gustavo and Cristine about Adriana's need for money. Upon cross examination, she tells them that Adriana is pregnant by Ernesto.

     Don Fermin is sleeping in a chair by the garden. Some of the apartment rug rats steal his rug, his wig, that is. He wakes, complaining about the cold, notices that it is gone, sees it on the floor. The small thieves are hiding, vastly amused. He attempts to get mad at Talita and Oscar, who are watching all of this, Talita can't conceal her amusement, especiall when Don Fermin attempts to smooth the wig into place, telling her "Don't look at me" as he does so.

     Jimena continues to tell her parents about Adriana and Ernesto. Cristine asks why they didn't come to her father earlier, Jimena says he knows nothing about it. Gustavo repeats what she said, and laughs, in an un-funny way.

     At the park, Juanito, Elena, and Juan Alberto are eating snow cones (snow sundaes, actually). Elena tells him there is a surprise waiting for him, he say what, she says then it wouldn't be a surprise. Juanito turns to Juan Alberto who disavows all knowlege.

     Adriana shows up at Ernesto's place, he asks if she brought money (he did at least have the decency to kiss her first), she says no. He looks stricken, then she brings out her jewelry and gives that to him.

     Adolfo and Simona are talking, He says that Señorita Elena is good with Juanito, she says not as much as Señora Silvia when she returns, he tells her that Señora Silvia will not be returning, she says wait and see. Juanito, Juan Alberto, and Elena return, they are celebrating Juanitos 8th birthday. Elena and Juanito go off together, Adolfo tells Juan Alberto that he looks contented, he says that life is good. (But like Simona said, we will have to wait and see).

     Aurorita and Chelo are in the kitchen once again, talking about Elena. Chelo is concerned about the class difference between Elena and Juan Alberto.

     Juanito is at the table (which is suitably decorated), Adolfo and Juan Alberto standing by, when Elena brings in a cake (that must be as big as Juanito) with 8 candles flaming away. The adults sing a birthday song (badly enough that they break up in the middle of it) and blows out the candles.

     Ernesto gives some jewelry to Mr Moustache, who undervalues it, and says he really wants money.

     Juan Alberto has tucked in Juanito, and has been reading to him (How fatherly. I'm sure Señora Silvia will put an end to that foolishness when she returns!). Juanito takes the opportunity to get in some matchmaking.

     At the tavern, the bartender tells Chelo that Don Francisco is leaving soon, she is relieved to hear it.

     Next morning, Elena, wearing the teddy bear pajamas, is trying to talk herself out of any hopes she may have gotten yesterday. Chelo arrives home, "Elenita, what are you doing up", "I can't sleep", "Is there a problem?", "No... well..." Elena is troubled by the fact that things are going so well with Juan Alberto, and yet, she still remembers waking up in Ernesto's bed, and knows in her heart that she is scum, that Juan Alberto would be repelled if he knew what a terrible woman she is. Juan Alberto is, meanwhile, brushing his teeth, and comparing Silvia with Elena. In that comparison, Elena doesn't rate all that terrible.

     Chelo tries to comfort Elena, but Elena explodes, she doesn't want her good wishes, she doesn't want her good thoughts, she doesn't want her to ask about Juan Alberto. Juan Alberto is impossible, impossible!.

     At the big house, Juan Alberto is having breakfast, Adolfo arrives, Juan Alberto sends Simona off with a breakfast order for him.

     Elena comes out of the bedroom, remarking that she is late (apparently, when she finally got to sleep, she overslept). She and Chelo are back on good terms, Chelo wants to talk, but Elena says she has to go to work. As Elena leaves the apartments, Guero stops her, saying something about Chelo, and that she should listen to him. Luis Pablo, seeing the damsel in distress, comes over and rescues her. They walk off together.

     Juan Alberto and Adolfo continue to talk as Luis Pablo walks with Elena to the big house.

     Guero is with his gang, he is upset that he couldn't talk to Elena. He is pacing like a caged lion, the female gangmember says something, he kicks the fence that they are leaning against, they all fall down. He storms away.

     Elena is upstairs, with Juanito, who is still in pajamas. He is still excited about yesterday. She gets him up, by tugging on his pajama bottoms until he takes the hint and goes to get ready for the coming day.

     Adriana and Jimena talk, Jimena asks how things go with Ernesto, Adriana is excited, because she thinks that Ernesto loves her and wants to get married.

     Ernesto, however, is telling Lalo that Adriana's jewels wern't enough, and that he needs more money to get out of debt. Jimena's name comes up.

     At the judgeshop, Juan Alberto is having trouble concentrating on work. Adolfo is amused, he tell Juan Alberto "You are thinking to much about 'her'", Juan Alberto agrees. Adolfo tells Juan Alberto that he has observed that Juan Alberto is totally in love with Elena, Juan Alberto doesn't disagree. Adolfo asks "What are you going to do about Silvia?".

     Jimena is telling Adriana that Ernesto is to scummy to marry, Adriana defends him, says to Jimena "You don't understand", and Jimena replies "No, I don't understand".

     Elena and Juanito are playing with the model aircraft carrier that was Adolfo's birthday present for Juanito. Juanito is asking about Elena's family, he knows about (and likes) Talita, he asks for the other sister's name, Elena says "Chelo", Juanito asks "Is she pretty, like you?", Elena says "Thank you, yes, Chelo is pretty". "Does she have a sweetheart?", "No, no sweetheart". He wants Elena to live in his house, she says she can't, he suggest that the whole family move in, she repeats that they can't.

     Jimena has decided that Adriana is crazy, crazy for Ernesto. Adriana agrees. They go out.

     Luis Pablo and Don Fermin are walking, talking. Talking about Elena and Chelo, and the problem of Lumara. Guero follows them a bit, then rushes in front of them, says he has something for the galan, pulls out a knife, pushes the button and a blade appears. He shows them all sides of it, wants them to appreciate it fully.

     Gustavo goes to visit one of his friends, one of the men who had been at the party. He says that he wants to talk about Adriana.

     Having showed the knife to Luis Pablo, Guero now tries to cut him with it, but Luis Pablo manages to evade the knife and get behind Guero, with the knife arm out of the way. He hits Guero in the kidneys a couple of times and pushes him toward a garbage bin. Luis Pablo and Don Fermin then attempt to run away, but the taller of the gang members interfers. He also gets hit a couple of times in the kidneys, and pushed into a tree.

     Gustavo tells his friend (could it be Adriana's father?) about Ernesto, but he doesn't seem to concerned. He gets a phone call, his appointment has arrived. He ushers Gustave to the door, all friendship and happiness. Gustavo is concerned that he just doesn't get it.

     Ernesto is telling Adriana that the jewels wern't enough. She says that they were quite valuble, but he says he still needs more money.

     Simona is in the kitchen at the big house, She has good news, about Señora Silvia.

     Juan Alberto and Adolfo arive at the big house, they are still talking about Elena. Juan Alberto seems content to let things continue as they are, Adolfo points out that Elena has rights, that he should be more considerate of her desires, her feelings. Simona comes happily in, hands Juan Alberto a letter. "It's from Señora Silvia!"

     Guero's gang is at the hospital, arguing. Guero comes out, wearing a cast on his right arm (it looks good on him).

     Juan Alberto takes the letter over to Adolfo, tells him to take care of it. He then tells Simona that any further such letters should be taken directly to Adolfo, he is not to be disturbed with them.

     Elena and Juanito alre walking in the park. They hear a commotion, a girl has hit a dog with her bicycle. She appears to be OK, but the dog is on its side. Juanito takes off his jacket, they wrap the dog in it and pick it up.

     Ernesto and Adriana are in bed, he is still concerned about money. She wants to cuddle, he wants cash.

     Juan Alberto and Adolfo are laughing about the look on Simona's face when Juan Alberto told her that Adolfo was in charge of any Señora Silvia issues. While they are laughing, Juanito and Elena come in, Juanito is carrying the dog. Juanito tells Juan Alberto that they had rescued it, that he wanted to keep it. Juan Alberto ran his fingers across the dogs fur, smelled his fingertips and made a face. Juanito got a big tear in his eye and groveled a bit, Juan Alberto agreed to it. Juanito and Elena leave with the dog. Adolfo is pleased, the family now has a dog. This is progress.

     Chelo and Aurorita are talking, Chelo tells her that Elena seemd to be in love with her boss, both think this is good.

     Juan Alberto is in a store that sells jewelry. He has a small bag, too big for earrings, about the right size for a necklace. I wonder who it is for?

     Elena and Juanito are in his room, cleaning up the dog. Juanito is dabbing at it with some cotton, It is laying with its head in Elena's lap, while she pets it (I'm jealous).

     They go downstairs, where Simona pounces on them, she wants that beast out of the house right now. Juanito says that it is his pet, Simona disagrees, Elena tells her that he has his father's permission. Simona leaves, saying that the household is going to hell in a handbasket. As she leaves, Juan Alberto comes in, he asks to speak to Elena. Somewhat apprensively, she comes over to him, he gives her the jewelry box. She refuses it, sayint that it is much too much. She goes back upstairs, where Juanito is petting the dog, she starts to fuss with it too. Juan Alberto comes to the door, attracts Juanito's attention, calls him over (he is getting devious). He gives the box to Juanito, who takes it to Elena, give it to her. She sends Juan Alberto a "you are a manipulative jerk" look, but she has to accept it from Juanito. They open it, it is a gold bracelet, which Juanito places around her wrist. Elena gets flustered and flees the room, Juan Alberto follows after her. He stops her at the foot of the stairs, apologizes for the manipulation, but says that he really wanted her to have it. He actually touches her arm. Elena forgive him, they leave. Simona has been spying on them, she comes out muttering dire predictions about how unhappy Señora Silvia will be.

     Lumara is at home, watching TV. There is a knock at the door, it is Luis Pablo. She stands, adjusts her cleavage, and invites him in, He tells her that she has to keep Chelo's secret, she gets upset and asks him what he really wants.

     At the tavern, Don Francisco comes in, the boss, up on a ladder, remarks that he is early, Don Francisco announces that he has come for Chelo.

     Juan Alberto is driving Elena home. He apologizes again for manipulating her to accept the bracelet. Elena accepts both the apology and the bracelet. She seems to be having mixed feelings, pleased to be alone with Juan Alberto, but apprehensive that he will discover what an unworthy person she really is.

     To be continued..

 

Day 17 - Chelo is attacked.  Author: Ben (---)  Date:   08-22-03 00:04 PDT

     After having Juanito give Elena the gold bracelet. Juan Alberto drives her home.

     Don Franciso has arrived at the tavern before opening, he wants Chelo. The boss tries to talk him out of it, tries to divert him with a bottle of something colorless, but...

     Rebeca (ok, she is the one who went to Porto Vallarta) is on the phone with Ernesto. He is looking everywhere for money, desparate.

     Juan Alberto and Elena, in his car, at her place, talk. He goes so far as to touch her hand. (wow, the great romantic one).

     Don Francisco remembers Chelo telling him that she doesn't want anythig to do with him.

     Bossman continues to try to talk sense into him, but he has almost killed the bottle he was given.

     Luis Pablo and Don Fermin watch as Juan Alberto walks Elena to her door. Chelo is about to leave for work when they come in, Juan Albert greets Talita, is introduced to Chelo. A tour of the house consists of pointing at a couple of doors. He leaves, speaks to Luis Pablo and Don Fermin (good evening) as he goes to his car. They take an instant dislike to him (his car is too big).

     Elena showes her new bracelet to her sisters, it winds up on Chelo's wrist when she leaves for work.

     Adriana shows up at Ernesto's place, his first words are "did you get the money?" She hasn't, so he is upset. He tells her to go, she won't without a kiss, but he is most ungracous about it.

     Juan Alberto stops off at Adolfo's place on the way home, he tells him about taking Elena home. Nice family, ok living quarters.

     Luis Pablo comes in, asks Elena who was that man. He is the man I work for. She is upset that he questions her that way, she reminds him that "You and I are only frineds", he looks hurt.

     Juanito is talking to the dog, giving him a name. Napoleon? No, the dog refuses to respond. How about Jupi? The dog seems to like it. Simona comes into the room, tells him that the dog can't live there, that Rebeca will be upset when she returns.

     Elena is leaning against the wall, remembering Ernesto when she woke up in his bed. She thinks of this whenever any man expresses affection for her, and tonight two of them have.

     Midnight, and Juan Albert is having trouble getting to sleep. talking to himself about Elena.

     At the tavern, Don Francisco is in a good mood, except that he is drunk enough to have trouble walking over to Chelo. Unfortunately, he makes it, grabs her and attempts to kiss her (the patrons of the tavern make noises of dismay. Chelo pushes him away, he picks up a bottle and hits her with it. Now the patrons of the tavern are yelling and trying to get away from them, while the bartender vaults over the bar and runs to her assistance. Don Francisco's body guards look embarassed, but stand their ground. People are screaming, others are holding Don Francisco back, Chelo is sitting on the floor with blood running down her head. The bracelet has come off, it is on the floor near her. (An aside, I think the writers are just being mean about the bracelet.)

     Luis Pablo is in the garden, thinking about Elena's rejecton of him. The Decibles arrive, apparently they knew that Luis Pablo would need a little help here.

     The police arrive at the tavern, take Don Francisco in hand.

     The Decibles and Luis Pablo begin to sing outside Elena's apartment, Elena hears them and smiles, Don Fermin comes out (wig awry) wondering who is distrubing the peace. Aurorita comes out to see, she thinks this is great. Oscar wonders how he can convince Talita that this is in her honor. Lumara come out, looks upset, goes back in. Elena is standing at the window, Talita comes out of the bedroom, she thinks this is the best thing to happen lately.

     At the tavern, the singer (she of the powerded cleavage) is talking to the bartender about Chelo, she is concerned because Chelo is at the hospital alone. (Ah, the singer is named Yolanda.)

     Chelo arrives at the hospital, on an uncomfortable looking gurney, while at the apartment, a party is in full swing. Oscar, Talita, and Aurorita are serving refreshments, Elena and Luis Pablo are talking, Don Fermin comes over and suggests to Elena that she owes Luis Pablo a kiss...

     Yolanda arrives at the hospital, looking for Chelo, worried because she is alone. The fellow at the front desk is not too helpful, but she decides to wait.

     At the party, Oscar and Talita talk, she is impressed by the romance of it all. He attempts to take advantage of her mood and kiss her hand, she looks around to see if anyone is watching.

     Aurorita and Elena are inside, talking. She tells Elena that Luis Pablo loves her, Elena replies that she isn't sure. Elena thinks no man would want to marry her, she is unattractive. Aurorita disagrees, tells Elena that she is young, intelegent, pretty, ... As she lists Elena's good points, Elena thinks of Ernesto's bed (second time so far tonight), knowing that no matter what Aurorita says, if she knew the truth, what a bad girl she is, how she is soiled, unworthy, that Aurorita, and any man who might otherwise be interested in her, would push her away, would certainly not want to be her friend, let alone anything more.

     Simona is at the table in the kitchen, drinking coffee and bemoaning the current state of the household. The cream in the coffee hears her and curdles. Juan Alberto come in, he has a pitcher in his hand, he goes over to the counter where there is a cannister of cold water to put into the pitcher. Simona runs over to fill his pitcher for him, he tells her that he can do it, she tries to insist that it is not his place to fill pitchers. She is a pain in the neck...

     Yolanda is waiting at the hospital, when the boss from the tavern comes in, wanting to know how chelo is doing. The chat for a while, he seems to have his heart in the right place (somewhere within all that blubber) but for one reason or another, he had to go along with Don Francisco.

     Aurorita and Elena continue. Elena asks how anyone like (here she describes the way she sees herself), how this person can expect love. She says people don't understand these things, let alone forgive them.

     Juan Alberto is in his room, reading. Simona comes in with the water pitcher, loudly places it on a bedside table, asjusts it, also loudly, and goes over to tell Juan Alberto that she has brought it to him (unless he is deaf, he knows it already). He thanks her, dismisses her, she turns toward the door, but before she gets to it, she turns, comes back complaining about that beast of Juanito's. He couldn't possibly have given his permission, as that Elena had said. He tells her that indeed he did give his permission, she turns again to leave, but once again, turns back to tell him that when Señora Rebeca returns, she will be very unhappy. He tells her that Rebeca is a very minor member of the household. She counters that Señora Silvia will be really unhappy. He tells her, sternly, that Silvia does not live here, that she will never return to this house. He asks does she understand, she says yes and turns to leave. This time she does make it through the door. He has become so angry that he throws his papers back into the briefcase.

     At the hospital, the bossman and Yolanda continue to talk, it sounds like he is more worried about his (the taverns) reputation and future than about Chelo.

     At the apartments, Lumara is drinking, singing (poorly) some of the words from the songs that Luis Pablo had been singing to Elena, and talks to herself. I worry about her sanity.

     Luis Pablo and Oscar, in their apartment, Oscar wants Lunis Pablo to teach him to sing like he did to Elena. Oscar is in full song when Luis Pablo makes a sour note on the guitar and jumps up and leaves the apartment. No, he is not behaving as a lover of music would in such a situation, but he has seen Lumara approaching Elena's door, he is running to intercept. He is too late, Lumara has knocked on the door, and when Elena answers the door she sees them both, which doesn't make sense. Elena asks what's up, Luis Pablo says nothing, Lumara was just going home, Lumara says no, and threatens Elena's life (did she read in my summary of a couple of night ago about strangling Elena with her own hair? She certainly seems up for it tonight.) Luis Pablo steps between them, tries to maneuver Lumara away, but she breaks free and goes back, she has something to say to Elena. Luis Pablo comes back, Lumara starts to tell Elena what Chelo really does at night, but Luis Pablo walks her away. Elena goes back into her room, where she says to herself "That woman is crazy", but then she thinks of some of Chelo's strange behaviour, and how she wouldn't let Juan Alberto take her to work.

     At the big house, Juan Alberto goes in to check on Juanito, he is in a sleeping bag on the floor. Juan Alberto wants to know why, chuckles when he finds the dog snuggled in with Juanito.

     Luis Pablo returns to Elena, she wants to know what Lumara was saying about Chelo. As Luis Pablo tries not to tell her, someone comes to the door, looking for Chelo's sister. Elena says that she

is,

     At the hospital, the boss and Yolanda have been waiting a long time, he gives up and leaves. A bit later, Yolanda is allowed to see Chelo, who is sitting up in the bed (fetchingly attired in a sheet and three strips of adhesive tape on her forehead). Yolanda tells her that someone has been sent to get her sister. Chelo flips.

     And, the fellow at the door attempts to tell Elena and Luis Pablo about Chelo, but he is obviously not a great speaker. Finaly, Elena yells "Tell me. What are you saying". He finally tells her that Chelo works at the caberet.

     To be continued...

 

Day 18 - Elena, Eat that newspaper!  Author: Ben (---)  Date:   08-23-03 01:00 PDT

     Chelo has been injured bu Don Francisco at the tavern and is at the hospital. A messanger has been sent to inform Elena he tells her that Chelo works at the caberet.

     Elena does not take the news well, being told that Chelo has been injured, and that she does not work at the clinic after all. Aurorita and Luis Pablo tell her that it is true. After many tears, she leaves with the messanger and Luis Pablo.

     Oscar comes in, asks Aurorita where Elena and Luis Pablo are.

     The bossman is at the jail, talking to Don Francisco. Don Francisco says that he can't live in a place like this (jail - better get used to it)

     Chelo is dressed, sitting up in bed when Elena comes into the room. Ashamed of her cigarette-girl garb, Chelo pulls a sheet around herself, but Elena comes over, says "Chelo", and puts her arm around her. She simply hugs her sister, not saying anything for a while. Then she asks what happened, but before Chelo can answer, a doctor comes in, followed by a police officer. The doctor checks on Chelo, and tells her that someone has delivered her clothing, then the police officer begins to ask questions (probably better this way, Elena will hear what happened, and Chelo won't have to go over it twice).

     Juan Alberto comes into Juanito's room, Juanito is on the floor, with the dog. They sit on the couch and talk, Juanito is concerned that he might not be able to keep the dog, but he is sure that Elena would allow the dog. He decides that things would be best if Elena lived with them, Elena and Talita too.

     At the apartments, Talita comes out of the bedroom wanting to know why Aurorita is there, and where is Elena, Aurorita doesn't really say. Talita asks where is Chelo, and about that time, Elena returns, with Chelo (wearing the nurse costume). Chelo and Talita go into the bedroom, Aurorita tells her to not be judgemental of Chelo, that she needs compassion. The look Elena gives does not appear compassionate.

     Oscar asks Luis Pablo what is going on, Luis Pablo tells him, and then tells him to avoid Talita for a while, Oscar isn't too pleased.

     Adriana arrives at the office of the fellow Gustavo had visited, the one who had been too busy to really listen to Gustavo. He is indeed Adriana's father. The talk a bit, then he asks her what she needs, she tells him "Tres cientos mil pesos" - that would be 300,000 pesos. I don't know the exchange rate, but it looks like the cards were really really bad for Ernesto, and I understand a bit of Ernesto's desperation.

     At the big house, Juanito has the dog on a table, feeding him. Adolfo comes in the room, sits to talk to Juanito and pets the dog. He looks at his hand, begins a Lady Macbeth like attempt to clean his hand. Juan Alberto comes in, concerned that Elena isn't there, Adolfo says she was probably delayed by traffic.

     Elena, however, is at home, Talita comes into the room, asks about her work. Elena says that she isn't going to work, that she will telefone later. Talita asks Elena to tell her about Chelo, Elena looks stricken.

     Adriana's father wants to know why she needs the money, she says that she wants to go shopping at K-mart (or something equally evasive). He tells her that he will give her nothing, not one peso. He tells her that he knows about Ernesto de las Montero.

     Elena tells Talita that Chelo has done nothing bad, but that she shouldn't ask too many questions. She says that Chelo had been working to support them, so that they could go to school and get a better life, and that Chelo loves them very much, and that now it is their turn to be supportive of Chelo.

     At the big house, Simona comes in, telling Juan Alberto that he is wanted on the phone, he goes to answer, it is, of course, Elena, telling him that she won't be in today, that her sister has been injured. She asks him to tell Juanito, and promisies to be there tomorrow. Adolfo, Juanito (carrying the dog) and Simona come down the stairs to the parlor, where Juan Alberto is hanging up the phone. Adolfo goes over to Juan Alberto (the camera follows him) and Juanito stumbles, landing on his knees at the foot of the stairs. I'm not making any accusations, but Simona was behind him at the time. Juan Alberto tells Juanito that Enlena won't be there today, and he orders Simona to watch over the kid (poor kid!). She marches him away (we who are about to be tortured, salute you Simona).

     Ernesto is on the phone, still sounding like a PBS fundraiser. Someone named Cristina can't help him, he hangs up. He seems to think Adriana is his only chance.

     Adolfo and Juan Alberto talk, Adolfo is concerned about Elena and her sister.

     Talita and Oscar are walking, talking. Talita is concerned about her sister, Oscar puts an arm around her shoulders to comfort her (right...).

     Ernesto, on the phone. "Is Adriana there? Sorry Señora, thank you ". He hangs up as the door bell rings, it is Adriana. His first words as she comes are "Did you get the money?", she says no, there is not chance she can get it. He orders her out, but she refuses. He looks like he wants to turn her upside down and shake her until the money falls out.

     Elena and Chelo talk. Actually, Elena talks, and Chelo cries and evades. Instead of condeming Chelo, (as Chelo seems to expect), Elena is saying that she understands and appreciates the sacrifices Chelo has made to suport her and Talita. She is saying "Please, Chelo, let me help you get through this", but all Chelo can think of is the fact that her secret is out, that the police are involved, and that she is scum. She is so deep in her depression, guilt, and self loathing that Elena cannot reach her.

     Ernesto must have been reading my previous comment, at least he is shaking Adriana now (she is right side up though). He physically throws her out the door and slams it behind her, leaving her in the hallway, screaming "Ernesto, please", while he goes and pours himself a drink.

     At the judgeshop, Juan Alberto and Adolfo talk about Elena and Juanito.

     Adriana is walking, thinking about Ernesto throwing her out the door. She decides to go back and confront him.

     Ernesto is talking to Lalo, who suggests that he should be able to get money from Juan Alberto, but Ernesto thinks Rebeca is his best bet. Chelo is afraid that this scandal will rub off on Elena.

     Elena and Chelo continue. both are in tears now, both feel guilt (after all, if Elena hadn't been going to school, she could have pitched in on the support issue.

     Luis Pablo and Don Fermin talk, Don Fermin is worried about Chelo. He has a picture of her that he cherishes. Luis Pablo wants him to wait, not do anything rash. Don Fermin says that this will affect Elena too. About this time, Lumara comes in, she wants to talk to Luis Pablo, they leave together.

     Jimena, Gustavo, and Cristine are talking about Ernesto, Cristine asks if he isn't related to "Juan Montiel", Gustavo tells her no, that his (Juan Alberto's) parents died in an accident, and that he had been raised by Ernesto's parents. Jimena asks if there had been something between Gustavo and Rebeca (I want to know too), which starts a fight between Gustavo and Cristine (so apparently there either was something, or at least Cristine beleives that there was something going on between her husband and Rebeca).

     Lumara and Luis Pablo talk, she seems subdued, she no longer has Chelo's secret to use to threaten either Elena or Luis Pablo, but she does care about him, want him. He is upset, about Chelo's problems affecting Elena, no doubt, but he doesn't want anything from Lumara.

     Adriana has arrived back at Ernesto's place, but he won't let her in. He closes the door against her, leaving her sobbing in the hallway, and calls Lalo for assistance.

     Juan Alberto is at the big house, sitting in the parlor reading a newspaper. Juanito comes in, very down. Apparently Simona isn't a lot of fun (but we knew that already). He wants Elena, Juan Alberto says she will be there tomorrow. Juanito suggests (not for the first time) that it would be so much more convenient if Elena lived with them. Juanito suggests that they go and see Elena now. And Talita too.

     Elena, in the fetching teddy bear pajamas, is talking to Aurorita, who wants to know if she and Chelo talked. Elena says yes, they talked a lot. They talked, but Chelo won't tell her everything, Aurorita says that she doesn't want to talk about that man, Elena jumps on the slip - "what man, Aurorita, whi is that man?"

     Meanwhile, back at the tavern, that man (Don Francisco, for those of you who have lost your place) is at a table with the boss, blaming all his troubles on Chelo. One of the bartenders is listening closely. It seems that Don Francisco feels that his problems would dissapear if Chelo were to dissapear.

     Adriana is walking home, night has fallen, she stops at a telephone pole to hold herself upright while she cries and remembers Ernesto's treatment of her.

     Juan Alberto is telling Juanito that it is late, they shouldn't just drop in on Elena unannounced. He asks if Juanito is ready to sleep, Juanito says no, and negotiates a better deal. Juanito also compares and contrasts Elena and Simona as caretakers for children, Elena is better. Juan Alberto laughs.

     Adriana lights up a cigarette, thinking about how Gustavo had read her the riot act about Ernesto, and how Ernesto had taken her jewelry. She starts to cross the street, (remember children, never jaywalk!). She has been hidden by a parked van, oncoming traffic can't see her. As she steps into the street, she is hit by a car, which skids sideways into a parked car, crushing her to death. (Yep, them cigarettes will kill you!).

     In Puerto Vallarta, Rebeca's phone rings. She answers, it is Ernesto. He wants to know if she can come home tomorrow. She says she will, then asks her hosts if it would be any trouble for them if she went back tomorrow, they say that would be fine.

     Juan Alberto has tucked Juanito in for the night, he kisses the kid on the forehead and starts to leave. Juanito points out that the dog is under the covers with him. Juanito suggests that it would be cool if Elena was his mother. Juan Alberto says no, that is not possible (but he is thinking about it).

     At the Linares household, Gustavo and Cristine are on good terms once again. The phone rings, it is a notice that Adriana has been killed.

     Elena shows up for for work, greets Simona, who jumps all over her about the dog. Elena tells her that it isn't up to Simona, that Juan Alberto has given permission for Juanito to have the dog. Simona storms away. Elena notices the newspaper on the table, picks it up, looks furtively around. Is she hoping to keep Juan Alberto from reading about the 'scandal' at the tavern? She notices that the headline is "Escandalo en Cabaret" and the story appears to be at least four colums.

     Ernesto is talking to Lalo, he still hopes to be saved by Adriana, or perhaps her mother. The doorbell rings. Lalo peeks through the peephole, tiptoes back to Ernesto, they tiptoe further into the room and whisper. Must be the collection agency.

     Before Elena can eat the newspaper (although she is thinking about it), Juan Alberto comes into the parlor, he asks after her sister, she says she is fine, he tells her that her friends missed her here yesterday.

     Ernesto is peeking out the window, Lalo is checking the hallway. The coast appears to be clear. They make a run for it.

     Elena starts to walk up to Juanito's room, with the paper. Juan Alberto asks for it, she gives it to him. He sits down to read, she thinks her life is just about over.

     Ernesto and Lalo make it to the car, but before they can get away in it, another car blocks them, and a couple of the large, beefy type collection agents come to talk to them.

     Elena makes it to Juanito's room, he shouts her name, runs over and gives her a big hug. They agree that each has missed the other yesterday. He tells her he has something to tell her, she asks what.

     Chelo, at the apartment, is reading the front page of the newspaper. "Scandal in Caberet", she tells Aurorita that her name is Mudd (well, I suppose in Mexico they would use a different idiom, but that's what she means). Aurorita tries to calm her down a bit.

     And, Juanito tells Elena that his father would like for Elena to be Juanito's mother...

     To be continued...

     Body count: 1 in 18 episodes, 142 episodes to go.

 

Day 19 - A first kiss  Author: Ben     Date:   08-24-03 09:38 pdt

     Ernesto is leaving town. All hope for the required money is gone, so, once the coast is clear, he and Lalo, Lalo with the suitcase, Ernesto with an airline ticket, head for the car. But, before they can get away, the collection agency arrives.

     Juanito is agitating for Elena to be his mother, so she can live in the big house and be with them allways.

     Mr Moustache seems to feel that a dead Ernesto will never pay up, but a live one might, so he lets Ernesto live.

     Elena tries to explain that there is more to being his mother than just him (or her) wanting it to happen. Juan Alberto must want it a lot, and there are other people involved, other obligations.

     Ernesto arrives in Puerto Vallarta. Rebeca introduces him to her friends. He corrects her, his name is not "Ernestito", it is "Ernesto".

     Adriana's funeral is well attended. Her parents are devistated, as are Gustavo and his family.

     Juan Alberto hasn't read the paper yet, Elena is reading the article when Adolfo arrives, she walks off with the newspaper.

     Chelo is talking to Aurorita about the newspaper article. She is down to two strips of tape on her forehead. At this rate, she will be completely healed in another three days.

     Guero reads the paper, sees possibilities. The gang makes jokes.

     Aurorita brings out the Tarot deck, either the deck or the newspaper is predicting some sort of court troubles for Chelo, who is worried about justice when a evil but wealthy man goes up against a good, but poor, girl.

     Lumara and Guero talk. He tells her that his friend, the man in the newspaper article, will take care of Chelo, and thus, Elena.

     Elena and Juanito finally give the dog a bath. Simona looks on with disapproval. (I'm surprised at that. I would think, based on the way Adolfo was rubbing his hand after touching the dog, that even Simona would be happy about it getting cleaned up.)

     Chelo and Talita are having breakfast, there is a knock at the door, Guero, with the newspaper. Chelo asks Talita to leave, he comes in like he owns the place.

     Juanito asks Elena where is the bracelet. She thinks about when she was showing her bracelet to Talita and Chelo, and how it had been on Chelo's wrist when she left for work that night. She thinks "My God, the bracelet, Chelo had it". She tells Juanito that it is at home, he looks like he thinks she should wear it always, but says "OK".

     Guero offers to use his influence with Don Francisco to help Chelo, if she will use her influence with Elena to help him. Chelo points to her wound, says that she is the injured party.

     Don Fermin and Luis Pablo are talking near Chelo's door, when Chelo and Guero come out. Guero is in fine spirits, taunting Don Fermin as he leaves. Luis Pablo asks if they can talk to Chelo, she takes them back into her apartment.

     Gustavo, Cristine, and Jimena are talking, mourning Adriana. Gustavo asks Jimena a question, she replies that the accident occured near the apartment of Ernesto. They are joined by Adriana's father, Roberto, who wants to talk to Jimena. He asks what she knows about this Ernesto de los Monteros.

     And, said Ernesto de los Monteros is now in Puerto Vallarta, with his mother, Rebeca. He is getting acquanted with Puerto Vallarta, and with one of Rebeca's hosts (female, of course. Also relatively young and pretty. Wealthy? We shall see). He is being his most charming, she is enjoying it.

     Meanwhile, back at Gustavo's, Jimena is answering Roberto's question. I'm not sure that I heard the word 'pregnant', but she does tell him enough to bring him to tears. Jimena runs from the room, in tears herself.

     At Chelo's place, Don Fermin and Luis Pablo are talking with her, telling her that what has happened is not her fault, that she is not alone, that they are there with her, as are her friends.

     At the big house, the phone rings, Simona answers. It is Rebeca, she wants to talk to Juan Alberto, but Simona wants to tell her about how things are going to hell in a handbasket, how señorita Elena is acting like the lady of the house, which is causing earthquakes, floods, and plagues of large furry beasts. Rebeca doesn't want to hear this, she wants Juan Alberto, would Simona tell Juan Alberto that Ernesto is in Puerto Vallarta, with her. She hangs up, leaving Simona sputtering, she hadn't finished complaining.

     Don Fermin and Luis Pablo have left Chelo, and Talita comes in.

     Elena is in Juanito's room, Juan Alberto comes in looking for Juanito. She tells him that Juanito is eating, She is apprensive, afraid that Juan Albreto has been reading the newspaper and somehow knows everything. Juan Alberto is also acting strangely subdued, speaking very quietly, almost hesitantly. He asks if she is leaving for the day, she says yes. He wants to do something for her(I can't make out what), she says no thank you, she cannot accept. She turns to leave, he touches her arm, stopping her as he says her name. She stops (music starts up in the background). She leans towards him, he kisses her, she kisses back. A tender, gentle, first kiss. (Andrea Bocelli is singing his heart out). By the end of the commercial break, the kiss has developed some passion, Andrea Bocelli some volume.

     Chelo is talking with Talita, who wants to know about the clinic. Apparently no one has explained the secret, the scandal, to her.

     Elena and Juan Alberto are really getting into this kissing thing now. They pause for a second, he says her name, his hands caress her neck, her face. She says no, no, no (but her lips say yes). She says this cannot be, he stops her words with a kiss. She says the are too different, he stops her words with a kiss. She says perhaps, he kisses her, she turns away, runs for the door, leaving him crying out "Elena!".

     Lalo is at Ernesto's apartment, running up the phone bill, when the doorbell rings. It is Jimena, who is looking for Ernesto. Lalo tells her that he is no longer in the city, she says she wants to tell him about Adriana. "Adriana?" "Yes, Adriana is dead" He is shocked.

     Juan Alberto is on the phone, calling Adolfo. He asks if Adolfo is busy, says he will be right over, and hangs up. (He is badly in need of advice).

     Talita and Chelo continue, Talita wants to help, Chelo says to help by studying. They argue a bit in a good natured manner, hug.

     Elena is on a bus, reliving the kiss, from about nine different camera angles, in slow motion. She repremands herself, says that this cannot be.

     Lalo is adjusting to the fact of Adriana's death, Jimena wants to know where Ernesto is, and when he will return. Lalo doesn't know, she starts for the door, he stops her, edging her down the hallway towards the bedroom. Jimena isn't in the mood, she knees him in the crotch, and heads for the door, leaving him curled up in a ball on the floor.

     Back at Gustavo's, he and Cristine are talking about Ernesto. Gustavo doesn't think much of him. He asks where is Jimena, Cristine says she went to see some friends.

     Elena gets off of the bus, Guero has been lurking in wait for her. He wants her to exchange something for is silence about Chelo, she says that it is all exposed. He says that he knows about Chelo and Paco Valensuela (formally known as Don Francisco. Since he brought it up, and to save typing, Don Francisco will now be known here as Paco).

     Ernesto, in Puerto Vallarta, is playing cards (did you look for the sucker, Ernesto?). He is doing well, the others at the table are a couple of Rebeca's lady friends. He says something to the effect of "Lucky at cards, unlucky at love" like he want's to disprove it. Rebeca comes in, muttering to herself, walking like she is in shock. Her friends ask her what's up, she tells them that Adriana is dead. Ernesto does not take it well.

     Juan Alberto arrives at Adolfo's place, Adolfo takes one look at him, laughs, and says that Juan Alberto looks happy. Juan Alberto is happy, he asks Adolfo to pour him a drink. (Actually, when I look at him here, I see a large feline, with Elena feathers on his chin).

     Rebeca continues to tell her friends about Adriana, Ernesto asks to be excused and leaves. One of the friends asks why he appears so upset, the other tells her that Ernesto and Adriana had been sweethearts.

     Elena is walking from the bus stop home, Guero is trying to talk to her, but she isn't wanting to listen. He gives up, she walks on.

     Adolfo has served Juan Alberto, they talk. Juan Alberto says Elena likes me! Adolfo thinks this calls for a toast, pours himself a drink and tops up Juan Alberto's. (Juan Alberto really has a nice smile, too bad we won't see it much, for months at a time).

     Chelo is staring at the newspaper article when Elena gets home. Apparently, the article indicates that there will be legal issues for her, Chelo is panicked, Elena tells her that she is not at fault, she is the injured party.

     Don Fermin is at Aurorita's, she has her crystal ball out, along with the Tarot deck. They talk about Chelo a bit, then she gives him the cards and asks him to shuffle them, seven times.

     Juan Alberto is telling Adolfo that the class difference (between Juan Alberto and Elena) is unimportant. Adolfo says that he knows that, but that Elena doesn't. Juan Alberto laughs, he can take care of that. Adolfo says that all that is very good, but what about Silvia? Juan Alberto says that Silvia is of the past, and does not matter. (My dictionary says that the word he used also means 'overripe' or 'rotten', which also applies, as she is rotten to the core).

     Speak of the devil, as they say. Silvia, as usual getting a massage, is on the phone. She hangs up, looking unhappy. (Did they forget to budget costumes for Silvia? She has spent less time so far dressed than she has on the bed, getting a massage, wearing nothing except a sheet from the hips down. She does have nice skin, but must we see so much of it? Must they rub it in (so to speak)?). Her roomie comes in, asks her when she is going out, she says that she isn't, that Larry, her love, has found something more important to do than go out with her. Roomie asks more about Larry, Silvia says "Por favor, tia" - aha! Roomie is actually Silvia's aunt. Ok, Auntie from now on). Silvia says that Larry is uninterested, Auntie calls her a little fool, says that Larry is hers to command.

     Chelo tells Elena that she is nervous about all of this. Elena tells her that she has nothing to worry about, that in order to hurt her (Chelo) they will have to come through her (Elena). Chelo says no, don't tie yourself to my problems. Elena tells her that she isn't alone, that she is Elena's sister. Then, on a lighter note, Elena smiles and tells Chelo that Juan Alberto has kissed her. (Like Juan Alberto, ELena has a terrific smile. Too bad we will be seeing so little of it).

     Ernesto is on the balcony, getting some air. Rebeca's friend (the one in blue, if your visualization of the cosmic all goes that far) comes out, asks if she is bothering him, He says no, she asks if he is troubled by the death of the girl, he says yes. She asks if he loved her a lot, he says no, but he did love her a little. He begins to talk of his troubles, she kisses him...

     Aurorita and Don Fermin seem to have finished with the cards, she is tidyin them up, and puts them aside. They talk a while, it looks like Don Fermin is thinking fondly of the lovely Aurorita.

     Elena and Chelo continue to talk, Elena tells her about Juanito asking her to be his mother. Chelo is excited for her, she says that Elena will be very happy with him. Elena isn't sure. Chelo bemoans the past, asks Elena to not let her problems (Chelo's) deprive her (Elena) of happiness.

     Juanito is in his room, the dog under the covers. Simona comes in, says that Señora Rebeca will be back soon, and that she won't put up with that. He tells her that it doesn't matter, that Elena will soon be in charge. Simona laughs, then looks horrified. Juanito laughs, says more, perhaps too much.

     At the tavern, Guero is at the bar, with his feet up on another barstool. He asks if Paco is around, the bartender says no, Guero leaves.

     Aurorita is in her room, holding what appears to be a wedding dress up to her body. Apparently Don Fermin has her thinking of what might have been.

     Morning, and Juan Alberto wakes Juanito. Both are in a great mood, Juanito wants to know if Elena is there yet, Juan Alberto seems pleased at the thought, but says that she will be there soon. They chat for a bit, great friends. Juanito apparently told his dad that he had told Elena that Juan Alberto wanted to marry her. Juan Alberto seems to be upset about this, that there are things that children do not talk to adults about... and then he hesitates and wants to know what Elena thought about the idea. (Thank you, Mary Davis.) They exchange a high-five (easy since Juanito is standing on the bed) and Juan Alberto leaves.

     At the playground, Guero's gang (minus Guero) is killing time. The female member is down, the others wonder why. She complains that she has nothing, one of them gives her a candy bar, she attacks it like a hungry wolf. They plot mischef, soon are dancing in circles.

     Juanito carries the dog down the stairs, as Elena arrives for the day. He goes on out, but Simona wants to talk to Elena. She tells Elena that she is looking too far above her station, that she is so plain, but that the señora Silvia is so elegant.

     Adolfo and Juan Alberto begin work, Adolfo is reading from a file that appears to be a copy of the newspaper article. He reads to Juan Alberto, mentioning the trouble at the caberet, involving a barmaid,Juan Alberto says that he knows about that kind of woman, he mentions Don Francisco Valensuela, Juan Alberto knows about him too. Then her reads further, the barmaid is named Consuela - Consuela who? asks Juan Alberto. Adolfo reads, but doesn't say, the name. Consuelo Carvajal - Elena's sister!

 

Day 20 - Chelo finds help  Author: Ben     Date:   08-27-03 01:17 pdt

     Juanito carries the dog down the stairs, as Elena arrives for the day. He goes on out, but Simona wants to talk to Elena. She tells Elena that she is looking too far above her station. Simona continues that there is no way one could compare Elena with señora Silvia, she is so plain, but the señora Silvia is so elegant.

     Adolfo and Juan Alberto begin work, Adolfo is reading from a file that appears to be a copy of the newspaper article. He reads to Juan Alberto, mentioning the trouble at the caberet, involving a barmaid,Juan Alberto says that he knows about that kind of woman, he mentions Don Francisco, Juan Alberto knows him too. Then he reads further, the barmaid is named Consuela - Consuela who? asks Juan Alberto. Adolfo reads, but doesn't say, the name. Consuelo Carvajal - Elena's sister! Juan Alberto comes over to Adolfo, "Consuelo who?" Adolfo rubs his eyes, he has a headache. He closes the folder, puts it in his case, begs forgiveness but he isn't up to this right now. Juan Alberto says that is OK, Adolfo takes the folder and leaves the room. (Now is Adolfo going to eat the folder?)

     Simona is still giving Elena a hard time. (I will probably write that sentence at least 100 more times.) Elena does tell her to back off on Juanito's dog, that the dog is only Elena's concern. Elena turns to leave, Behind her back (where she does her best work), Simona mutters that Elena will get hers...

     Don Francisco is visiting Guero. At least I think so, the view of the building showed rather plain walls, with bars on the windows, but not the kind of bars you might expect in a prison. The room is decorated in early psychodelic trash, so it is probably not Don Francisco's room. I can only assume that the writers are trying to get Guero used to viewing the world through the bars on the windows, I suspect that such training will be useful in Guero's future. Of course, I also would like Paco's future to include heavy window bars. They are discussing the problem of Chelo. Paco asks if Guero knows Chelo, he says yes, she is the sister of his friend Elena. Paco says (something) is very evil. (He is either talking about Chelo, or what he is going to do to her).

     At the apartment, the bartender from the tavern has come to visit Chelo.

     And at the judgeshop, Adolfo is in the lobby (we see the receptionist/secretary at her desk in the background. He is studying the case, indeed, it does concern Elena's sister.

     Chelo tells the bartender that the problems are all her fault, He says she has friends at the tavern (he calls her "my Chelo"

     Juanito and Elena on the front steps, Elena asks about his mother, she says she has heard that she is very elegant. Juanito says yes, she is. Then he motions her to come closer, he has a secret. She leans down, and he tells her that she is much prettier. Elena giggles.

     Paco has finished his cigar, and is now finishing Guero's booze. He says that Chelo will pay, nothing can help her, nothing.

     As he leaves, the bartender asks Chelo if she lost a bracelet that night, excited, she says yes, it was Elena's, he thinks that either Paco has it, or the police do. Chelo's excitement dies. He says he will try to find out, or to look for it.

Oscar and Talita are siting on a park bench together. He asks how Chelo is, and is there anything he can do to help them. She tells him that Chelo has pretty much lost her job, but that they are dealing wiht it. He reaches into his pocket and pulls out something, but my cable channel decided to go all psychedelic so I can't tell what it is, but I think he was offering her money, anyway she does say that she won't take his money.

     Guero's gang are molesting a parked car (I'm getting tired of calling them 'the gang', so I will call them Larry (the tall one), Moe (the heaver one) and of course, the girl is Curly), anyway, they are run off by the police, who happen to be driving and see them at the parked car.

     Oscar suggests something (Yes, the picture is back, it is money in his hand, but now the sound is flaking), he says he will pay for it. She says OK, but only when she is with him. He says that is OK with him.

     Luis Pablo is hard at work in a recording studio,

     Don Fermin is playing ball with some of the apartment children, he hits the ball past one of them and starts his "I've just scored" dance, but they complained that he used his hands. He sees Lumara walking up, and escapes from the kids. She has been shopping, she tells Don Fermin she needs clothing for the caberet. She asks about Chelo, sounds genuinely concerned, in that Chelo did lose her job.

     And Larry, Moe, and Curly are running down the street, Curly runs pretty well, for a girl. Or Larry runs poorly, for a guy. Anyway, if the cops only catch one of them, it won't be her. They are pretty much out of breath, they stop near a sidewalk eatery, Moe and Curly go in, Curly asks for some water, please. She drinks, he gasps for air.

     Simona is trying to give Juanito a hard time, but he seems to have figured her out. Whenever she asks him a question, he answers Elena, except for the question about where he is going "To the movies" "Who with" "Elena" She sputters and leaves, incoherently. (Good for you, kid).

     Moe and Curly are drinking water, Larry comes in and tells them they can go, they leave (after saying thank you). Mary Davis, you are right, for such a vicious gang, they are very polite, and funny!)

     Chelo and Aurorita talk, Chelo tells her that she thinks Elena's bracelet wound up with the police (like that means they will never see it again. And maybe it does.) Aurorite tries to reassure her.

     Elena has joined Juanito in his room, She is combing his hair, says that he looks most elegant. Juan Alberto comes in, "Are you ready?" "Yes, papa" "Let's go" Juanito starts for the door, Juan Alberto's eyes meet Elena's, Andrea Bocelli starts to sing...

     Rebeca and her friend (The one in yellow, not Ernesto's new friend) are talking, the friend says something about how Rebeca needs romance in her life, Rebeca doesn't think so.

     Don Fermin and Luis Pablo talk, Don Fermin asks if he has heard from Elena, he says no, asks about Chelo.

     Juanito, Elena, and Juan Alberto (in that order) are sitting in a theater, the nice, dark, theater. Juan Alberto's little finger goes exploring, finds Elena's little finger. The rest of the hand follows along. Juan Alberto isn't paying attention to the movie, he has better things to look at. (How sweet).

     Ernesto pours a drink for the lady in blue, She drings up, they kiss. She seems strangely unsteady on her feet, Ernesto helps her, but she loses her ballance and falls across the bed, pulling Ernesto down with her. (Am I the only one here who suspects Ernesto of something fishy?) Oh, Rebeca and Lady Yellow walk in. They tiptoe out...

     The movie over, Juan Alberto, Elena, and Juanito return to the big house, Juanito is chattering about how great the movie was, he runs upstairs. It is late, Elena is about to leave too. Juan Alberto is edging closer to her (to properly say "Good night"), when Simona comes in, with an important message from Rebeca about Ernestito. Juan Alberto says it is not as important to him as talking with the young lady. Elena says that is OK, good night, see you in the morning, She leaves. Juan Alberto is now upset, he says nothing is important about "Ernestito". He heads up the stairs.

     At Ernesto's apartment, Lalo is being visited by Mr Mustache, and a couple of thugs. They ask for Ernesto, Lalo says that he isn't in Mexico any more. Mr Mustache says that's OK, they will leave a message. Lalo backs away, one of the thugs kicks his feet from under him, they drag him down the hallway and throw him onto the bed. Mr Mustache goes over to Ernesto's CD collection, puts on some music. Ah, that's better, now he doesn't have to listen to the thuds and groans coming from the bedroom. He walks around waving his hands as if he were conducting, wether he was conducting the music, or the beating, is the question.

     Adolfo comes into the big house, looking for Elena. Simona tries to block him, but he puts a move on her and breaks past and up the stairs. Juanito tells him that Elena has left for the day, so down he comes. Simona tries her best tackle, but he stiff-arms her away and makes it out the door. (The crowd goes wild!).

     At the apartment, Elena arrives, finds Chelo still down (of course).

     Juan Alberto comes out of his office, Simona tells him that Adolfo had been by looking for Elena but when she wasn't there, he left. Juan Alberto looks confused.

     Chelo tells Elena that her bracelet is now in the hands of the police. Elena looks like she thinks she will never see it again, but she says that it isn't a big deal, not a real problem.

     At Ernesto's place, apparently Lalo is being treated for kidney stones. At least, one treatment for them does consist of having the stones pulverized, only in the hospital they use ultrasound while the patient is under anesthetics, and these folk are using baseball bats, and Lalo is wide awake.

     Puerto Vallarta, and Ernesto and his blue lady are snuggling and talking.

     Mexico, and Lalo is just talking. He somehow remembers that Ernesto is in Puerto Vallarta, Mr Mustache

thanks him, he and his buddies leave. Lalo wishes he would hurry up and die.

     Elena and Chelo are interrupted by a knock on the door. Chelo heads for the other room, Elena checks the door, it is Adolfo. He comes in, tells her that he has to talk to her sister, Consuelo. Elena tells him that she isn't there, that she is working at the clinic. (Elena, read my message from yesterday, you will save yourself a lot of trouble!).

     Ernesto is telling his new love about his tightwad brother, Juan Alberto, and how Ernest is in need of money and Juan Alberto won't help him.

     Elena is still insisting that Chelo is at the clinic, Adolfo says "No Elena, the truth",

     Ernesto's blue lady give him a check, says it is not too much. Having bought him, she pulls him back onto the bed to get her money's worth.

     Elena wants to know why Adolfo is interested in this, he tells her that Juan Alberto is about to get involved.

     Juan Alberto is trying to call Adolfo, but he, of course, is not answering, becase he is not home.

     Elena is by now reduced to tears, Adolfo, the perfect gentleman, produces a tissue. (He is my ideal). It looks like one tissue won't be enough. Elena asks why he is there. He tells her that he only wants to help, he knows that Elena is a good girl. Elena tells him that Chelo is a good girl too. Elena goes into the other room to get Chelo.

     Lalo is wasting his energy phoning Ernesto when he should be calling for an ambulance. Ernesto tells him that he now has the money. Lalo looks like he doesn't appreciate Ernesto's timing.

     Elena returns, Chelo is hiding under the bed and won't come out. Adolfo says that will be OK as long as she comes to see him tomorrow. He tells Elena that he will ease things with Juan Alberto, Elena smiles and thanks him. Hey, one tissue was enough! I guess she is just getting warmed up.

     Rebeca is upset with Ernesto for taking money from Carla (OK, the blue lady has a name. I hope she has it tatooed on her forehead before she changes clothes, or I still won't be able to tell them apart).

     Juan Alberto is staring at the phone, the fool thing still won't connect to Adolfo. Juanito comes in, wanting to talk a bit, which they do. Juan Alberto asks if Adolfo had been there, Juanito says no, Juan Alberto asks again, wasn't he looking for Elena? Juanito says sure, but she had gone home so he left.

     In New York, Silvia is all dressed and everything. She is talking on the phone, all sweetness, but when she hangs up, the true Silvia appears, snapping at her aunt and making promisies about how everyone will be treating her.

Jimena is at a dance hall (part of the cantina, no doubt). She is in the ladies room, being talked at by someone who wants to talk about Adriana. Then she wants to talk about Ernesto, but when Jimena says that she hates him, the other girl leaves.

     Elena is trying to talk Chelo into accepting Adolfo's offer of help. I think it is working, Chelo seems to be weakening.

     At the big house, Juan Alberto is talking to himself. Of course, he is saying "Elena, Elena, Elena". He is also remembering 'the kiss', and smiling foolishly.

     Silvia is still snapping at her aunt, who is, and has been, exercising. In fact, I'm begining to think that Silvia's aunt runs a gymnasium or something.

     Elena brings Chelo coffee, tells her that Adolfo is a good man, that he will help her. Finally, Chelo says OK, she will go see him.

     Next morning, and Talita is sitting with one of her girl friends, when Oscar comes by. The friend leaves, they talk a bit, then leave together.

     Chelo is asking advice of Aurorita. The Tarot cards show a big hunky knight in shining armor riding in to her defense, but Chelo isn't convinced.

     Simona is dusting in Juan Alberto's room, she leave the door open, and the dog comes in and jumps up onto the bed as if he belongs there. Simona attacks with the feather duster, Juanito throws himself over the dog and presenting his own back if Simona must hit something. She appears to be about to do just that, when Juan Alberto comes in, calls a halt to the festivities and sends Juanito to his room. He then closes the door, and reads the riot act to Simona. He asks her why she won't let Juanito have his dog in peace, she tells him that Señora Silvia wouldn't like it. He tells her that Señora Silvia doesn't have anything to say about the house, it is his house and she had better remember that. He suggests that if she doesn't like that, she can leave his house. She looks suitably chastened, but when he leaves, she swears vengance against Elena.

     Juan Alberto finally gets through to Adolfo, they agree to meet at the judgeshop. Juan Alberto is upset because he has to leave, and won't see Elena this morning.

     Elena arrives in Juanito's room, she hears Juan Alberto's limo leaving. Juanito tells her aobut Jupi and the dragon (excuse me, about Jupi and Simona) The three of them leave the room.

     At Ernesto's apartment, Lalo is sitting in a chair, looking miserable, as Ernesto arrives, bearing suitcases. Ernesto shows his great sensitivity by laughing at Lalo's bruises.

     In New York, Silvia is in a bad mood (but she too, is just warming up). Auntie can't stop talking, no matter how much Silvia wants her to. There is a knock at the door, it is a messenger with a letter for Silvia from Mexico. Silvia is thrilled, until she notices that the letter is not from Juan Alberto (I guess she was expecting a suitably submissive reply to the letter she had sent him and that he had passed on to Adolfo.).

     At the judgeshop, Adolfo comes out of his office, the receptionist give him a folder. He looks around at the people in the waiting room, sees a gorgeous pair of legs trying to hide behind a newspaper. He asks "Señorita Carvajal?", she comes out of hiding. He invites her into his office (lots of walnut and leather padded chairs) He indicates a large, round, walnut confrence table, she sits in one of the leather padded chairs. They talk, he tells her a bit about what to expect, she tells him some of her concerns. Then he asks her about her job at the caberet. (Hey, she is actually talking to him, rationally, no tears! Good for her.) She tells him about the job at the caberet, her duties, etc. He asks her about the assault, she tells him about Paco hitting her in the head with the bottle.

     At the big house, Elena is standing on the steps, looking out across the yard. Juan Alberto comes out, comes up behind her. She is lost in thought, isn't aware of him until he is right behind her, he says "Hello", she jumps a bit, turns toward him. He asks what she is thinking about, she says nothing. He asks about Juanito, she says he is working on his lessons, He says "Well, I guess we are all alone, can we talk?" She turns away, tries to leave, but he takes her arm, turns her back to face him. He says that he likes her, but that it is necessary that he knows that she likes him too. (For 'like', you can substitute 'want' or 'love'. I thought at this point in the relationship, 'like' was appropriate.) He is holding her elbows, she looks like a deer caught in the headlights. She begins to lean toward him as Andrea Bocelli starts to sing. Her eyes close, their lips are a silly millimeter apart, Andrea is in full song, and...

DAYS 21-25

Day 21 - Juan Alberto balks.  Author: Ben     Date:   08-28-03 00:47 pdt

     At the big house, Elena is standing on the steps, looking out across the yard. Juan Alberto comes out, comes up behind her. She is lost in thought, isn't aware of him until he is right behind her, he says "Hello", she jumps a bit, turns toward him. He asks what she is thinking about, she says nothing. He asks about Juanito, she says he is working on his lessons, He says "Well, I guess we are all alone, can we talk?" She turns away, tries to leave, but he takes her arm, turns her back to face him. He says that he likes her, but that it is necessary that he knows that she likes him too. (For 'like', you can substitute 'want' or 'love'. I thought at this point in the relationship, 'like' was appropriate.) He is holding her elbows, she looks like a deer caught in the headlights. She begins to lean toward him as Antrea Bocelli starts to sing. Her eyes close, their lips are a silly millimeter apart, Andrea is in full song, and...

     And Juanito comes running up. They back off, looking guilty. (Juanito really wants Elena to be his mother, he would have liked seeing them kiss. I suspect that he would have been thrilled if Elena were to have thrown Juan Albert to the ground and had her way with him right there on the steps!). But, they do back off (Elena wipes her lips, so perhaps they actually did make contact. I hope so, because there will be a real lack of affection soon.) But Juanito runs up, telling them what his dog has been doing.

     At the judgeshop, Adolfo is still talking to Chelo. He tells her he will try to get Juan Alberto to take her case.

     Aurorita is tidying her Tarot deck, she is talking to Talita, who is worried about a lot of stuff, mostly money. She speaks fondly of Puerto Rico.

     Larry, Moe, and Curly are leaning on a power pole and talking when a real nice car pulls up. The driver, wearing an expensive suit, gets out, it is Guero. They think this is hilarious. But Curly thinks the car is impressive, and they seem to accept the suit. They are some of the benefits of Guero's close relationship with Paco Valensuela.

     Juan Alberto and Elena are still talking on the steps, Juanito has run inside. (OK, where were we when we got rudely interrupted - but no, they are just talking, Juan Alberto has his hands in his pockets). He is telling Elena about something (What?) that belongs to Silvia. He also says something about Simona and Silvia (Again, what?). Elena looks upset, he asks her if it troubles her to talk about his former wife, she says no, it doesn't bother her at all, then she turns away (as if it does bother her). Juan Alberto, seeing that she is indeed bothered, turns her back to face him. He touches her face (oh goody, back to the romance) when Adolfo comes up (darn!). He asks if he is interrupting anything, they lie and say no. (That's what you get for doing your romancing on the front porch. Don't they have drive-in movies in Mexico?) Adolfo tells Juan Alberto that he wants to talk to Elena, alone. Juan Alberto seems a little miffed, but he goes on into the house. Adolfo tells Elena that he will work on getting Juan Alberto to take Chelo's case.

     Aurorita and Talita are drying dishes. Aurorita is talking about money, and family.

     Adolfo goes to talk to Juan Alberto, telling him about this case he thinks they should take. Juan Alberto seems uninterested in it, Adolfo tells him details, at least gets him to listen

     Elena, still on the front steps, whispers a prayer.

     Adolfo leads off by telling Juan Alberto that this is very important, He reminds Juan Alberto of the many cases where people have been convicted of crimes and are later found to be inocent victims. Juan Alberto is aware of this but doesn't seem to be to concerned by it. Adolfo continues, Juan Alberto is beginning to get suspecious. Why are you interested in this? You know I dont' like dealing with that kind of woman. Are you talking about a friend of yours, that woman that was at your house? Adolfo says no, it isn't her.

     Juanito has joined Elena. Make that Juanito and dog, he is really getting attached to Jupi. For that matter, he is getting attached to Elena too, and she to him.

     Guero continues talking to his gang, they are vastly amused by his pretension.

     Juanito is kissing Elena (on the cheek) when Adolfo comes out of Juan Alberto's office and down the steps. Juanito runs off, Elena asks Adolfo how things are going, he tells her not well, as Juan Alberto doesn't like this kind of case. She says My God, asks what they can do, he suggests that they go to someone other than Juan Alberto, she shakes her head, says no one but Juan Alberto (as a lawyer, or for the rest of her life?).

     Lalo and Ernesto are haveing drinks after lunch. Lalo makes some remark about Adriana, Ernesto tells him not to talk about her, he asks why not, Ernesto mentions Jimena.

     Adolfo drives Elena home. As they start up, she tells him she doesn't want to be a bother, but he says that she is no trouble at all. He may have saved her some trouble, as Guero, in his shiny new car, was lurking in wait. When he sees them drive by, he hits his steering wheel with his cast, out of frustration, but then follows them.

     Aurorita and Don Fermin are dressed fo an outing

     Juan Alberto comes into Juanito's room, looking for Elena. He tells Juan Albert that she has gone, asks why Elena is unhappy. Juan Alberto promises to discuss it withe her soon.

     Aurorita goes over to Chelo's place, they fool about with the kitchen (which looks unusually messy) and Aurorita leaves.

     Mr Mustache comes by Ernesto and Lalo, Ernesto give him an envelope. He asks if this is all of it, Ernesto says yes. There is some excessively polite conversation, then Mr Mustache and his goons leave.

     Elena arrives home, finds Chelo in the kitchen, crying (it isn't 'that' messy, it looks better than mine). No, she isn't crying about that, she is simply worried. (Not 'simply', but 'excessively') She asks Elena how are things with Juan Alberto, she says that he doesn't want to take the case, but that Adolfo is working on something. Chelo goes into a tearful monologue about how she is alone to face this, Elena interrups with Chelo, are you crazy? I'm your sister, I won't abandon you. Chelo hits herself in the head (I coulda had a V8) and says that she is stupid, Elena yells at her a bit, Chelo throws whatever kitchen implement she had in her hand on the floor (now I see where the mess came from). Elena is at a loss for words (for a moment, anyway)

     Rebeca, in Puerto Vallarta, is talking to Carla (now wearing yellow), She tries to distract her from Ernesto, but Carla is well and truly hooked.

     Elena has found words, lots of them. (An outsider might doubt that there is as much love in this family as there really is.)

     At the tavern, Don Fermin and Luis Pablo arrive,

     Elena, realizing that things are getting out of hand, asks Chelo to forgive her, but Chelo is upset that Juan Alberto won't take the case, that Elena should have some sort of in with him as she is at his home so much.

     Finally, they run down. Elena and Chelo are on the couch, leaning together, Elena's arm around Chelo's shoulders. They are talking rationally now, quietly. Elena promises to talk to Juan Alberto tomorrow.

     Luis Pablo is at their table, Don Fermin is dancing with two or three ladies. when Paco comes in, with his goons and Guero. He sees Don Fermin dancing, asks Guero who that is, Guero tells him that he is Chelo's landlord. He then asks about Luis Pablo, is told that he is a musician. Paco thinks this is funny, makes jokes about Luis Pablo, to the amusement of the ladies who have congregated around him.

     Adolfo, at his apartment, is thinking about Chelo. remembering her in his office. He says "Consuelo Carvajal, I will help you, I will convince Juan Alberto.

     And, Juan Alberto is in his room, fanaticizing about kissing Elena. (He has a very active fantasy life.) He says to himself that he loves her (or maybe just that he wants her).

     And Elena is sitting up, watching while Chelo sleeps, is saying to herself that Juan Alberto will never help them. She remembers Ernesto,

     And Ernesto is at the caberet, where Lumara is singing. Ernesto goes over and introduces himself to a table full of ladies. One of them says she has heard of him, he asks her where. She says from Jimena Lunares. He asks her how she knows Jimena, she says that she is her best friend.

     Paco gets up to dance, a bunch of ladies go with him. Lumara comes over, sits at Luis Pablo's table, he and Don Fermin welcome her. Paco notices her, goes over to confront Luis Pablo. He orders Lumara to come with him, she doesn't want to. A fight breaks out, Paco and Guero prudently walk away.

     Morning, and Elena arrives at the big house. She speaks to Simona, gets the icy treatment. She give up and leaves.

     At the judgeshop, Paco and his 'friends' arrive at Adolfo's office, he wants to retain Juan Albeto for a problem he has. Adolfo asks his name, he says Francisco Valensuela, Adolfo says he has heard of him.

     Ernesto is talking on the phone, he ends the converstaion with a 'te quiero' and hangs up. He dials another number...

     At the home of Gustavo Lunares, the phone rings. Gustavo's man answers, is saying that Señorita Jiment is not there as Gustavo comes into the room. When the conversation ends, Gustavo asks who it was, he is told that it was for Jimena, it was Ernest do las Moneros. Gustavo is upset.

     Don Fermin is telling the apartment children about the fight, bobbing and weaving, and telling them what Luis Pablo was doing, where he was, and showing off his black eye.

     Paco is being most gracious and friendly with Adolfo, until Adolfo begins asking question about the caberet. Paco jumps up in an attempt to tower over Adolfo (hard to do at 5'3"). Adolfo stands also. Paco tells him how influencial he is, Adolfo tells him to leave, Paco gets louder, which attracts Juan Alberto into the room. Paco becomes reasonable once again, starts telling Juan Alberto his story. When Adolfo contradicts him with the truth, he goes balistic, causing Juan Alberto to go into orbit. He gets the room cleared, then sits down to talk to Adolfo, who opens his file on the case, revealing a plastic evidence bag, with Elena's bracelet!

     Elena and Juanito are finishing his lessons, he goes over to get Jupi.

     Adolfo is explaining about the bracelet, how it was an accident that Chelo had it on when the assult took place. Juan Alberto interrups, saying that these poor girls are just out to get whatever they can. Adolfo tries to explain, but Juan Alberto says that she has been busted, that is all there is to it. (He appears to think that Chelo had stolen the bracelet from Elena).

     Aurorita is talking to Chelo, or rather, the other way around. Chelo is still sure that her life might as well be over, that it is all her fault, that children are starving in tiny third world countries because of her. Aurorita tells her about Don Fermin's and Luis Pablo's fight with Paco, Chelo tries to think of how this can be her fault too.

     Ernesto is at the pool, he sees Jimena. They go off to be alone, she asks him about Adriana, tells him that her death is his fault.

     Simona is trying to pick a fight with Elena, but Elena is pretty much ignoring her as she puts away some of Juanito's lesson books. Simona accuses her of wanting to take over the house, Elena says that she is only concerned with Juanito. Simona tells her she can't have the house anyway, it is Silvia's.

     Ernesto and Jimena are arguing, he won't accept any responsibility for Adriana's death.

     Simona continues, Elena says that Silvia was the lady of the house, she isn't any more. Simona says that Silvia will return, and when she does, Señorita Elena will be nothing, nothing!

     Ernesto has his arms around Jimena, trying to sweet talk her. It seems to be working, he swoops in for a kiss, to be interrupted by Gustavo, who has hunted them down. Gustavo sends Jimena home, then confronts Ernesto, tellin him to stay away from his daughter. Ernesto says that is up to Jimena, Gustavo grabs a bunch of shirt in a grip reminiscent of a scene in "Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom" (Priest ripping still beating heart out of the sacrifice's chest). Ernesto pushes the hand away and makes as dignified an exit as possible (but not very).

     Luis Pablo is talking to Aurorita, telling her about the fight. She wants to know if the police had come.

Guero is talking to Lumara, trying to convince her that she should cooperate with Paco or she will end up like Chelo.

     Luis Pablo is helping Don Fermin put a beefsteak on his eye.

     Elena comes into Juan Alberto's office, he greets her "Elena!", she comes over, he tells her that he wanted to spend time with her but he has a lot of work (a guesture indicates the overflowing desk). She says that she wants to talk to him about something else, business. He indicates a chair, tells her to sit, "Señorita". She tells him that there is a girl who has a problem, a problem at the cantina. He says that he knows about her, that Adolfo is crazy for her, wants him to help her. He asks Elena if Adolfo had asked her to try to persuade him too. She says no, the girl is my sister. Juan Alberto is shocked!!!

     To be continued...

 

Day 22 - Juanito, watch out!!!  Author: Ben     Date:   08-29-03 22:17 pdt

     Elena tells Juan Alberto that Chelo is her sister. He doesn't take the information well, he goes into a monolog about these girls who sell themselves at places like the cantina, he won't listen to anything Elena says in her defense. His steel-trap mind has gone all rusty. Elena says that Chelo is a good girl, whe wants to know what a good girl is doing at a place like that. He has heard the whole story. Elena tells him that he has been told lies. He gets all defensive and angry, then all preachy. (He splits his skin, the old lovable Juan Alberto is discarded, the raging viper Juan Alberto appears.) He fires her. She claims that he is believing lies, he tell her that she is the one who is telling lies. She sits, in tears. He laughs at her, says she is very good at crying on demand (By golly, he is right. At least, Ms Vicky is very good at crying on damand.) He circls back behind his desk, gets out his checkbook. Elena says she doesn't want his money, (he is surprised at that). She says that she has to go see if they need a dancer at the caberet. She storms out.

     (Well, that didn't go too well, did it. Now I'm beginning to remember how much I dislike this aspect of Juan Alberto).

     Jimena is at home, telling her mother about Gustavo sending her home. Cristine wants to know about her involvement with Ernesto (Jimena is getting no sympathy here). Gustavo comes home starts to question her, orders her to not see Ernesto again, she runs from the room, he follows.

     Ernesto is at a table with Lalo, talking about more cheerful things (after all, he did meet a new girl at the caberet).

     Elena is in Juanito's room, talking to herself and remembering Juanito. She goes downstairs, stands on the front steps, leaning on a column and watching Juanito playing with Jupi. She is barely able to contain her grief.

     Oscar and Talita are at the playground, walking and talking.

     Elena walks out of the gate, Juan Alberto's words ringing in her ears.

     Rufina tells Simona the news, she says that Juanito will be so sad. Simona is trimphant. Juanito comes in, carrying the dog, Simona screams to get that beast out of the kitchen. Rufina restrains her, sends Juanito to see Juan Alberto. Juanito asks Juan Alberto where is Enena, Juan Alberto tries to explain, but the kid doesn't understand. Suddenly we get a glimpse of the rebellious Juanito of the past, he leaves the room and crosses the parlor to the starway, where he sits and crys. Juan Alberto follows him, sits beside him. Juanito wants to know why, he can't say (of course he can't, if he did, he would lose his son's respect). Juan Alberto says that he will find another teacher for Juanito, Juanito says he doesn't want another one, he wants Elena. Juanito leaves his dad, and goes up the stairs to his room. Waiting for him is Demona (sorry, Simona). She is talking sympatheticaly, but she is behind him, so he can't see the look of glee on her face.

     Guero and the gang are on the sidewalk along the path Elena walks home. Guero tries to stop her, but she is in a bad mood, he strikes out.

     Simona is gloating to Rufina, telling her that Señorita Elena is indeed finished. Rufina doesn't beleive it, but Simona gloats anyway.

     Elena arives home, Talita greets her, in a good mood, which rubs off a bit onto Elena, she is smiling by the time Talita runs out to visit a friend.

     Aurorita is doing the Tarot deck with Lumara, the table is almost covered with cards. Lumara is pleased about working at the tavern.

     Night, at the big house. Juan Alberto is talking to himself. He is asking why, he wants to know why she betrayed him also. (Anything bad today was your own doing, buster! And it will be worse tomorrow.)

     Elena is sitting in the wicker chair, crying, when Chelo comes in. "Elena, what happened?". Elena tells her that Juan Alberto wouldn't believe anything, that she was fired.

     Simona taunts Juanito, telling him that now that Elena is gone, she will be taking care of him. She leaves his room laughing gleefully.

     Elena continues, telling Chelo that what makes her feel really bad is Juanito. Andrea Bochelli gets to take the night off, no singing for him. Instead, we hear a lot of minor key violin music.

     Simona goes to Juan Alberto, bitching about Juanito. He asks her to go away, to leave him alone. She starts to the door, then turns to say something else. He yells at her "I want to be alone!" She finally figures it out, and leaves.

     Chelo says that it is all her fault, Elena defends her, she is, after all, the victim here. There is a knock at the door. It is the fat boss from the tavern. He is in a good mood, comes in and sits on the couch, (which groans in pain), he wants Chelo to come back to work at the tavern, she says no. He looks over at Elena, says how about your sister? He gets up, walks over to Elena and reaches out as if to sample the merchandise. Chelo rushes over to protect her sister, Elena backs away. He walks around their apartment, admiring it as if he plans to move in. When he gets to the kitchen, he finds some watermellon, which he picks up and starts to eat, very messily. (Well, now whe know where the belly comes from, as if there were any doubt.) He tells them that he is just trying to help, that he knows that they have a problem. He looks at Chelo in the same way he had looked at the watermellon, Elena pushes him out the door. (Reminds me of those Discovery channel documentaries where you see the ant pushing a grape around.)

     Meanwhile, Juan Alberto is sucking down a brandy, remembering Silvia's betrayal, and muttering that all women are false.

     Luis Pablo is singing in his apartment, Don Fermin comes in and joins in, He talks to Luis Pablo about how Luis Pablo shouldn't be alone, he needs someond.

     Chelo is blaming herself again. It's all my fault...

     Morning, and Adolfo comes into Juan Alberto's office, where he is laying on the couch. Adolfo asks about Juanito, Elena. Juan Alberto yells "Don't talk to be about that woman!". He says she isn't allowed in his house. Adolfo asks what happened, Juan Alberto says "What happened? She is a liar, and you are an idiot. You and your woman friend." Adolfo says wait, how does this involve Señorita Elena? Juan Alberto says that she was the sister of Elena.

     Back at the apartments, Luis Pablo sees Elena walking through the flower garden. He goes over to her, asks her why she is there, she says she has no job, he wants to know about it.

     Adolfo continues to try to understand why Elena's sister being a victim makes Elena evil. Juan Alberto sees only guilt, won't believe Adolfo when he says that Elena had also thought that Chelo worked at the clinic.

     At Ernesto's place, Lalo is checking the door. He opens it to let Jimena in, she wants to talk to Ernesto. Lalo says that she can't, he is back in Puerto Vallarta, she wants to know when he will return. He has no idea.

     Adolfo and Juan Alberto continue, Adolfo wants to know about Juanito, Juan Alberto says he will get another teacher for him, Adolfo says that Juanito doesn't want another, he wants Elena. Juan Alberto says yeah, yeah, yeah, but doesn't come up with anything sensible.

     Upstairs, Simona is giving Juanito a bad time because he is brushing the dog in his bed. Juanito has taught the dog to growl and show his teeth on command. Simona backs off, Juanito laughs. Simona yells, cries that she has been bit, backs away holding her arm, so that she looks suitably damaged when Adolfo comes in. Juanito accuses her of being a liar.

     Elena and Talita are talking, Talita wants to know what will happen to Juanito. Elena says it isn't up to her, Talita asks about jobs (no one has one).

     Juanito is trying to defend his dog, Adolfo asks Simona to leave him alone with Juanito, She leaves crying dramatically. Adolfo asks what happened, Juanito says that Elena has been fired, she won't come back. Adolfo tries to cheer him up, to explain what happened (the two goals are not compatible) Juanito is crying.

     In Puerto Vallarta, Rebeca is happy that Ernesto has come back. He asks where Carla is. She says that he doesn't love Carla, he indicates that he loves them all. She looks doubtful.

     Elena and Aurorita, no cards on the table. Aurorita wants to know why things are so bad for Chelo, Elena doesn't know, just that Juan Alberto doesn't like her. A bit later, Elena says that it is bad, very bad. Aurorita goes over to comfort her.

     Luis Pablo is recording a song, really getting into it. The engineer running the tape machines is tapping time to the music.

     Simona and Rufina are talking in the kitchen, Simona is plotting the next step in the abuse of Juanito, Rufina is saying that he needs for Elena to come back. Simona pontificates on how that isn't going to happen.

     Juan Alberto is up in Juanito's room, being ignored by Juanito, He asks a question, Juanito doesn't answer. He asks another, Juanito talks to the dog. They do get some communication this way, but Juanito doesn't hear anything he wants to hear.

     Elena goes back to her apartment, where Chelo has fabric laid out on the table, and is pinning a pattern to it. She asks about Juan Alberto, Elena says he is crazy.

     Adolfo comes into Juan Alberto's office, he has the folder for Chelo's case, Juan Alberto won't even look at it, Adolfo wants to work on the case.

     Upstairs, Juanito is sitting on the table, the dog is in front of him, cleaning up Juanito's dinner. Simona is upset about the dog, but she is afraid to take the dinner tray away from it. She leaves, looking for reinforcement.

     At the apartment, there is a knock on the door. Chelo is in the kitchen, she calls out to wait, she will be right there. She starts to the door, but someone has already come in, Adolfo, with a bouquet of flowers as big as she is. He asks after Elena, she is not there, He holds out the flowers and says these are for you. She takse them, tips over a little. She does get them to the table, and asks what for, he says a souvenir. She tells him he is very good. She doesn't remember his name (if she ever knew it), he says Adolfo. They talk, he is edging closer. She says that Elena doesn't deserve any of this, her sister is a good girl. Adolfo moves a little closer. He wants to kiss her, but her lips are going so fast that there is no chance.

     Simona brings Juan Alberto a cup of coffee. He asks about Juanito, she says that he is content. He asks her to keep an eye on him if it isn't any bother, she says she will, and lsaves. He remembers what Adolfo had said about Chelo's case, starts to read the file.

     Elena comes in, Adolfo is still there. Chelo walks over to her, Elena glares protectively at Adolfo. The sisters go into the other room.

     Juan Alberto continues to read.

     Elena comes out of the room alone, Adolfo is heading for the door. She thanks him, asks about Juanito. He tells her that Juanito is OK, and that he is working on Juan Alberto.

     Juanito is in his room, sitting on his bed, the dog safely under the covers. Simona comes in, she wants the dog out of there. He tells her no, she throws a blanket over the dog and picks it up, starts to carry it away, with him following and yelling all the way. When they get to the stairs, she kicks his leg out from under him, causing him to fall and giving her time to get away. She carries the dog out to the gate, throws it out into the street. Juanito runs after her, runs into the street to get his dog. A car comes speeding by....

     To be continued...

     Simona is certainly being a mean old ... (may I use the 'B-word' here?) isn't she. Why does she

have it in for the kid so badly, anyway?)

 

Day 23 - "Elena, Elena, El..e.na.."  Author: Ben     Date:   08-30-03 22:05 pdt

     Juanito is in his room, sitting on his bed, the dog safely under the covers. Simona comes in, she wants the dog out of there. He tells her no, she throws a blanket over the dog and picks it up, starts to carry it away, with him following and yelling all the way. When they get to the stairs, she kicks his leg out from under him, causing him to fall and giving her time to get away. She carries the dog out to the gate, throws it out into the street. Juanito runs (limps) after her, runs into the street to get his dog. A car comes speeding by, sees the kid when it is too late to stop. Juanito is hit, slides across the hood of the car, falls to the street.

     At Elena's apartment, the lights go out for a few seconds, and Elena has an anxiety attack, clutches at her heart. As the lights come back on, Chelo comes into the room "What happened?" "I don't know, something horrible."

     Juan Alberto comes out of his office, also wondering what has happened. Simona comes running up, she is incoherent, manages to say "The child, Juanito" and point outside. He runs out, sees his son lying motionless on the street, with the driver of the car and a couple of witnesses standing around in shock. Juan Alberto runs over, (I'm yelling "Don't move him! You can damage his spine if you move him.) But Juan Alberto does pick him up (with help, one fellow is supporting Juanito's head and neck as they lift him). Juan Alberto gets into the back of the car, carefully supporting Juanito, and asks the driver to hurry to the hospital.

     Elena and Chelo are talking, Elena about the bad vibs she felt, Chelo asks a question I couldn't understand. Elena is'nt paying attention, so Chelo asks again, and a third time, much more slowly and clearly (thank you, could you please speak like that all the time?) Chelo asked if Adolfo is married. Elena says no. Chelo asks about sweethearts, none of them either. Chelo thinks that is crazy.

     Guero drive up to where Larry, Moe, and Curly are hanging out. He is telling them about Lumara at the cantina, how she sings and dances. He starts to dance with Curly, ends with a dip, and a comment about how macho he is. This, for some reason, seems to turn Moe on. The guys decide to go to the cantina, but they leave Curly behind. She is upset.

     Luis Pablo and Don Fermin talking on the steps when Lumars comes out of her apartment. She stops to talk a bit, then heads off.

     At the hospital, they take Juanito away, slamming a door in his face. He stops a nurse, asks for a specific doctor by name, heads off to the waiting room.

     Simona and Rufina are in the kitchen, talking about Juanito and the dog. Rufina is in tears, Simona is, as usual, angry. Rufina asks why the dog ran off like that, Simona brags that she threw it into the street. Rufina is outraged.

     In the waiting room, Juan Alberto is in tears. (He did bring it upon himself though, he should be aware of what goes on in his house, what Simona is up to, what value Elena brought into the house, and so forth. This is just one example of someone else suffering when he does something stupid. I'll get off my soap box now.)

     Chelo is cleaning the kitchen, Elena says she can't sleep. Chelo comes out of the kitchen, goes behind Elena and begins to massage her shoulders. Elena sighs with contentment.

     Don Fermin and Luis Pablo talk, Don Fermin is sharing his vast knowlege of women and matters of the heart. He tells Luis Pablo that he should make a play for Elena, Luis Pablo says he wants to, Don Fermin says not to be too late, that he is sexy (Luis Pablo laughs). Don Fermin tells of a past love, she was very beautiful. Luis Pablo asks what happend. Don Fermin says something about money and children.

     Juan Alberto is on the phone in the waiting room, trying to get through to Adolfo.

     He can't reach Adolfo because he is in a bar, sucking down the suds and thinking about Chelo. A lady in a very short skirt slinks by, Adolfo doesn't notice (but the cameraman does, and follows her all the way by. Nice legs, but nothing to compare with Chelo's).

     Rufina is questioning Simona, why would she throw the dog into the street? Simona apparently did it to somehow get even with Elena. Realizing that she has perhaps said too much, Simona threatens Rufina with dire consequences should she say anything about this. She notices Adolfo approaching, shoes Rufina away. Adolfo comes in "Hi, what's happening?" seems to be enough to bring Rufina into the room crying about "el niño" and an accident. She isn't too coherent (niether is Adolfo by this time) Adolfo asks what happened, Rufina says that Simona threw the dog into the street. Simona starts claiming "It's not my fault", Adolfo looks like he wishes he were less of a gentleman (for just a moment, so do I).

     At the hospital, a nurse comes out of the emergency room, Juan Alberto asks her how is his son, she says something reassuring and goes on. He goes over to the door, looks through the window.

     Elena is telling Chelo that she is worried about Juanito, Chelo suggest that she call and find out how he is doing. She says that she can't call Juan Alberto, and certainly not Simona. She tinks of Rufina, she will call her.

     Adolfo is on the phone, writing something down. Simona and Rufina are watching. He hangs up, the phone rings, he answers. It is Juan Alberto. He writes some more, hangs up. He tells them that he has something to do, gives the paper to Rufina, tells her it is important, and runs out. Rufina says a prayer for Juanito.

     At the caberet, Lumara is singing. (My, my. How can that much fabric cover so little? I can see why Guero is interested. Actually I can see most everyting! almost...) Guero, Larry, and Moe are at a table towards the back, Moe has had a couple of glasses and is making a spectacle of himself. Larry subdues him. They want to dance, and at the next table is a fellow with three ladies. They go over and take away all three ladies.

     Rufina and Simona, in the parlor. The phone rings, Simona orders Rufina to answer it, she does, it is Rebeca, who wants to know why Rufina is answering the phone. She notices that Rufina sounds upset, she asks what has happened, Rufina starts the whole long story while Simona rolls her eyes. (She used to roll the eyes of a child, but she lost them). Near the end of the story, Rebeca says "My God" and hangs up. Carla wants to know whats going on. No, not Carla, the other one (I checked ahead on the tape, and Carla is 'occupied').

     Juan Alberto, in Juanito's room, the kid is still as, if you will pardon the expression, death. He is wondering what caused this.

     Ernesto and Carla are frolicking, Rebeca comes in all excited and tells him about Juanito. Ernesto seems properly upset.

     Juan Alberto goes to talk to the doctor, what are his chances? The doctor tells him that it is hard to say.

     Elena, in the fetching teddy bear pajamas, is unable to sleep. She is worried.

     Adolfo comes into the hospital, talks to Juan Alberto. A doctor (with a beard, must be a surgeon) comes out, the question him, he says that Juanito could be paralized...

     Ernesto and Carla go back to their frolicking.

     Juan Alberto is lamenting Juanito's injury to Adolfo, who tells him that Simona threw the dog into the street - what are you going to do about Simona? (yes, good question). Juan Alberto has trouble believing it, then gets angry.

     Chelo has made the couch into a bed for Elena, but she won't try to sleep, she will read the newspaper instead. Chelo gets her jacket, goes over to Aurorita's place, and pounds on the door until Aurorita gets up (it takes a while). Aurorita isn't her best upon first arising, and her mood isn't terribly good either, but she gets Chelo some sleeping pills for Elena, says she should use only one, ONLY ONE! (that adds up to two, right?)

     At the tavern, Juan Osorio's brother in laws band is on stage. Lumara is at Guero's table, Larry and Moe are absent. She asks Guero about Paco, he wants to know if she is interested in him, she says she is interested in Luis Pablo. Guero laughs.

     In the garden at the apartments, Luis Pablo is sitting on a fountain, and looking at the stars. Oscar comes out, asks whats up. Luis Pablo says he can't sleep, he heard Chelo and Aurorita, he thinks Elena must be sick. Oscar says everything is about Elena, Elena this, Elena that. Luis Pablo agrees. Oscar has a job, he starts tomorrow afternoon.

     Chelo gives Elena a glass of milk, Elena is looking at the classifieds, sees a job for a secretary. Chelo says that Elena can do better than that.

     Juan Alberto is crying, the doctor is telling him that Juanito is paralized, that they will do what they can, but he doesn't offer a lot of hope. The 'people in white' are unplugging Juanito's bed from the various monitors in the room, they wheel him to a more permanent room. Juan Alberto is making promises to God.

     Simona is in the kitchen, making life unpleasant for Rufina, who is making life unpleasnat for Simona.

     Ernesto is considering going back to Mexico to see about Juanito. Carla comes back into the room, he decides maybe later. (she is nibbling on his neck).

     Later, in Juanito's room, Juan Alberto and Adolfo are there when Juanito wakes up. Juanito is disoriented. The doctor comes in, looks at Juanito, says there is a problem. Juan Alberto talks to Juanito, gets him to smile, promises him anything. Juanito says he wants Elena.

     Elena is still looking at the newspaper, niether she or Chelo is getting any sleep tonight.

     The doctor asks Juan Alberto who this Elena person is, is she family? Juan Alberto says no, the doctor tells him that Juanito's recovery depends on his attitude, that Elena would be good for him. Juanito struggles to get the sylables out "Elena, Elena, Elena...." Juan Alberto sends Adolfo to get her.

     Chelo and ELena are still up, Elena says she will try to sleep now, gets into the couch/bed. Chelo turns down the lights, and goes into the other room. Instead of lying down, Elena is sitting up, running through the time when Juan Albert fired her in her mind. Over and over. In slow motion. Adolfo comes to the door, she lets him in. He tells her about Juanito's accident, she is devistated. She is crying "no, you can't say that".

     Juan Alberto is in Juanito's room, watching over his son and suffering.

     Elena crys loudly enough to bring Chelo from the other room, Adolfo tells her about Juanito, Elena goes into the room to change for travel.

     Juan Alberto is at the window of Juanito's room, talking to God.

     Elena and Adolfo leave, Chelo goes into the bedroom, where Talito wants to know what is up. Chelo tells her about Jaunito, she is upset.

     Juan Alberto is hovering over Juanito, the nurse chases him back so she can get to him. The doctor comes in, Juan Alberto asks about his chances. Juanito wakes up, struggles to talk "Elena, Elena. papa, Elena, Elena, El..e.na..". The doctor tells him that this person could be Juanito's best hope. Juanito's voice is getting weaker and weaker, the monitor by the bed starts making interesting sounds, when Elena comes in, and sits on the edge of Juanito's bed.

     To be continued...

 

Day 24 - Ely comes to visit.   Author: Ben (---) Date:   09-01-03 00:46 PDT

     Juan Alberto is hovering over Juanito, the nurse chases him back so she can get to him. The doctor comes in, Juan Alberto asks about his chances. Juanito wakes up, struggles to talk "Elena, Elena. papa, Elena, Elena, El..e.na..". The doctor tells him that this person could be Juanito's best hope. Juanito's voice is getting weaker and weaker, the monitor by the bed starts making interesting sounds, when Elena comes in, and sits on the edge of Juanito's bed. Seeing her discomfort, Juan Alberto sits beside her, puts a hand on her shoulder. She tells Juanito that she is here, she is Elena. He looks at her and smiles, weakly, he is concerned that Juan Alberto will run her off again. (Juan Alber shakes his head). She tells him that Jupi is OK, he reaches out to her with his hand with the IV tube and monitor sensor clipped onto a finger. (At least he can move his head, and an arm). He is afraid she will leave, she says she will never leave him. Juan Alberto, in tears, nods. A nurse calls the doctor away leaving Juan Alberto and Elena alone with Juanito. (Almost 30 minutes of review, but I guess this is important - but this should be a short summary).

     In New York, Silvia comes in, throws her jacket down, and is fixing herself a drink. Auntie comes in, asks what is up, Silvia is angry. Auntie drags her over to the couch, they sit, Silvia talks about whatever has her upset (anyone want to help me out here?) Just talking about it makse her mad enough that she needs another drink. Auntie says that only one person could make her this mad, Juan Alberto Montiel.

     At the hospital, Adolfo, Elena, and Juan Alberto are in the waiting room, Adolfo has brought coffee for Elena and Juan Alberto. She accepts hers, Juan Alberto declines. They are talking about blame, Elena says that blame doesn't matter right now, that what is important is the child, that he needs help and guidance.

     Talita is worried about Juanito, Oscar doesn't understand.

     Aurorita gets a letter. She opens it, starts to read. Don Fermin comes by, asks what it is. She says it is from someone (I didn't catch who, but if it is important, I'll get another chance) who travels a lot.

     Simona is bugging Rufina, who says if Juanito dies, it is all Simona's fault, Simona says it is not her fault, and if she says anything she will be sorry. Rufina says that she has to tell the truth. Simona looks upset.

     Simona and Rufina continue, Rufina tells her that she is a criminal.

     Juan Alberto, Adolfo, and Elena, still at the hospital. Juan Alberto doesn't want to bring Elena back into his household, even for Juanito.

     Simona, walking from the big house to the street, carring luggage. Is she making her getaway?

     At the apartments, a very attractive lady comes up the walk. She sees Aurorita, throws up her arms and yells "Aurora!". Aurorita is surprised, she doesn't recoginze her. The stranger walks over, introduces herself as Ely, she is wearing a short skirt, tight top (which doesn't come anywhere near the skirt. Her hair is done into ropes, with silver weights at the ends. All in all, rather outlandish, which attracts all the local youngsters. (She uses the occasional English word, so we see Spanish subtitles when she speaks). She flirts with a couple of the younger boys, and they carry her lugage for her, as she and Aurorita go to Aurorita's apartment.

     Juanito is wheeled from the operating room. Juan Alberto asks the surgeon how he is, the doctor tells him he has a chance, Juan Alberto, Elena, and Adolfo follow the gurney down the hall. When they are gone the doctor turns and says he isn't sure Juanito will be able to walk again. He sighs.

     Chelo is laughing at Talita telling about the new girl in town. Talita says that Aurorita called her Chabeli, but she calls herself (Talita strikes a pose) Elizabeth.

     Oscar is telling Luis Pablo about the same thing, using words like horrible.

     In Juanito's room, our three friends wait for Juanito to come out of the anesthetic. Adolfo tells them that he will go home for a bit (he isn't dressed for the day's work), Elena asks about her sister, he tells her he is working on it. He tells Juan Alberto he will see him later.

     Rebeca is leaving Puerto Vallarta for Mexico. She is upset with Ernesto that he isn't coming along, she gives him tickets so that he can come later.

     Rebeca's friends are talking, Carla is upset that Ernetsto is leaving her. She says that he is most passionate.

     Aurorita has made a meal for her guest, who is most impressed by it. (Closer inspection reveals a nostril ring, Oscar may have been right about that 'horrible' bit.) Aurorita asks her what she is planning to do, she says to live here. Aurorita mildly panics. Ely says that she will find work (or that she has found work, I'm not sure).

     Juan Alberto and Elena are still waiting for Juanito to wake up. Juan Alberto starts to ask Elena something "Elena, I would like..." , she interrupts with "No, no, no. Don't ask anything, please". He wan't to go back to a few days ago, but doesn't know how, and she isn't helping him any. Juanito starts making noises, they go to his side.

     Don Fermin comes over to Aurorita's place, best wig and everything. He wants to meet the new lady. She comes out, he jumps back a little (I don't think he was ready for the full effect, the 'peace symbol' earrings, the cowboy boot necklace, the nostril ring, the skin, the spanglish...

     Juanito is coming around. He only remembers a little of the accident, he wants to know what happened. He says something about lies, the dog. Juan Alberto tells him what he knows about the accident. Juanito asks Elena if she is going to come back to take care of him, she looks at Juan Alberto (Andrea Bocelli finally gets another chance to sing). Juan Alberto is about to speak...

 

Day 25 - Juanito is going home  Author: Ben (---)  Date:   09-02-03 15:57 PDT

     Juanito is coming around. He only remembers a little of the accident, he wants to know what happened. He says something about lies, the dog. Juan Alberto tells him what he knows about the accident. Juanito asks Elena if she is going to come back to take care of him, she looks at Juan Alberto (Andrea Bocelli finally gets another chance to sing). Juan Alberto tells him yes, she will be coming back, he looks at her to see if he has just lied to the kid, but she smiles a tiny smile, and nods. She says that she will come back, He wants to know if they can go to the movies, she says yes. (The kid is barganing better than Juan Alberto, who is the lawyer here?).

     Adolfo comes to the apartment to visit Chelo. She is cleaning house. He tells her how Juanito is doing. She straightens up a chair for him,

     Don Fermin and Luis Pablo, Don Fermin is tellin him about Ely, and having a good time doing it.

     Talita and Oscar, he asks if she has heard about Juanito, she says she doesn't know. He says it is up to God, she replies but it is a child. He puts his arm around her shoulders, they walk away.

     Elena and Juan Alberto, talk about her coming back. He says there is a problem, he did, after all, fire her. She says yes, but he should be able to take care of that. Juanito wants her to move in with them, she isn't sure she can. He asks her if she wants to come back, she says it doesn't matter, she loves Juanito. He says that isn't what he asked, does she want to live with them.

     Adolfo and Chelo continue. Whenever the conversation strays from Juanito or Elena, she gets confused and runs into the kitchen. She spends a lot of time in the kitchen.

     Elena, thinking she is alone in Juanito's room (except for the kid, of course, and Juan Alberto, who is sleeping) is remembering, as usual whenever she thinks of her future, waking up in Ernesto's bed. She cries, which wakes Juan Alberto, who is sleeping on a couch near the foot of Juanito's bed. He asks what is wrong, why is she crying. She says it is the child, and runs from the room.

     Ely is talking to Aurorita, about her plans, (which include "mucho money", to which Aurorita replies "Sí, dinero"). Chelo comes over to tell her that she is going to the hospital to see Juanito, sees Ely and looks at her with a "what is that?" kind of look. Aurorita introduces them, but I don't think Chelo is sure her unasked question had been answered.

     As Chelo and Adolfo head for his car, they pass Luis Pablo and Don Fermin, who watch suspiciously. Don Fermin wants to know who this fellow is, who is bothering his Chelito. Aurorita comes by, looking for Talita, he asks her about Adolfo, she says he is OK. Talita and Oscar arrive. Aurorita tells Talita that Chelo had asked her to take care of Talita while she goest to the hospital to see Juanito.

     Larry, Moe, and Curly are eating something from a street vendor, talking. Larry calls them aside (so the vendor won't hear them) and remarks that with everyone going to visit the hospital, the hose where Elena works is pretty much ungarded. They nod wisely at each other.

     Talita is telling Ely about Juanito ("Oh my God, poor child")

     Adolfo and Chelo arrive at Juanito's room, Chelo and Elena are talking when Juan Alberto interrupts. The doctor comes in, wanting to know how is the kid, he checks him out. No fever, normal pulse, he thinks Juanito can go home.

     Don Fermin (this one is hard to describe) is standing in front of a mirror, with big red clown nose. He is having a conversation with himself, only one part of the conversation is with a cardboard clowns picture with a cutout for his face, the other part is without the painted face. The clown face is happy, the other one (the real Don Fermin?) is crying about a lost love, someone named Consuelo.

     Chelo is surprised when Elena makes as if to go with Juan Alberto to prepare for Juanito going home, Adolfo tells them to leave, he will stay with Chelo. They leave, he tells Chelo that Juan Alberto has asked Elena to come back to work, that he is still working on Juan Alberto for her.

     Talita is telling Ely about people at the apartments. Ely wants to know if her sister, Elena has a sweetheart, Talita says no, Ely asks about Talita's sweetheart, she says no, she mentions Oscar who is just a friend, Ely says who is Oscar, Talita says the brother of Luis Pablo. Ely says "Oh, yeah, the brother of Luis Pablo, Who is Luis Pablo" then she says "The brother of Oscar, right?", Talita agrees, they laugh. Ely wants to know if Luis Pablo has a girlfriend, Talita tells her no, he likes Elena, but there is nothing happening there. Apparently Ely is learning the availability of all the males in the area.

     Luis Pablo is cutting another record (tape, actually) the engineer is really rocking on. Oscar is watching, as is the producer, they are enjoying the singing too.

     At the hospital, Juanito wants water, Chelo gets some water on a sponge, wets his lips. He says "Elena", she feels like an impostor.

     Elena and Juan Alberto arrive at the big house, Rufina asks how is Juanito. Elena goes to prepair Juanito's room just seconds before Rebeca and Ernesto arrive back from Puerto Vallarta. (Oh oh, are we going to play that game again? Or is Juan Alberto about to change faces again and kick out Elena one more time?) As they come in, Juan Alberto is asking where is Simona, Rufina says that she is gone, she ran away. Rebeca asks about Juanito, Juan Alberto tells her he is doing OK, and will be coming home. Ernesto is upset that he had to come back and the kid isn't even dead! Juan Alberto looks daggers at him. Rebeca wants Ernesto to help her do something, lets go, hurry. Ernesto, under protest, leaves with Rebeca, seconds before Elena comes back (Yep, we are playing "Desperately seeking Elena"). As they leave, Ernesto says to Juan Alberto "Mommy Dearest" in English. Elena comes back, asks who that was, Juan Alberto says his mother and his brother. He asks if she has met his brother, she says no. (Another lie, but she doesn't know it. Juan Alberto will, of course, hold it against her when the truth comes out.)

     To be continued...

     Hmm, there was enough review that episode 24 was completely unneeded, this one picked up where episode 23 left off.

 

DAYS 26-30

     Day 26 - I can't feel my legs!  Author: Ben (---)  Date:   09-03-03 18:11 PDT

     Elena and Juan Alberto arrive at the big house, Rufina asks how is Juanito. Elena goes to prepair his room just seconds before Rebeca and Ernesto arrive back from Puerto Vallarta. (Oh oh, are we going to play that game again? Or is Juan Alberto about to change faces again and kick out Elena one more time?) As they come in, Juan Alberto is asking where is Simona, Rufina says that she is gone, she ran away. Rebeca asks about Juanito, Juan Alberto tells her he is doing OK, and will be coming home. Ernesto is upset that he had to come back and the kid isn't even dead! Juan Alberto looks daggers at him. Rebeca wants Ernesto to help her do something, lets go, hurry. Ernesto, under protest, leaves with Rebeca, seconds before Elena comes back (Yep, we are playing "Desperately seeking Elena"). As they leave, Ernesto says to Juan Alberto "Mommy Dearest" in English. Elena comes back, asks who that was, Juan Alberto says his mother and his brother. He asks if she has met his brother, she says no.

     Juanito's doctors consult,

     Juan Alberto and Elena continue to talk about Juanito. She is sitting on a chair in the parlor, he has one hand on her shoulder. She says that Juanito's mother should be involved, Juan Alberto turns away, saying that she is to have nothing to do with Juanito. He turns back to her, takes both of her hands in his, raises her from the chair. Looking deeply into her eyes, he says "The only person who is to have any control over Juanito at this time, is you, Elena".

     The stooges are joined by Guero, no longer wearing the cast. He asks if they missed him in the family.

     Gistavo and Cristine are talking about tasks he is working on, he asks about Jimena, Cristine tells him she is with Ignacio.

     But Jimena is at a fitness center, talking to another girl about Ernesto. Adriana comes up in the conversation, but they don't seem too bothered by her memory. The new girl seems intrigued by Ernesto, Jimena says that Ernesto loves her.

     Rebeca and Ernesto arrive at the hospital, Chelo and Adolfo are already there. Rebeca is sitting on the edge of the bed, talking about Juanito as if he wern't there, making dire predictions. Chelo asks her to not talk like that in the hospital, Rebeca wants to know who she is (to talk to me that way).

     The stooges plus Guero continue to talk, see Talita and Ely coming by, they have to go over and meet Ely. Guero comes up to Talita like an old friend, puts one hand on her shoulder. She jumps back like she was burned. He introduces himself as a friend, Guero. Ely introduces herself as Ely from Los Angeles. Larry introduces himself, Curly says hi, Ely remarks "Oh, it's a girl", Curly removed her cap to reveal hair (not so long as Larry's, but more fashonably cut). They ask if Ely is a friend of Elena, are told that she is Aurorita's niece. Guero introduces his car. Talita has been looking more and more uncomfortable with all of this, she takes Ely's hand and drags her away. Guero refers to her as "la gringita".

     Adolfo has gotten Rebeca away from the bed, he is telling her that the doctors have said that Juanito shouldn't be worried by talking about him. Rebeca is still upset that Chelo, a stranger, had spoken to her. She says that they must get Silvia there immediatly, that the boys mother is the only one to know what is best for her son.

     And in New York, Silvia is apparently over being mad about Larry and his 'business meetings' (that is 'other women'). At least, she is about to go out with him as soon as she gets that last hair into its proper place. She leaves, auntie is upset.

     Rebeca is standing over Juanito, telling him that he will be just fine as soon as Silvia gets there. She and Ernesto leave the room. Adolfo tries to explain to Chelo about Rebeca, Chelo wants to know why she isn't more concerned about the kid instead of his mother.

     In the waiting room, Rebeca is making a phone call. she is (I think) talking to Silvia's aunt. She ends the call, talks to Ernesto, who tries to tell her to leave things in Juan Alberto's hands.

     Talita is telling Ely that the folks she just met have a reputation of being bandits. Conversation turns to the future, Ely wants to be a model.

     Rufina is feeding Elena, they talk about Juuanito (poor child). Rufina wants Juanito to be back at home. Elena says me too. Juan Alberto is in his office, on the phone.

     Jimena gets home, Gustavo has been waiting up for her. He wants to talk. about 'that man'. She tells him that Ernesto is not here, but when he comes back, she will be with him. He gets upset, she says that he is blaming Ernesto for Adriana. He is further upset, she runs from the room.

     Lalo is on the phone, talking to Ernesto at the hospital. He tells Ernesto that Jimena had been looking for him. They hang up, Lalo begins frantically cleaning up the mess he has been making of Ernesto's apartment. (Mostly removing empty bottles).

     Rufina and Elena continue to talk, now in the parlor. Rufina is saying how bad Simona was for (to) Juanito. Juan Alberto comes out of the office, he and Elena leave for the hospital.

     At the recording studio, Luis Pablo has just finished, the producer congratulates him on his performance, introduces him to another executive.

     As Juan Alberto and Elena drive through the gate, Elena asks him to stop. He asks why, she says she sees Jupi. They get out, go over to the dog, who seems in much better shape than his master. Jupi gets up for Elena, Juan Alberto picks him up.

     Rebeca and Ernesto are in the waiting room, she is on the phone again. She ends the call, asks Ernesto if he has Silvia's number. He says yes, she asks for it.

     Juan Alberto and Elena check out Jupi, he seems OK. Juan Albert says that Juanito will be pleased, Elena agrees. They take him back to the house, Rufina says she will feed him.

     In New York, Auntie is watching TV, with a big bowl of popcorn. At an exciting moment, the phone rings. It is Rebeca. Auntie asks her to wait, watches the critical moment of the movie, and then talks to Rebeca, No, Silvia is not there, what's up? Her son is injured. How terrible!

     Juan Alberto and Elena arrive at the hospital, he lets her out at the entrance, drives away to park. As she approaches the door, she hears someone call out "Elena!", she turns, it is Ernesto! He is in his car, driving home. She heads for the door, by the time he gets parked and back, she is gone. Juan Alberto walks up, asks him whats happening, he says he saw someone. Juan Alberto asks if it was a friend of his, she says nothing special.

     Elena is waiting at the elevator, in a panic. Juan Alberto joins her, they wait for the elevator.

     Rebeca comes into Juanito's room, looking for Juan Albarto. Juanito is trying to wake up, she hears him asking for Elena. She tells him that Elena is not here, that his mother will be there soon. He says he doesn't want his mother, he wants Elena and his papa. She backs off as if he were uttering blasphemy. Adolfo goes over to Juanito, tells him that Elena and his papa will be there soon. He says theat Elena's sister came to see him. Chelo says hi, squeezes his hand. He smiles at her, Rebeca, over against the wall, is, if you will forgive the expression, pissed. The doctor comes into the room, followed by a nurse, who asks them all to leave for a moment. They go out into the hall, where Rebeca vents her anger. She doesn't like strangers (Chelo) around Juanito, she doesn't care that she is Elena's sister, because she blames Elena for Juanito's injury. She storms out, as Adolfo tries to tell her that it was actually Silvia who caused the accident. Elena and Juan Alberto arrive, Chelo takes Elena asside, tells her about Rebeca.

     At the apartments, Don Fermin comes to visit Aurorita, who is not home, he stays to talk to Ely for a while, if he is no bother. She says no, they talk for a while.

     Ernesto, back at his apartment, talks to Lalo. says that he saw Elena, but that she got away. Conversation turns to other matters, Jimena.

     Luis Pablo and Oscar, in a bar. Luis Pablo is drinking some amber colored liquid with a head, Oscar's drink is a dark brown cola color, as suits his age. They are talking about families, Luis Pablo asks if Oscar likes Talita, he says no, he adores her.

     Rebeca and Adolfo, in the waiting room. She thinks Silvia would be most interested in what is going on with her son. They go into Juanito's room, where Elena is talking to Juanito, telling him about the dog. Rebeca is pleased that Juanito is talking, upset at who he is talking to. She asks if Juan Alberto will permit the dog in the house, he says he has already permitted it. A nurse comes in, tells Rebeca that she has a couple of friends in the lobby. Rebeca and Juan Alberto leave, he is trying to get her to back off a bit.

     Don Fermin, at his apartment, holding his hand to his heart. He has either had a heart attack, or he is in love. He sings, apparently it is love. His singing disturbs Ely, sitting on the couch reading a magazine. He offers to stop, she tells him to continue.

     Ernesto, heading out, when the phone rings. He tells Lalo to get it, he is on the way to see Jimena, Lalo tells him to answer it. It is Carla, she misses him, he says it is a bad time, what with the hospital and all. He hangs up, leaves.

     Carla tells her friend the latest about Juanito, they decide to go to Mexico tomorrow.

     Adolfo and Chelo are in the hospital cafeteria. She only wants coffee, he wants to get her a meal. They compromise with sandwiches. He orders, he tells her about Rebeca and Ernesto and their relationship to Juan Alberto. (If you didn't understand, Ernesto is Rebeca's son, she is Juan Alberto's godmother, his parents died in an accident, so Rebeca raised Juan Alberto. - if you did understand, he probably said something else.)

     Aurorita is watching TV, Talita comes in, makes fun of her telenvola. She is excited, says she wants to be a model, or an artist (singer?). Aurorita says something unenthusiastic, Talita turns off the TV and jumps onto the coffee table and starts singing and shaking her but (the butt shaking is marginally better). At least Aurorita isn't crying over the telenovela any more. Talita says that she will make lots of money, and Elena and Chelo won't have to work any more, and maybe she will marry Juanito.

     At the hospital, a nurse delivers a folder of X-rays, he sends her for Doctor Perez.

     Silvia's phone rings, it is Larry. She gets all bossy (I guess that is just her, right?) and upset at him until he mentions the theater, then she is more pleased. She hangs up the phone, heads for the door. But Auntie stops her, tells her that she has news (Silvia isn't interedted) and pushes her into a chair. She tells her that her son has had an accident, is hospitalized. Silvia bursts into tears (now she can't go to the theater?) She says this is terrible, but Larry is more important, Auntie is shocked. She wants to know how Silvia can think about anything other than her child, Silvia says he is probably OK, she will telephone and find out later. Wiping the tears from her cheeks. she grabs her purse and heads for the door, leaving Auntie in a trance of disbelief.

     The doctor looks at the X-rays, while, in Juanito's room, ELena is talking to Juanito. A nurse brings in lunch, Juan Alberto enters the room. Everyone (including Juanito) has a good time watching Elena shovel jello into Juanito's mouth.

     Back at the big house, the stooges, dressed in theif ninja suits, arive. They climb over the fence and pick the front door lock, they enter quietly (for them), Curly has a pink plastic trash/loot bag. Ernesto and Lalo arrive, just as Larry and Moe are breaking into Juan Alberto's desk, where they find an envelope of money and some other papers, ID, etc. Curly is filling the bag, but when she hears Ernesto come in the door, she puts the bag down in the parlor and hides. Ernesto enters Juan Alberto's room, something seems out of place.

     At the hospital, we have Elena, Juan Alberto, Chelo, and Adolfo, to take Juanito home. He goes to sit up, to jump out of bed - but his legs don't work! He says "I can't feel my legs!"

 

Day 27 - Elena who? Author: Ben (---) Date:   09-04-03 20:15 PDT

     At the hospital, we have Elena, Juan Alberto, Chelo, Adolfo, and Rebeca, to take Juanito home. He goes to sit up, to jump out of bed - but his legs don't work! He tries to move them, he can't feel them, they won't move. Rebeca says a discouraging word (I think it was "Silvia"), Juan Alberto goes over and tells her to be quiet.

     Ernesto, back at the big house, is prowling around, And, Larry, Moe, and Curly are creeping around the big house, Ernesto stumbles into a bag of loot (silver plates and trays). Lalo (who is apparently being Ernest's shadow tonight) and Rufina want to know what it is. The stooges hear the commotion, Moe pulls his pistol. Ernesto is about to make a phone call, when the stooges confront them, guns at the ready.

     At the hospital, Rebeca is muttering about how Silvia needs to know, Juan Alberto has Adolfo take her out of the room. Juanito is asking what is wrong (he hits himself in the legs and doesn't feel anything.

     At the big house, the stooges, waving guns around, make our three heros turn their backs while the stooges make their escape, without loot.

     At the hospital, Elena and Juan Alberto discuss Juanito's condition, Juan Alberto leaves the room, Elena goes with him.

     Rufina wants to call the police, Ernesto sayst that it is Juan Alberto's problem.

     Adolfo tries to talk Rebeca out of telling Silvia about Juanito, it could be a false alarm. She says Silvia shoule come back soon. She says that she will call Silvia.

     Rebeca calls Ernesto, who tells her about the intruders, she tells Adolfo. She heads out to the big house, tells Adolfo to tell Juan Alberto, who is now in the hospital cafeteria, with Elena.

     The stooges are reviewing their job. Larry is upset that the almost got caught. They did find some cash in Juan Alberto's desk, Moe is counting it out "One for you, one for you, two for me" They jump all over him with both boots.

     Rebeca, figuring that if Juan Alberto doesn't want her to notify Silvia, she will have Ernesto do it. He calls, she asks about Juanito, he tells her there has been a little accident. She doesn't seem too upset, perhaps he hasn't told her the full extent of the problem.

     The doctor looks over Juanito, takes Elena and Juan Alberto into the hall to talk. He tells them that there may be a spinal compression, the injury could be permanent or it could get better, the he just can't predict. Juan Alberto is not used to people not doing what he wants, he is really upset that the doctor can't tell him anything definite.

     Chelo and Talita, at their apartment, talk about Juanito, while Juan Alberto and Elena, in Juanito's room, stand and worry. Elena tries to comfort Juan Alberto, but he isn't listening.

     Rebeca asks Ernesto if he called Silvia, he says he did, and that the child is not important to her. Rebeca says that she is a bad mother (face it, she is a bad human being). Ernesto indicates that it isn't too important to him either, it is Juan Alberto's problem. Rebeca gets mad at him for that.

     In New York, Silvia is doing her nails, she tells her aunt that Juanito is injured, but he isn't important.

     Ely comes into Aurorita's apartment, lookin good (for some definition of good, somewhere). Aurorita picks up some sort of silver statuette, asks Ely what good is it, Ely says that it is the fashon.

     Don Fermin is talking to Lumara when Ely comes by. Lumara asks him what 'that' is. He tries to introduce them, Lumara offers to shake hands, Ely isn't too interested. Don Fermin drags their hands together, completes the introductions. Ely flounces off. I see that these will not be best of friends.

     Juan Alberto is talking to Juanito when Rebeca and Ernesto come in, bringing with them a chill. Ernesto puts a hand on Juanito's forehead, Juanito wishes he could move his legs so that he could kick it off. Ernesto, seeing that he isn't wanted there, goes to the door, asking Juan Alberto to join him in the hall.

     Lumara and Don Fermin continue, Lumara thinks Ely is crazy, or at least wierd. She walks away, the view almost drives Don Fermin crazy.

     Ernesto tells Juan Alberto about the intruders. Juan Alberto wants to know why didn't the alarm work? Ernesto isn't too worried about it.

     Elena arrives home, Talita and Chelo ask about Juanito and all, Elena doesn't say much, they leave the room, leaving her standing alone and crying. Chelo notices, asks what is wrong, Elena says she can't take any more ("No puedo mas, no puedo mas" - what is she saying?) She has had too much of being cheerful for Juanito or Juan Alberto when she is hurting inside.

     Ernesto, on the phone. Whoever he is talking to will see him in one hour.

     Elena, still crying, tells them about her day. It is a long story.

     Rebeca is watching over Juanito, Ernesto comes in, kneels by the bed, and tries to touch Juanito's cheek, but he can't. As he rises to leave, Adolfo comes in, to talk to Juan Alberto who is resting on the couch. Juan Alberto and Adolfo head for the cafeteria.

     Silvia's aunt is trying to get her to at least call and see how her son is, Silvia can't be bothered.

     Juan Alberto and aadolfo are in the hospital cafeteria, having coffee. Adolfo asks how he is doing, he says that Juanito can't walk. Why? why? Adolfo asks about Silvia Adolfo asks about Chelo, Juan Alberto says he won't help her.

     Morning, and Elena is getting ready for another day at the hospital. As her job seems to be moralle officer, she is fixing herself up nicely, hair done to a T, nice clothes.

     Jaime and Carla, Rebeca's friends from Puerto Vallarta come to see how she is doing. Rebeca gives Carla Ernesto's address.

     Ernesto, meanwhile, is romancing Jimena.

     Elena stops to tell Luis Pablo how things are going, He wants to know if she has her job back, she says she isn't sure, it depends on the kid. He asks where she is going, she says to the hospital. She heads off, Luis Pablo watches her get into Juan Alberto's limo.

     Rebeca talks to Juan Alberto about Silvia, they go into the hallway, where he tells her to stop with Silvia, if Silvia had cared about Juanito, she would not have betrayed him. They argue. He finaly says that he does not want Silvia here, and goes back into Juanito's room.

     Ernesto is romancing Jimena when the doorbell rings. It is Carla! He invites her in. Jimena is buttoning things and tidying herself, he introduces her to Carla. Jimena puts on one shoe, finds her purse and the other shoe, and hobbles out, one shoe on, one being carried. Carla gets upset.

     Ely is at a modeling agency, where we meet Pauly, who seems just a bit 'off'. She has her ideas, he has his, about the only thing they agree on is that Ely will be a hit. But the hair has to go, the piercings.

     At the big house, Adolfo is talking to Rufina about the intruders, and their pistols.

     Pauly continues to study Ely, give her a pink brick, actually something else. She says that she understands, leaves the room.

     Oscar and Talita are walking, they sit at a bench, he runs off for something.

     Elena is talking to Juanito, he tells her that his father has fed him, Juan Alberto comes in, pats Juanito's head, touches Elena's shoulder, leaves. She continues to cheer Juanito up, she has a book...

     Curly comes by where Talita is sitting and waiting for Oscar. She sits down, they talk a bit. Curly complains that she doesn't have many friends, Talita asks why. She says that she lives on a bad street, that her fathers doesn't care, ... Talita says that she will be her friend. Oscar comes back, Talita and Oscar leave. Curly looks like she's thinking "She likes me, she really likes me", and she smiles. (Or maybe it's "She has fallen into my trap", but that is just the suspicious me).

     Carla is talking to Jaime, telling her about Ernesto's other woman - girl actually. Jaime asks what she expects. Rebeca is brought in by a servant, she talks to Jaime, Carla is sulking. Rebeca is talking about how Silvia has to come back, to get rid of that 'maldita' señorita Elena.

     Aurorita is folding laundry as Chelo irons. They are talking about Ely, and her ambition to be a famous model.

     Ely is still with Pauly. The pink brick was either a sponge, or a bar of soap. Either way, Ely's hair is in a towel, and she is much more simply garbed, and looks much better (more human, anyway). He is trying to teach her to walk, to pose. to talk. He mentions perfecting her English (she has been using a lot of English slang). She looks panicked, he asks what is wrong. She admits that she does not speak English, she has only learned a few phrases. He says he's going to die.

     At the big house, Juan Alberto comes through the parlor with instructions for Rufina, she is apparently the ranking servant now. As he leaves, she asks about Juanito.

     And Juanito is sleeping, apparently the book worked. Elena is half asleep, thinking about Ernesto seeing her at the hospital entrance, and asking herself why?

     Ernesto, meanwhile, is at his apartment, talking to Lalo. who seems amused by Ernesto's too many women. They leave.

     Rebeca and Jaime and Carlo are having iced tea, Carla has decided to go back to Puerto Vallarta. She leaves, Rebeca asks Jaime why. Jaime tells her that her son has too many women. Rebeca looks like a recurring headache is back.

     Talita is leaving the apartment, Chelo asks where she is going, gives instructions for proper behaviour. Talitl runs back to kiss her goodby, Chelo give her some money.

     Elena is still thinking, Juan Alberto comes in. Silence for a while as he looks over at Juanito, then he goes over to her, takes her hand. She says "Juan Alberto", he says "Thank you Elena, you have been a great help".

     Ernesto and Rebeca are waling up to the hospital, she is complaining about that woman. "What woman?" "That woman watching Juanito for Juan Alberto, that señorita Elena". "What is her last name?" "I don't remember, something like 'Terminal'" "Carvajal?" "Yes, that is her name. Elena Carvajal". Ernesto looks thoughtful.

 

Day 28 - The forces of darkness gather.  Author: Ben (---)  Date:   09-06-03 00:22 PDT

     Ernesto and Rebeca are waling up to the hospital, she is complaining about that woman. "What woman?" "That woman watching Juanito for Juan Alberto, that señorita Elena". "What is her last name?" "I don't remember, something like 'Terminal'" "Carvajal?" "Yes, that is her name. Elena Carvajal". Ernesto looks thoughtful. Rebeca asks if he knows this person, he says that he has heard of her. To himself, he whispers "Thank you. Elena".

     In Juanito's room, Juanito wakes up, says he wants to go home. She tells him he can't.

     At the apartment, Adolfo comes to visit Chelo, if it is not bother. She tell him to come in, he sits on the couch, then, noticing that she is still standing, he rises, gestures for her to sit also. She offers him coffee, he accepts. As she goes into the kitchen, he sits, with an expression that indicates, as has been said here before, he is well and truly smitten.

     Ernesto and Lalo are talking, there must be some advantage to knowing that Elena is Juanito's teacher. Ernesto thinks it could give him leverage against Juan Alberto. When he mentions Elena as a romantic interest, Lalo asks about Jimena, Ernesto's response is "Oh, please!".

     At the apartments, Don Fermin is playing with the kids, He limps over to sit beside Luis Pablo, complaining that he is no longer the man that he never was. Luis Pablo is thinking about work, the mariachis, other possibilities due to the record studio.

     Juanito is asking where his dad is, Elena tells him with the doctors. Just then Juan Alberto comes in, telling Juanito that he can go home tomorrow. Juanito is pleased until Juan Alberto tells him that Elena will go to her home now, Juanito wants to know if he will see her later, she promises him that he will.

     Adolfo continues with Chelo, they are talking finances. Apparently, Chelo has some savings from her mother, and there is what Elena will be earning. Chelo is concerned that Juan Alberto will reconcile with Silvia,

     Jimena and Ernesto talk, she says that her father is very much against them having any sort of relationship. He says that is their decision, kisses her and says he will be with her later.

     Don Fermin is talking to Luis Pablo about women for Luis Pablo to choose from. Lumara is out, no, not Cyelo, Talita is too young, Ely (about this time, Ely comes by) Ely! (This is the first time they have seen the beautiful young lady Pauly had found hiding in all the wierd clothing and makeup). They are impressed. They chat a big, Ely and Luis Pablo exchange a look that bodes well for the future.

     Chelo and Adolfo continue, he is holding her hand, she has to pry it loose to get a cookie. He is saying that he will help her.

     Nightfall, and Elena gets into Juan Alberto's limo.

     Ernesto is romancing Jimena, no couches this time. He rolls over, she kisses his neck. She asks if there is a problem, he says all is perfect. He says something about his mother, gets out of the bed to call her.

     Gustavo is wondering where his daughter is. Cristine says that she went out with her girlfriends. He says that she had better not be with Ernesto, the girl is in love, but he won't stand for Ernesto de las Montero. The look on his face indicates that it is a good thing that Ernesto is not within reach at this moment.

     Aurorita is reading the Tarot cards for Ely, she sees much money, She sees a man. Ely says maybe Pauly - but no. Aurorita asks isn't he a man, Ely says yes, sort of.

     Don Fermin is spray painting the 'musical instrument' he made from a clothes rack and several partially filled bottles. He is talking with Luis Pablo, still about romance. He asks about Ely, Luis Pablo says that she is pretty, attractive, charming. Don Ferman asks if he likes her, Luis Pablo says yes.

     Jimena arrives home, Cristine tells her that her father doesn't want her to see Ernesto, she says that is where she was. Jimena tells her mother that she loves Ernesto, gets her mother to say that she will talk to Gustavo for her.

     The Carvajal girls are preparing supper, Elena is doing something with a frying pan. She finishes, they all carry the various dishes to the table.

     At the big house, Ernesto arrives, looking for Rebeca, ufina tells him she isn't there. He asks if she has heard from Silvia, she says no, nothing. He is unsurprised, but thinks she is neglecting her son. Rufina, talking too much, says that soon Juanito will be back, and that Elena will be living there too. She is pleased, forseeing a possible wedding. He is thoughtful, he mutters to himsellf that Juan Alberto and Elena will never be married.

     Adolfo is talking to Juan Alberto about Chelo, Juan Alberto asks if he likes her, Adolfo says yes, she pleases me, very much.

     After dinner with the Carvajal girls, Talita is dancing to some music, Chelo and Elena are talking over coffee. Chelo tells them Adolfo was over, he wants to help her. Elena asks if he has kissed her, she says not yet. Talita and Elena are amused.

     Party time, Luis Pablo is singing with the Decibles (he is out of uniform, wearing a tan jacket, but is in full voice. The crown loves it. Don Fermin strikes up an acquaintance with a young lady who seems to be a music lover. Her fellow doesn't seem to mind too much.

     Juan Alberto tells Adolfo he is making a mistake trusting a woman like Silvia. Adolfo says that Chelo is nothing like Silvia.

     Chelo and Elena talk, Elena is worried about Juanito, about everything. She worries about Ernesto, who saw her at the hospital. She says something about "that man".

     And Ernesto is at the big house, reading a newspaper, when Simona returns. She asks how is Juanito, Ernesto tells her he is good, she says that there were some lies blaming her for the accident. She says that the dog should never have been brought into the house. She seems to have found an ally in Ernesto, in that neither of them care much for señorita Elena. They plot against her, Ernesto is having a great time

     Chelo asks about this man who worries Elena. She says I can't tell you, I hate him. She says that Ernesto de los Monteros has injured her soul.

     Ernesto, meanwhile, is telling Simona that her hate is well directed. Simona asks that she be told when Rebeca returns, she is upset that the house is going to hell in a handbasket. Ernesto says that it is taken care of, but won't tell her how. He looks at his watch, tells her he has to go. She smiles, she will have everything under control.

     Chelo doesn't understand how this Ernesto can be so important. Elena won't tell her.

     At the festival, Don Fermin is dancing with his new friend, someone brings him a bottle of tequila. He has to toast everyone (or at least, all the women). Individually.

     Juan Alberto is remembering Juanito asking for Elena, he thinks about how good she is for Juanito, for him. And, at the apartment, Elena is thinking of Juan Alberto, how her soul cries out for him

     Luis Pablo is helping a very under the weather Don Ferman home. He wants to sing way too loud.

     Morning, Chelo is talking to Aurorita about Elena, how she is so worried. There is a knock at the door, a man has an envelope for Chelo, she signs for it. Aurorita wants to know what it is, Chelo opens it, it is a summons to court.

     Elena and Juan Alberto, in Juanito's room, talking to him. He is excited that he will be going home today. Talita has come to see him also, after a bit, Juan Alberto leaves, followed soon by Elena. Talita entertains him.

     Chelo and Aurorita are asking about the letter, what to do, when Adolfo shows up. He looks at the paper, says that he will bring it to Juan Alberto, she says no, he has enough to worry about, and this is what caused him to get upset with her sister before.

     At the big house, Rebeca is on the phone, talking to Juan Alberto, he tells her they will be bringing Juanito home soon.

     Juanito is telling Talita about his dog. they are having a good time. Then she thinks about how he can't go walking with the dog.

     Chelo and Adolfo argue about her court case. He insists that he will help her. She gets up, won't look at him. He follows her, she moves away. There is a slow motion chase around the apartment, until she sits down, he kneels in front of her. He tells her he won't let anything bad happen, she is a woman he wants to know for a long time.

     Don Fermin has a headache. Considering the night before, he should have several headaches, waiting in line. He has an ice bag on his head, but it doesn't help. Aurorita knocks on the door, way too loud, He stumbles over to let her in, she wants to know what is wrong, she guides him to a chair, he tells her about Luis Pablo, and all that tequila. he finally gets sat down at the table. she leaves to get something for him.

     Rufina is talking to Rebeca, who doesn't want her breakfast, or even to get up. She misses Simona, She looks in a mirror, sees something bad. Ernesto comes in, Rufina leaves. She asks when Silvia will get there, he tells her that she isn't coming. She doesn't know what they will do about the problem of Elean.

     Luis Pablo has joined Don Fermin, he is in much better shape. Don Fermin doesn't remember much of last night. Aurorita hs sent Ely over with a tray for Don Fermin, he drinks something from a mug, is suddenly much better, flirting with Ely. Luis Pablo leaves, Ely attempts to sit in the wrong chair.

     Ernesto and Rebeca plot. She says that Juan Alberto doesn't know what he is doing. He says that he has plans for Elena Carvajal, it is true. She is so angry about Juan Alberto and that woman, she is beside herself, and both of her are angry.

     Adolfo talks to Juan Alberto, tells him that this morning, Chelo was summoned to court. In three days. Juan Alberto isn't much help, lots of talk, no action.

     Ely is still with Don Fermin, who is at the table, eating the breakfast she had brought to him. They talk a bit, he tells her she if felling much better. She kisses him on the top of the head, he says he couldn't feel it, please do it again (he removes his wig). She does.

     Ernesto and Rebeca continue to plot against Elena and Juan Alberto.

     Elena talks with Adolfo, about Chelo, then about Elena, and Juanito. She wants to know what they will do.

     Ernesto and Rebeca continue to talk, finally, she figures out that Ernesto must already know Elena. She asks him just how well does he know Elena Carvajal.

 

Day 29 - Juanito falls; Elena is caught  Author: Ben (---) Date:   09-07-03 19:48 PDT

     Ernesto and Rebeca continue to talk, finally, she figures out that Ernesto must already know Elena. She asks him just how well does he know Elena Carvajal.

     He tells her no, he doesn't know Elena Carvajal. She wants details, he isn't forthcoming. He leaves, laughing.

     Elena talks to Adolfo, who is going to help Chelo? Juan Alberto won't help, Elena gets upset.

     Curly is walking down the street, she has something in a shopping bag, something fabric, something that excites her. Larry and Moe, somewhere else, are talking.

     Guero is talking to Lumara, she is upset about Elena stealing her man, he tells her that Elena's sister will soon have plenty of trouble.

     Elena comes into Juanito's room, Talita is reading to him. She gets to a chapter end, Elena interrupts. Talita leaves, Elena is talking to Juanito. She is holding his hand, trying to reassure him.

     At the big house, Rufina is giving instructions to another servant, who calls her 'Rufi'.

     Juan Alberto comes into Rebeca's room, he has heard that she is ill. She tries again to get him to get Silvia to return. She talks a lot along that vein, he finally gives up and leaves.

     In New York, Silvia has been shopping, she dumps several bags on the couch. Auntie is upset that she can go shopping while her child is in a hospital. She says Juanito is there, she is here.

     Guero flirts with Aurorita, who is sweeping the walkway. She leaves.

     Luis Pablo is working on a record, tells the engineer that it sounds perfect.

     Ely is going on her first modeling gig. Pauly is so smug, expecting people to love his new model. Ely comes out. The crowd goes wild!

     Juanito wants to know when he will be going home, he wants to see Jupi. Elena and Juan Alberto try to explain what is going on, the delays. He is most worried about his pet.

     At the club, Jimena and a friend are talking about Ernesto.

     The apartment kids are playing ball, Oscar comes by looking for Talita,

     Talita is at the cafeteria with Adolfo, they are talking about Chelo, he wants to know if she has a boyfriend. She tells him no.

     Guero, Larry, and Moe are talking, Curly comes up, in a dress. They are unimpressed. (I think it is a good change for her, but she needs work, possibly with Pauly. The knit cap doesn't go with the outfit, but her legs arn't bad, nice figure. She should continue to improve herself, and if the gang doesn't like her that way, that may also be an improvement.)

     Guero, Larry, and Moe are talking, Curly comes up, in a dress. They are unimpressed. (I think it is a good change for her, but she needs work, possibly with Pauly. The knit cap doesn't go with the outfit, but her legs arn't bad, nice figure. She should continue to improve herself, and if the gang doesn't like her that way, that may also be an improvement.)

     Juanito is talking to Elena and Juan Alberto, he seems to think that when he gets home, everything will be like before. Juan Alberto is heartsick for him, he has to leave. Juanito wants to know what is wrong with his papa, she says "nothing, my love", tells him he isn't feeling well.

     Curly wants to know if they don't like her, Guero says that their buddy has become a girl. He leaves, she starts to go, Moe puts a hand on her arm, wanting her to stay, she hits him and runs off. Larry wants to know who put these ideas into her head.

     Ernesto is talking to Lalo, mentions Elena, and Juan Alberto won't like it. He says it is too much, about Elena.

     Ely is in Pauly's office, he comes in, tells her that she was terrific, they are excited, planning for the future. They mention movies. She will be famous.

     Talita is doing dishes, talking to Chelo, who is subdued. She asks if Elena will be home, Talita tells her that Elena is with Juanito.

     Elena and Juan Alberto are talking to Juanito, she says something that Juan Alberto disarees with, they turn to each other and begin to argue quietly. Juanito throws a tantrum, they arn't solving his problem.

     Don Fermin is on the couch, still feeling the effects of all that tequila. Aurorita is sweeping, sweeps about a ton of papers under the carpet, stomps them flat. She starts to dust, climbs onto a chair, showing a bit of leg. Suddenly Don Fermin is in a much better mood. He flirts, she dusts, including dusting him.

     The doctor comes into Juanito's room, Juanito starts his finger snapping giving of orders. Juan Alberto repremands him, The doctor says that he can go home, he takes Juan Alberto and Elena into the hall to talk to them. Juanito is trying to hear, leans too far out of the bed, falls to the floor, taking some of the monitors with him. They rush back into the room, Juan Alberto picks up his son. The doctor tells Juanito that he won't be able to walk for a while, that he can't say when he will be able to again. He tells him that he must be careful to do what he is told, that he has some damage that will heal, but that he has to be careful. The doctor leaves, Juan Alberto puts Juanito back into the bed, and he leaves. Juanito asks Elena to come over to him. She comes and sits on the edge of the bed. (What does he ask her?)

     Gustavo is talking to Cristine, he is saying that there is a lot of work at the office. He asks about Jimena, she tells him that she wants to see the young man, Ernesto, Gustavo is upset.

     Juanito and Elena talk, he wants to know why everyone is so sad, she (being sad) can't tell him, but starts to cry while she talks to him. He makes a joke, she is laughing and crying at the same time. He asks her to help make his father less sad. Now she is really crying, they hold hands.

     Don Fermin and Luis Pablo talk, Don Fermin asks if he has seen Elena, Luis Pablo says no.

     Gustavo is upset that Jimena is having anything to do with Ernesto, scum that he is. Cristine continues to encourage him to let Jimena do her thing.

     Chelo remembers Adolfo chasing her around the room, shakes her head and smiles. Meanwhile, Adolfo is talking to himself about her.

     Night. Elena and Juan Alberto talk in Juanito's room, he is sleeping. Juan Alberto tells her that she is necessary to him, she says she feels the same.

     Don Fermin continues talking to Luis Pablo, who is about to leave when Ely comes in. Luis Pablo decides to stick around. She tells them about her debut as a model, they congratulate her.

     At the tavern, the boss is talking to Paco, who is making plans for Chelo, he says that Don Francisco Valensuela doesn't put up with such as her.

     Ely and Don Fermin continue, Luis Pablo is watching, enjoying the view.

     Morning at the hospital, a nurse tells Elena that they will be able to take the kid home soon.

     Jimena thanks her mother for sticking up for her with Gustavo,

     Luis Pablo is playing the guitar and thinking about Ely, and Elena. Oscar comes in, he is in a good mood, talking about Elena.

     Juan Alberto and Rufina talk, he leaves for the hospital.

     Adolfo talks to Chelo, tells her that they will soon be coming home from the hospital. Chelo is afraid, about the kid, and about court. He is about to leave, when the fat boss from the tavern barges in "Hola Chelo!". He wants her to go back to work. Adolfo says that she doesn't work for him any more. They get into a shouting match (I think Adolfo wins), Gordo leaves. Chelo breaks down, crys leaning on Adolfo's shoulder.

     Ernesto's door bell rings, he opens the door, it is Jimena. She plants a kiss on him, says that her parents approve of them. She is moving in!

     Chelo is crying about lies, Adolfo tries to comfort her.

     Juan Alberto comes into Juanito's room. all is getting ready for his homecoming.

     Ernesto tries to cool Jimena's ardor, finally boots her out into the hallway. (She should get a clue from this.)

     Talita and a friend come to the apartments, she sees Curly sitting on the steps, crying. (Her hair looks good). Talita asks what is wrong, she says the gang doesn't like her to be feminine. (But I do.)

     Rebeca and Ernesto talk, she is delivering a tirade about how horible it will be with the detested Elena around. Ernesto says he may be able to do something about that.

     Adolfo comes to Juanito's room, tells Elena that he has been to her home, that Chelo is fine. Juan Alberto suggests that Elena get something to eat. She leaves. He asks Adolfo about Elena's home, Adolfo says it is fine.

     Ernesto is helping Rebeca get that last hair into place, she is still muttering about Elena. She looks into the mirror, says she is ready, lets go. He says no, he has a plan, a plan for Elena.

     Elena is in the cafeteria, having breakfast. She finishes, leaves the hospital, just as Ernesto leaves his mother off at the door. He sees Elena, runs over to her and catches her by the arm.

 

Day 30 - Juanito actually comes home. Author: Ben (---) Date:   09-09-03 18:26 PDT

     Elena is in the cafeteria, having breakfast. She finishes, leaves the hospital, just as Ernesto leaves his mother off at the door. He sees Elena, runs over to her and catches her by the arm. She tries to shrug him off, to turn away, but he won't let her. He tells her how pleased he is to see her, how much he has missed her. He doesn't listen to her claims to have not missed him a bit, but tries to get her to go into the cafeteria with him to catch up. She asks him to please leave her alone.

     Rebeca arrives in Juanito's room, loud an cheerfull. Juan Alberto goes over to her, asks her to not disturb Juanito, who is sleeping. Adolfo tells Juan Alberto that he will see him tomorrow, and leaves. Rebeca says goodbye, he ignores her. She asks Juan Alberto what is up with Adolfo, does he understand him? Juan Alberto says no.

     Ernesto continues to try to persuade Elena, they are standing in the hospital driveway, where Adolfo sees them as he leaves the hospital. Ernesto says to please listen to him, Elena tells Ernesto she has to go, he says no, don't go. she asks why shouldn't she go, he says that he loves her, she should understand that. She says that she feels nothing for him (Adolfo hears all of this while he waits for the attendant to bring his car). He asks her to come home with him, she laughs in his face. He is most persistant, she is most reluctant.

     Curly is in tears, sitting on the steps at the apartments, telling her new frind Talita that her old friends don't like her as a girl. Ely comes by, Talita introduces Ely to her, we learn that her name is Recita. Ely wants to know what is the matter, Talita tells her that Recita's friends have been mean to her.

     Rebeca is talking to Juanito, manhandling him, actually. She is tidying his sheets, smoothing his hair, touching his face, and he is trying to push her hands away (at this point, he should resolve to learn karate or aikido at the first opportunity). She finally gets both of her hands in one of hers, and uses the other to take liberties with his hair. He calls for help, Juan Alberto comes over "Please, mama", and gets her to back off. She walks away a bit, then turns to Juanito with a big smile, and says "Little darling, your mother will soon be here for you". Juanito and Juan Alberto both look at her in horror.

     Ernesto continues to try to convince Elena that he loves her, that she should love him. She tells him that there is nothing between them, that there never has been, that there never will be. He takes her face in both hands, trying to soothe her. She pushes his hands away, tells him that she will never, ever, feel anything for him. She finally is able to walk away. Ernesto watches her walk away, and laughs to himself.

     Luis Pablo and Oscar talk, Oscar wants to know who Luis Pablo likes. He suggests several names (Elena is one) but Luis Pablo says no to each. Luis Pablo gives Oscar some money, sends him off, Oscar comes back, says who? Luis Pablo says Aurorita.

     Rebeca and Juan Alberto are in Juanito's room, talking. She tells him that Ernensto came back with her, Juan Alberto seems upset that he is back. She tells him to be nicer to his brother. Elena comes in, says a few words to Juanito, who wants something. She goes back into the hall, Juan Alberto follows here, finds her crying. He wants to know what is wrong, she says nothing, but continues to cry. A nurse comes up, says that doctor Perez wants to talk to them. Juan Alberto goes to tell Rebeca.

     Talita and Ely are talking to Recita, cheering her up. Oscar comes by, stands and watches (he wants to talk to Talita, perhaps). Recita leaves, then Oscar, then Talita, leaving Ely alone. Luis Pablo walks up, they exchange a meaningful glance, but no words.

     In the doctor's office, Elena and Juan Alberto are being told some of the things they will need to know to care for a paralized Juanito. The doctor gives Juan Alberto a book of instructions, they look at it.

     Ely talks to Luis Pablo a bit. Talita comes up, says hi. Ely tells Luis Pablo that they are going shopping, he asks if she would like a companion. The three of them leave together.

     Jimena comes down a flight of stairs, sees a friend talking on a phone. She goes over, then away, the friend follows. They talk, Ernesto's name comes up, Jimena starts to cry.

     Gustavo is leaving for work (at least, he is carrying a briefcase). Crintina wants to know when he will be back, he isn't sure. He leaves muttering.

     While Juan Alberto and Elena are talking to the doctor, he is left in Rebeca's care. He wants to know where is papa and Elena are, she doesn't know. They get into an argument (she seems to be of the "I'm bigger, therefor I am right" school of childrearing. And, just look at Ernesto (and perhaps Juan Alberto) to see what a fine job she does teaching respect, honor, and kindness). As they argue, he wants Elena now, she can't wait for Silvia's supposed imminent arrival, Juan Alberto comes in, followed by the doctor, then Elena. The doctor asks Juanito if he is content, he can go home now. Juanito is most pleased, he wants to see Jupi. The doctor tells him that señorita Elena has some information about his care, some bothersome but necessary exercises. Juanito says that he will do what he has to. The doctor says goodbye, Juanito wants to shake his hand, which they do. Everyone is in a good mood.

     Ely, Talita, and Luis Pablo are walking back from their shopping trip. Only one bag of goodies, so they are apparently not serious shoppers. They meet Guero, who is happy to see Ely, but less so to see Luis Pablo. The two guys get into a bit of a war of words, Ely doesn't want them fighting over her, so she leads Luis Pablo away. After they leave, Guero mutters to himself about Luis Pablo's future.

     Ernesto and Lalo talk, about Elena, and the fact that Juan Alberto doesn't know about her past. Ernesto is quite intrigued with the direction life has turned, he has knowlege that could generate some power.

     Juanito is in his own bed, Elena is asking why he eats next to nothing, he answers that he's not hungry. In hopes of cheering him up, she asks if he would like Jupi, he says yes, she goes to get the dog.

     Lalo and Ernesto continue. Ernesto says that Elena will never marry Juan Alberto. Lalo says that Juan Alberto wouldn't marry his brothers girlfriend, Erensto says "Exactly".

     Larry and Moe are squabbling about something, pushing one another around. Thank heaven that Larry is the only one who is shirtless, I don't think I could stand it if Moe were to reveal all that bulk. Guero comes in, wants to know what the problem is.

     At the apartment, all three Carvajal girls are talking, Chelo wants to know if the kid got home OK, Elena says that he did come home, but he is pretty miserable. Talita wants to know if he will be OK, Elena doesn't know.

     Don Fermin is sketching Luis Pablo while they talk. Don Fermin is interested in Luis Pablo's love life. Luis Pablo is troubled by Elena, but he is also troubled by Ely (it must be the initial two letters he has a weakness for).

     Guero has a pistol. A 45 caliber, colt military automatic, in bright metal. Apparently, he is buying it from Larry, since he gives Larry money, and then starts waving it around.

     Chelo is asking Elena what is troubling her, as Elena is sitting up in her bed, unable to sleep. Elena doesn't want to say, but Chelo tells her that sisters are supposed to tell one another secrets. Elena tells her that she saw (or was seen) by Ernesto today, that he wants her, that she wants nothing to do with him

     Simona shows up in Rebeca's room, Rebeca is surprised. Simona tells her that she knows many things that Rebeca wants to know, Rebeca asks about what, Simona replies señorita Elena. Simona is talking in her best, most serious sounding, voice of doom, and Rebeca seems a bit put off by it, but they do talk. About Elena, about Ernesto. Apparently Simona knows something about them. Rebeca tells her to not do anything without her approval. Simona is glaring at her through lowered brows, the scene remindes me of the kind where an apprentice magician calls up a daemon from the underworld, and discovers that he can't control it.

     Chelo asks what Ernesto was doing at the hospital, Elena doesn't know, but she doesn't think he will bother her any more.

     Guero is playing with his toy, talking about what to do with it (he apparently has plans). The others don't seem to trust him a lot, but agree with what he is saying (after all, he has the gun).

     Simona continues her dire warnings, Rebeca continues to be off-put. Rebeca wants to know why she is there, since it is known that she caused Juanito's injury. Simona says it wasn't her fault, that it was the houses fault.

     Morning, and Juanito is sitting up in bed, picking up his useless leg and dropping it on the matress. Adolfo comes in, watches him for a moment, and comes around with a cheerful good morning. Juanito asks him to cover his legs with a blanket, he does. A servant comes in, carrying a breakfast tray. Juanito isn't interested, and doesn't much like her. He says to take it away, Adolfo says that she should wait for señorita Elena. She takes the tray and leaves.

     Elena is at the apartment, talking to Chelo while she waits for transportation. Chelo wants to know about the book she has, it is the exercises and such for care of Juanito. The chauffeur from Juan Alberto arrives, Elena leaves with him.

     Juan Alberto, in his office, asks Adolfo if he has seen Juanito this morning, Adolfo says yes. He says that Juanito is a little unhappy, Juan Alberto says that that is understandable. Adolfo says that Juanito may need some help, that he won't accept things from anyone other than Elena. Juan Alberto indicates that he knows that, but he doesn't know what to do about it. They head off to the judgeshop.

     Rufina is talking to Rebeca, asking her what is the trouble (Rebeca is sitting sideways on a chair, hiding her face against its back. She is upset that Silvia is not here to take care of her son, she wants to know who is here today. Rufina tells her señorita Elena is with Juanito, and then Rufina leaves.

     Jimena is telling her mother that Ernesto wouldn't let her in, there is a lot of 'no se', which is noticed and remarked upon by Cristina.

     Elena is in Juanito's room, cheering him up. He is sitting on the couch, he asks where Jupi is. She tells him something I didn't understand (Help?), she goes to a bookshelf to get him a book. While her back is turned, he tries to stand up, falls on his face. She comes running back, helps him back to the couch, and just holds him for a bit.

     Ely and Aurorita are having breakfast. Ely is dressed for work (blue mini skirt and jacket, white top showing just enough cleavage), she finishes breakfast, leaves. Don Fermin and Luis Pablo are talking by the entryway, when she goes by, Luis Pablo asks if she would like company, she says that she would be delighted. They head off together. Don Fermin is pleased.

     Rebeca is sitting on her bed, telephone in hand, muttering about how she can't get connected to Ernesto.

     Lalo is playing pool with Ernesto, they talk about Jimena. Mr Mustache comes in, inviting Ernesto to play cards. Lalo tries to descretely shake his head no, but Ernesto says OK, the sucker heads back to the table.

     Rebeca comes into Juanito's room, he is down. She tries to intice him with food, he says he has no appetite, she tells him that tomorrow he can have chocolate, and candy, and... And he says that he doesn't want anything. He says it quite forcefully, in fact. Rebeca turns to go, and almost runs into Elena, who has been standing behind her for heaven only knows how long. Rebeca seems to think that Juanito's mood is Elena's fault.

     Luis Pablo and Ely are walking along the street, having a fine time.

     Elena is fluffing Juanito's pillows, Rebeca pulls her away with a "Por Favor!" and starts fluffing pillows her way, which involves manhandling Juanito out of the way, and banging his head against the headboard a couple of times. No malace, just clumsy. After all, Rebeca is of an age to be a grandmother, (if Ernesto would ever make one of her grandchildren 'official', that is). But I digress While Juanito is being manhandled, Juan Alberto comes in, wants to know what is being done to his son. Rebeca is so upset, the poor child has no mother to take care of him. Juan Alberto has to raise his voice to get her to stop, which upsets Juanito. Juan Alberto is wiping his eyes, but Juanito just doesn't understand.

     Gustavo is talking to Cristine wanting to know the story about Ernesto. She says that he wants some sort of negotiation, he wants to know what he is talking about.

     Ernesto is playing cards, he is still able to lose with a striaght face.

     Don Fermin is showing Ely an empty apartment, she thinks it is a little plain, but could be fixed up pretty nice.

     Aurorita is reading the cards for Lumara, she asks about Luis Pablo, Aurorita says she should consider him a friend.

     Elena comes by Juan Alberto's office on the way out, she tells him she will be a little late tomorrow, as she has to do something for her sister, Juan Alberto says that he understands. On her way out, Elena runs into Rebeca. Elena tries to smooth things over, but Rebeca isn't hearing it. She does, hoever, point out how much better things will be for Juanito when his mother returns.

     Adolfo is talking to Chelo about her court case. He says he has to leave, but instead they walk closer together. He kisses her hands, and is just a silly millimeter away from planting one on her lips when Taleta comes in and interrupts. He leaves, it takes a couple of minutes for Chelo to see the humor of the situation. But then, she thinks it is as funny as Talita does.

     Rebeca tells Ernesto that something has to be done about Elena, and that Simona has some information that will help.

     Juan Alberto looks in on Juanito, adjusts his blanket, and sits beside him. He leans over and kisses the kid on the forehead.

     Ernesto wants to know what Rebeca and Simona are plotting. He points out to her that Simona hates Elena, and that she isn't too rational.

     Elena and Chelo are talking, both are smiling and happy, so Chelo must have just told Elena about the almost kiss with Adolfo. Elena says that is very good. Chelo asks Elena to promise that she won't try to influence Juan Alberto, or to go to court with her tomorrow, Elena says no, she wants to go. She says that if she can influence Juan Alberto, she will.

    

DAYS 31-35:

Day 31 - Chelo's day in court  Author: Ben (---)  Date:   09-10-03 14:46 PDT

     Chelo asks Elena to promise that she won't try to influence Juan Alberto, or to go to court with her tomorrow, Elena says no, she wants to go. She says that if she can influence Juan Alberto, she will.

     Ernesto asks Rebeca to please cool it with Elena and let him handle it.

     Luis Pablo and Ely enjoy the evening in the garden at the apartments. They are talking, the subject of Luis Pablo's lady friends comes up, Ely asks about Elena. He tells her that there is nothing there, that he is looking for another (she smiles). After a bit more, they call it an evening, go to their respective apartments.

     Elena, sitting in the dark at the apartment, remembers Ernesto at the hospital parking lot, and Juan Alberto thanking her for being there in the hospital

     Juan Alberto is talking to himeself. Actually he is talking to Elena, but she isn't there.

     Morning, Juan Alberto is in his office, he isn't looking forward to this day.

     Niether is Chelo, she is talking to Elena, and trying to work up courage to go to court. Elena wants to go with her, Chelo says that if she needs someone, there is Talita, Aurorita, Ely, others.

     Luis Pablo, Oscar, and Talita are helping Ely fix up her apartment, they are painting the walls an ugly orangish mustard yellow color (the designer said that it will look better when it drys). Don Fermin comes in, he has goodies. They mob him for food.

     Ernesto's door bell rings, it is Jimena. She asks whats up, he says whats up what. She says whats up with you, you say you love me, then make me go away. He doesn't want to have this conversation.

     Juanito is in bed (of course), the young servant has been rattling things and woke him. He asks for Elena, she tells him that she isn't here yet, he asks for his father, he is at work. She makes him laugh, he tells her she is nice and funny. He asks her a question, she goes to the other side of the room, comes back with a bright blue portable toilet, which she will hold for him...

     The chauffeur arrives to take Elena to work, she and Chelo and Aurorita and Adolfo are waiting by the entryway. Elena asks Chelo if she is sure that she doesn't want her to go with her, she says no, you go to work. Elena hugs Chelo, and gets into the limo, Aurorita hugs Chelo, and Chelo and Adolfo go to his car.

     Ernesto asks Jimena why she thinks he doesn't love her, he is being his most charming. Apparently, he asks her to move in, at least she gets real happy, calls him my love. He tells her that he adores her. They kiss.

     Aurorita gets a visit from Pauli (I guess it should be spelled Poli?) He comes in like he belongs there, looks at (and remarks about) all the stuff hanging on the walls, on the wallpaper, on Aurorita. Finally, she figures out that he is looking for Ely,

     The young servant (I think she is Casimara, at least that is what I will call her now) is entertaining Juanito, telling a story, complete with large gestures and voice changes. She has him in stiches, he is laughing so hard. She is creeping around the room when Elena comes in. (Yes, Juanito calls her Casimara). She greets Elena, and leaves. Elena sits by Juanito, asks how he is, he says very good,

     Poli comes into Ely's apartment, he plays hand signals with Don Fermin for a bit, then Ely comes in and introduces him to everyont. He gets along famously with Don Fermin, he and Ely leave.

     Jimena is having her way with Ernesto, they have matching pajamas. He is distracted.

     At court, Adolfo leaves Chelo in the waiting room, as he leaves, Paco and crew arrive, as does the boss from the tavern.

     In New York, Silvia comes in from shopping, Auntie is disapproving, Silvia is thinking only of Larry. The phone rings, Auntie answers. She tells Silvia it is Rebeca, Silvia runs away. Auntie takes the call. Rebeca tells her that Juanito is crippled. She says to tell Silvia, and hangs up.

     Poli and Ely are in the garden, talking about Luis Pablo, among other things. They leave in great spirits.

     Elena says a short prayer for Chelo, asking His help at the court.

     Juan Alberto enters the room, it is a large room with a few desks scattered around. There is a counter separating the desks from the people who are waiting. Juan Alberto's desk is backed up against a brick wall. He asks that Chelo be brought in, the clerk calls for Consuelo Carvahjal. Juan Alberto tells her what is going on, asks if she is ready. She is nervous, but ready. She looks out at Paco, who is staring at her to intimidate. Juan Alberto asks details, what did she do at the tavern, she says she was a cigarette girl. She says that Francisco Valensuela wanted more than one should expect of a cigarette girl. Juan Alberto asks how long did this go on, she says for three or four months. He asks if she cooperated with señor Valensuela, she says that she refused. He asks what happened on the day of the arrest, she tells him, with much arm waving and gestureing (you can see when she gets to the 'He hit me over the head with a bottle' part. By this time, she is in tears, and, in the waiting area, Paco is quite amused.

     Juan Alberto goes back to his desk, gets an evidence envelope. He shows Chelo the bracelet, asks if it is hers. She says no, it belongs to her sister, she starts to tell how she came to have it, he says thats ok, he asks if she has anything more to say, she says no.

     The clerk calls Carlos Domingues, who is the bartender. Juan Alberto asks what happened that night, he tells about Paco's attack on Chelo, about how he tried to help her, but couldn't get to her in time. He tells about finding her with blood running down her face.

     Elena is talking to Juanito, they are sitting on his couch. He is a little down, but not as bad as yesterday. He talks about his father, about Jupi. She talks to him, cheers him up (but saddens her).

     The bartender continues his testimony. He says that Chelo is a good girl. He becomes emotional, standing and pointing at Paco, who responds as any bully would, causing a tiny bit up upset in the court (but there are several beefy guys with nightsticks around to calm them). Every one seated, Juan Alberto dismisses him. The clerk calls for Francisco Valensuela, who comes around the counter, with a big smile, wanting to shake hands with the judge, who tells him to take a seat. Juan Alberto asks him to tell his story, he says the others were all telling lies. He sys that Chelo was enticing him, she was trying to use him. Chelo, in the waiting area can here all of this, has a look of incredulity on her face as she shakes her head. Paco continues with his story of how he is misused by these women at the tavern.

     Paco is excused, and the clerk calls for the boss, who goes around presenting business cards to everyone, including the uniformed police standing in the corners. Juan Alberto declines a card. Juan Alberto asks about Chelo, he tells her that the scandal is all her fault. Juan Alberto asks if she is a woman of low morals, he says yes. He tells a long, sad story that has Chelo wincing.

     At the big house, Jaime is visiting Rebeca, who is telling her that she can't get in touch with Silvia, who is a bad mother.

     Rufina is talking to Elena and Juanito, who has Jupi on the bed with him.

     Jimena calls home, tells Cristine that she is with Ernesto now.

     Juan Alberto continues questioning the big bossman, who is telling lies about Chelo. Adolfo come in and calls him on it.

     Elena is at the table, supposedly reading the book on care of Juanito, but talkin gto herself instead. She goes over to Juanito, adjusts cushions, and sits on the bed beside him.

     Bossman is arguing with Adolfo, who tells about when bossman came to Chelo's place while he was there. Bossman tells Juan Alberto that Adolfo is lying, Juan Alberto says that he doubts is, as Adolfo is his legal secretary.

     Bossman changes his story, says that he was just saying what Paco had payed him to. Paco jumps up to protest. Juan Alberto comes to his decision, in favor of Chelo, and finds señor Rojo (bossman) and señor Valensuela to have lied, to have given false testimony, and to have been the agressors. Juan Alberto leaves the room. Paco and his bodyguards, and bossman Rojo also leave (why? shouldn't they be off to jail now?)

     Aurorita is admiring Ely's new room, Ely says it is all thanks to Luas Pablo.

     Jaime is leaving, Rebeca is still telling her how bad things are, with Elena and Juan Alberto both being incompetent.

     Don Fermin and Aurorita talk. She does a drumroll on the table while he makes his wig vanish. Even with no hair, he still flirts.

     Elena is manipulating Juanito's legs, he doesn't like it, she tell him it is important. He throws a bit of a tantrum

     Guero comes by the gang's apartment (the gang is just Larry and Moe, now).

     Elena is walking across the parlor at the big house, when Chelo comes in, all smiles. They embrace. Juan Alberto and Adolfo come in and congratulate her. All are great friends. Adolfo offers Chelo a ride home, they leave. Juan Alberto returns Elena's bracelet, placing it around her wrist with his own hands. He has trouble letting go of her hand, until one of his finds her face, guides her into a kiss.

     At the playground, Guero and the gang are waiting in ambush for Luis Pablo and Ely. They come walking by, Guero shoots Luis Pablo.

 

Day 32 - Mary Davis fills in for the absent Ben  Author: Mary Davis (---)  Date:   09-11-03 20:31 PDT

     ...I thought some of you might want a re-cap of Wed night/Thursday morning episode.

Ben, you are welcome to add your own comments.

     Chelo, Adolfo and Juan Alberto arrive at the big house and give Elena the good news. Chelo and Adolfo go up to visit Juanito and leave JA and Elena alone. JA gives Elena back her bracelet. He apologizes for everything that he's put her through. They share a kiss.

     Luis Pablo is shot in the arm by Guero. He's taken to the Red Cross hospital. A little boy goes to tell Don Fermin about the shooting.

     Back at the big house, Chelo, Adolfo JA and Elena are entertaining Juanito. Juanito wants Elena to stay the night.

     Guero, Larry and Moe are under belief that they killed Luis Pablo. LP's injury is not life threatening. Ely is there to comfort him.

     Juan Alberto tells Elena to stay in Sylvia's old room. Elena is hesitant, but in the end, gives in. JA is really insistent.

     Ernesto stands up Jimena and her family. (Tell me, are there really some young women as stupid as Jimena?)

     The vecindad is all worried about Luis Pablo. No one really knows about his condition. Guero puts on a pretty good charade about his concern for Luis Pablo. He seems really hurt that people would even suspect him of being the shooter.

     Luis Pablo, Ely, Don Fermin and LP's brother leave the hospital.

     Juanito is very happy that Elena is going to spend the night. Elena is in the ex-wife's old room, all the while going over in her head all the things that the witch Simona told her about the refined and elegant Silvia.

     Juan Alberto informs Rebecca that Elena will be staying in Sylvia's room and she is quite put off about it. She thinks that Elena should be staying in the servant's quarters instead of the most luxurious room in the house. She really believes that Elena is after Juan Alberto's fortune and that if she doesn't watch herself, Elena could possibly kick her out of the house.

     Ernesto is again in need of money. He's going to nag his mother into getting more money from Juan Alberto.

     Chelo tells Aurorita about the charges being dropped, all thanks to Adolfo. Aurorita asks Chelo if she loves Adolfo. Chelo asks, What is it to love?

     At the big house, Elena and Juan Alberto cannot sleep. They share a few kisses. He tells her that he loves her and that he doesn't want her to leave his side. She feels uneasy and goes back inside.

     Jimena goes to see Ernesto at his apartment. He takes a peek through the peep hole to see who it is and then ignores her. (I don't know about you, but the incessant ringing of the doorbell and knocking would have driven me crazy.)

     In the morning, at the big house, Juan Alberto again asks Elena to marry him. She tells him she doesn't deserve him, that she is "muy poca cosa." She says that she will think about it and he seems to be a bit frustrated with her hesitation (a cold shower might help.)

     Lumara comes to visit Luis Pablo, wanting to take care of him. She sits beside him on the couch and pulls him into a kiss when she sees that Ely has entered the room (LP doesn't see her). Ely had come by to check up on him, but she leaves when she sees that LP isn't exactly fighting off Lumara. (LP pushes Lumara away, telling her to leave him, but as I said, he sure didn't seem to mind the kiss.)

     Juan Alberto tells Juanito that he has asked Elena to marry him and Juanito is very happy that Elena is going to be his mother.

     In New York, Sylvia comes back from her trip, upset that Larry is not going to marry her. Her aunt tells her that Juanito is paralyzed. Sylvia looks concerned.

     Poli tells Ely that she is now a model, with an exclusive contract, and he invites her to lunch to celebrate her new contract.

     Lumara brings Luis Pablo some chicken soup. He is touched by her actions and tells her how much he appreciates it. After she leaves, he wonders why Ely has not come to see him.

     The maid Rufina is cleaning out Sylvia's old room, clothes and other stuff. Rufina wants to take down Sylvia's portrait, but Elena says no. That Juanito cannot forget his mother.

     Rebecca is complaining to Ernesto over breakfast at the club. She goes on and on about Elena and how she is taking over the house, that she seems to have a lot of power. Elena tells his mother that Juan Alberto will not marry Elena. That he will make sure that he opens JA's eyes about marrying someone like Elena. (He sure is sure of himself, that JA would actually consider anything he might have to say.)

     Ely confesses to Poli that she cares a great deal for Luis Pablo and that she was overcome with jealousy when she saw Lumara kissing LP. She says she doesn't want to see him ever again.

     Larry and Moe are glad that Guero did not kill Luis Pablo. Guero decides that he will disappear for a while.

(This was a funny exchange.)

Guero: Tell everybody that I had to to out of town, to Hong Kong.

Larry: Hong Kong, isn't that around Yucatan?

Guero: Don't be stupid. It's in the United States.

     Chelo also has thoughts of being "muy poca cosa" for Adolfo. What is it with these Carvajal sisters?

     Juan Alberto asks Adolfo about his feelings for Chelo. Adolfo says he will see her later and ask her to tell him how she feels about him. Ernesto arrives and it is obvious that Adolfo cannot stand to be around him and he leaves.

     Ernesto asks Juan Alberto about his feelings for Elena. JA tells him that he and Elena love each other and that he has asked her to marry him.

 

Day 33 - A happy time  Author: Ben Date:   09-15-03 23:22 PDT

     Ernesto asks Juan Alberto about his feelings for Elena. JA tells him that he and Elena love each other and that he has asked her to marry him. Ernesto thinks that he will have to do something about that.

    Elena is remembering Juan Alberto's proposal, how he said that he loved her and wanted her to be his wife. She feels inadaquate, but that it is somehow her fault.

    Juan ALberto and Ernesto continue to talk, Ernest has a 'I know something you don't know' smile on his face. He laughs and says that he would like to meet the person who would be the new wife.

    At the apartments, the recording executive has come to talk to Luis Pablo, there seems to be an opportunity for Luis Pablo to make a lot of money.

    Silvia is talking to Auntie about Juanito, her crippled child. Silvia does a fine act of blaming herself, when the phone rings. Silvia expects it to be Larry, but it is Rebeca. She tells Rebeca that she has heard about Juanito, and she is very depressed about it. (Auntie rolls her eyes at that). Rebeca tells her there is a threat where Juan Alberto is concerned.

    Juanito is eating lunch, Juan Alberto and Elena are watching, when Casimara comes in wanting to know if he needs anyting else. They tell her no, then Juan Alberto and Elena leave. Juanito tells Casimara that Elena will be his mother, she asks him if he wants her to be, he says yes.

    Silvia continues her conversation with Rebeca. She hangs up, and tells Auntie that tomorrow she will be going to Mexico.

    Ely tells Aurorita about her exclusive contract modeling. She is quite excited about it, as is Aurorita.

    Talita and Chelo talk about things at the big house, Talita asks about Juanito, Chelo tells her that he is doing OK, but that there is a problem with señora Rebeca, who is very hateful.

    Juan Alberto and Adolfo are talking abut tomorrow's cases, Adolfo says he will be a bit late in the morning, as he is going to see Chelo. He leaves for the day.

    Don Fermin is having coffee with Aurorita and Ely, he asks Ely if she has seen Luis Pablo lately. She says that she hasn't had time, he tells her that Luis Pablo is alone, she tells him that from what she has seen, Luis Pablo is anything but lonely. Aurorita changes the subject of conversation.

    In New York, Silvia is packing, and talking to Auntie about Juanito's accident, and how she will be getting more money from Juan Alberto. Auntie tells her not to take Juan Alberto for granted.

    Adolfo is sitting in the parlor when Elena comes down the stairs saying that she is ready. Rebeca comes in, complaining about traffic. She sees Elena, asks about Juanito. Elena tells her that he is with his papa, Rebeca heads up the stairs. Adolfo and Elena leave,

    Ely tells Aurorita and Don Fermin about Lumara, they tell her that she is not Luis Pablo's current girl.

    Curly, back in gang garb, comes back to Larry and Moe's place. (I'm sorry to see this, she could be a nice girl if she gave herself a chance) She says someone at her home is ill.

    Ernesto and Lalo talk about Elena, Ernesto seems uncomfortable.

    Silvia is still packing, saying how she will take control of Juan Alberto. She says that Juanito isn't important, Auntie looks disturbed.

    Adolfo and Elena in his car, talking about Juan ALberto, she doesn't feel comfortable staying in the room of his wife. Adolfo explains to her that Juan Alberto would be happy to have her stay there.

    Curly asks about Guero, they tell her that he is laying low. She asks about Luis Pablo, they are uncomfortable.

    Rebeca is back on her high horse with Juan Alberto, she goes in to see Juanito, has to say something about Elena.

    At the tavern, the boss is on the phome when Paco comes in, with his thugs.

    Elena and Adolfo continue to talk. He says that he can help her, she says no, he can't help her. She says that Juan Alberto's house was for his first wife, that she (Elena) is too ordinary for him. Adolfo says no, she is not ordinary, that she makes Juan Alberto very happy. He tells her that she is not like Silvia, that Juan Alberto lives for Elena. She doesn't believe him, but he is quite persuasive.

    Paco tells the bossman that he didn't like how things turned out in court. He really didn't like it. The bossman starts to sweat.

    Elena and Adolfo are in her apartment, Elena hasn't heard about Luis Pablo. Talita and Elena leave to see him, leaving Adolfo and Chelo alone.

    Luis Pablo is talking to Don Fermin about Ely, Don Fermin tells him he has too many women, that he is in a position of power. As they talk, Elena and Talita come in. Elena is very concerned about Luis Pablo. Oscar and Talita leave, as does Don Fermin, leaving Elena alone with hem.

    At the tavern, the bossman is trying to talk Paco out of doing anything rash. He attempts to put a hand on Paco's shoulder, but one of the thugs slaps his hand away. Paco says that he has always wanted his own tavern.

    Juan Alberto is reading to Juanito, who is very sleepy. Juanito asks if Silvia is coming here, Juan Alberto doesn't know. Juanito is worried about his mother showing up, Juan Alberto tries to reassure him.

    Elena asks Luis Pablo what happened, they are talking when Ely comes in, she sees Elena and turns to leave. Luis Pablo stops her, introduces her to Elena. Ely doesn't want to intrude, they both reassure her that she isn't intruding.

    Adolfo and Chelo finally get that first kiss, she says that he loves her. They kiss again.

    Talita and Oscar are talking, she doesn't want to be his girlfriend any mor